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Release: Edinburgh - v. 0.6

Hi,

There you go:

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Hope you'll enjoy it. Feedback is appreciated.

Release: Edinburgh - v. 0.6

Comments

That was great. Your renders look so much sharper, and I noticed a ton of 3d assets I've never seen before - to the point where I was a bit disappointed when Edward cleaned up his new office, as it looked awesome and lived in prior to that. Alice's dialog was maybe a bit more twee/cutesy, but gave her more of a personality/voice. Brown and his interactions with everyone came off extremely likeable and lowkey funny. I also liked Edward seesawing between righteous and ashamed, both in terms of dialog and his expressions. My only criticism would be the end point feeling abrupt like Dhaka1's. Not a big deal or anything, but a minute letdown after Dhaka2's triumph montage. Love your work and hope you'll see dividends after these consistent releases.

Joe Pressa

Hey, guys. Thank you for taking your time to write the feedback. I appreciate it.


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