That was great. Your renders look so much sharper, and I noticed a ton of 3d assets I've never seen before - to the point where I was a bit disappointed when Edward cleaned up his new office, as it looked awesome and lived in prior to that.
Alice's dialog was maybe a bit more twee/cutesy, but gave her more of a personality/voice.
Brown and his interactions with everyone came off extremely likeable and lowkey funny.
I also liked Edward seesawing between righteous and ashamed, both in terms of dialog and his expressions.
My only criticism would be the end point feeling abrupt like Dhaka1's. Not a big deal or anything, but a minute letdown after Dhaka2's triumph montage.
Love your work and hope you'll see dividends after these consistent releases.
Joe Pressa
2023-11-04 03:23:15 +0000 UTC
Hey, guys. Thank you for taking your time to write the feedback. I appreciate it.