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Added 2022-09-16 13:00:08 +0000 UTCwhelp that comic crumbled..
LOL! I'm thankful for every one of you who stayed with me on this story and enjoyed the story as much as I have. I know it was mostly just fanservice for white rose fans lol. I know this was my first comic, so there were some little plot holes and issues. Hopefully the next comic will be more refined and solid.
Anyway, so far I gotta think of what my next comic will be! I'm not comfortable enough yet to make an oc story comic, so what are some animes or games whatever xd that you guys might wanna see me make a comic of?
Right now I'm thinking maybe Komi or Nagatoro. Maybe just short comics? Longer comics? what do you guys think? Let me know!
I need to finish these commissions before I start on the next comic
Comments
Here's hoping. RWBY as a show is wasted potential, but comics like this prove it's entirely possible to do something interesting with it. Seriously, it was a lot of fun, mate. Don't suppose we could convince you to make an aftermath picture, showing how fat the girls got after the cake turned to blubber? Also, +1 vote for Nagatoro.
Scryer
2022-09-19 12:01:46 +0000 UTC1 vote for Nagatoro comic
Lachlan
2022-09-16 21:05:30 +0000 UTCI think this was a very good story! I think it definitely has room to a 2nd installment and even more a sequel in some sort. I think Komi seems the most interesting out of the two that you have mentioned. Great job!
jay
2022-09-16 18:31:02 +0000 UTCI loved it and it was a great start! Canβt wait to see you steadily improve over timeπ
Johnny
2022-09-16 17:05:19 +0000 UTCGreat job! Just wondering how big Weiss is going to look after she digests that plus I'm suprised Ruby isn't being a big spoon so she can feel that belly up. Looking forward to your next comic!
Ark_Raptor
2022-09-16 15:50:01 +0000 UTCGreat job Main! Canβt wait to see what you do next!
Ogix
2022-09-16 14:41:27 +0000 UTCPerhaps one day...;)
TheMainTummy
2022-09-16 14:05:49 +0000 UTCWhat a lovely end to an amazing comic. Only thing more I could have asked for is finding out what happened to Yang and Blake after their cake binge. Probably cuddling together somewhere sleeping off their food comas. Any way we could get a one-off cake binge aftermath for the other 3 characters?
Cryochronos
2022-09-16 13:45:49 +0000 UTCThe fact that you made a comic is a big achievement of itself. While Iβm always up for more RWBY stuff, Iβd love to see something with Arcane characters.
Glovin
2022-09-16 13:36:20 +0000 UTCAs enjoyable as this was, I'm a little disappointed, purely due to not seeing how big the other girls got. Did Yang expand with the rest of her teammates? Did Blake eat until her big belly burst? Weiss is going to get FAT, but where will the weight go once she's not about to explode? Sorry, don't actually mean to complain, but any chance this story could continue in the future?
Scryer
2022-09-16 13:11:22 +0000 UTCI was the best comic π
One-chan
2022-09-16 13:01:20 +0000 UTC
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