Miach Familia Premise Chapter 1
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Glad that you like it! Everyone will see how this version of Bell grows in time, no worries!
Kairomaru
2025-01-25 16:41:33 +0000 UTCI Love this so much I hope you keep doing this one maybe one day he could heal missing limbs that would be cool
Dragon Fire
2025-01-25 16:22:15 +0000 UTCThat's very true lol my favorite of the Shinto deities that youve done so far has to be Inari with sarutahiko being a close second even tho it have more chapters I'm even more curious about the takemikazuchi premise because of bell and Mikoto lol
AegaeonRC
2025-01-14 01:10:56 +0000 UTCShinto Deities are so many and varied that it's easy to find one to use for a premise, usually! Glad you enjoy all of the premises so much!
Kairomaru
2025-01-14 01:07:30 +0000 UTCI literally go through and re read all of them and I'll be like God I just want more lol like an addict
AegaeonRC
2025-01-14 01:06:15 +0000 UTCWell they've all been good my favorites have been the Shinto deities so far lol
AegaeonRC
2025-01-14 01:05:10 +0000 UTCI used every 'good' Deity until I didn't have any more left and then I used other Deities and made them characters in Danmachi. That's just how many ideas I had over time.
Kairomaru
2025-01-14 01:03:04 +0000 UTCSo in other words your collecting hestia friends familias like infinity stones lol but can't wait for more lol
AegaeonRC
2025-01-14 00:48:58 +0000 UTCYes. There's been one planned out for quite a while already.
Kairomaru
2025-01-14 00:44:52 +0000 UTCIs there gonna be a takemikazuchi familia premise lol
AegaeonRC
2025-01-14 00:39:49 +0000 UTCYes, Bell showing off what his Magic can do to the Loki Familia will most definitely have an effect, later down the line! As for Da Bean, you will see in time!
Kairomaru
2025-01-10 02:31:44 +0000 UTCGlad you loved it! Yes, Naaza the sleepy puppy is very adorable! Have ALL of the cavities and diabeetus! Leigheas is equal to Airmid's 'Dia Fratel' spell in healing/cure power, so, of course, it's busted as hell! Kek! Yes, Bell will be an inventive little Mage in the future!
Kairomaru
2025-01-10 02:30:12 +0000 UTCAlright, finally managed to read the chapter. And I loved it. Naaza is ridiculously adorable, and I was afraid her and Bell together was gonna give me cavities. Also, Bell’s Leigheas is fucking busted and I can’t wait for him to learn the different forms. The Fire based one especially is gonna set Orario on fire when it gets out what he can do with it. Liked the Minotaur scene as well and I’m looking forward to how things play out with Loki Familia now that they’ve seen Bell’s magic. As a minor curiosity, is Lili with them again in this premise? Figured I’d ask since she’s not in the harem.
Kaminoryu
2025-01-10 02:27:38 +0000 UTCPffft! Kek!
Kairomaru
2025-01-09 14:47:19 +0000 UTCBell must get the ultimate spell Shillelagh which he will use to bonk the very heavens
Codeninja676 (Brian)
2025-01-09 14:39:48 +0000 UTCComparing Bell to Alfia, the original Monstrous Talent, just proves my point xD not that it's a bad thing in any way lol. And yeah, I get what you were going for, it just seemed like it was phrased backwards.
Cha0sniper
2025-01-09 12:22:10 +0000 UTCI'm sure the beat readers will have all of that pointed out in their corrections.
Kairomaru
2025-01-09 05:31:16 +0000 UTCBell is handy in multiple areas, yes! Leigheas is on par with Airmid Teasanare's 'Dia Fratel' spell when it comes to healing, curing, and restoring stamina! Bell also has rather large Mind reserves to make great use out of it! Bell will need a new staff now that his first one is broken...maybe something that can focus Magic power and amplify it a bit, on top of being used as a melee weapon? A true Mage Bonk STICC! lol Doggy style is the preferred position for Chienthropes! ...probably. Kek!
Kairomaru
2025-01-09 05:30:28 +0000 UTCCorrection: Bell barley (threw) himself backwards in time.
Christian Jeffress
2025-01-09 05:27:03 +0000 UTC“If you are feeling disheartened, that you are somehow not enough, set your heart ablaze. Dry your eyes and look ahead” - Kyojuro Rengoku "Jack of all trades, master of none, but oftentimes better than a master of one" Definitely, a really entertaining opening chapter, and a very powerful healing spell, and I wonder how it would affect Naaza? I also really like the use of a staff this time around, and I wonder if he can get one that has some protrusions around each end, to help concentrate the force of his blow a little bit. Also, him using the staff makes me think about what would happen if he had Sun Wukong as his deity lol. I wonder if Naaza likes doggy style?… ba da tsss. Lol
Christian Jeffress
2025-01-09 05:23:37 +0000 UTCI guess I should've said that growing your stats is exponential process as it consistently takes more and more Excelia to increase your strength, just like any EXP system in an RPG. He's talented to an extent, yes. But his impressive magical feats are just the result of having a fuck ton of Mind to pour into his spells. The Magic stat is a boost to effectiveness and damage when using a spell, but Mind is the actual measure of how many times and to what strength a person can use their Magic. Bell (much like his Aunt Alfia) just so happens to be a very rare outlier as he has incredibly large Mind reserves without being from the 'Magic Affinity' Elf race. Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Kairomaru
2025-01-08 20:25:54 +0000 UTC"Excelia gain is an exponential process" I believe you mean it's a logarithmic process, as it starts off quick and then slows down over time. Actual chapter comment time: this may not be Monstrous Talent Bell, but apparently he's still monstrously talented xD great chapter!
Cha0sniper
2025-01-08 12:02:36 +0000 UTCKyros is part of the Secretary of Defense Tier; they each get to choose a story to update (or get a pilot chapter for) each Month because they donate $100 per month to our group. It's the highest Tier and locked to having only 3 members at any time. I'm glad that you like all of the stories though!
Kairomaru
2025-01-08 10:19:06 +0000 UTCAh. That makes since. Still though, another story huh. This Kyros must be cheating at this point. How many stories did he win at this point. Because it’s starting to get ridiculous😅. Not that I’m complaining too much though since these stories rock.
Adrian Rodriguez
2025-01-08 10:16:29 +0000 UTCShe went after some of the other Minotaurs. Even in Canon it was said that the large horde of Minotaurs split up and went charging up the Floors, some splitting off on every Floor between 17 and 5.
Kairomaru
2025-01-08 10:13:42 +0000 UTCI see that aiz wasn’t here for some reason. Mysterious…
Adrian Rodriguez
2025-01-08 10:11:36 +0000 UTCTHERE HE IS!!! GET HIM!!! Glad you liked it so much, Kyros! Hope it was everything you thought it would be based on my premise doc.
Kairomaru
2025-01-08 01:29:03 +0000 UTCI am 100% to blame for this and I don't regret it in the slightest. This was GLORIOUS!!!
Kyros_Vasera
2025-01-08 01:15:45 +0000 UTCWait, Riveria ain't in the Loki Premise lineup? That's crazy, I thought if anywhere, it'd have been there For Freya, I reckon the issue is probably finding out how to make her accept being part of the harem despite her wanting to be his only one in a somewhat believeable way. Which is probably one of the harder things to do, even if it is possible. Unlikely to be due to her boss status. OEBD and whatever's in the lower levels of the Dungeon are plenty stimulation for growth
Jack Blaze
2025-01-07 23:41:17 +0000 UTCOh no, it's not Bell's Healing Magic that does that...how that comes about would be a spoiler.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 23:39:39 +0000 UTCNot much of a story for Bell to be in literally the strongest Familia and getting into death matches every day.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 23:38:43 +0000 UTCWhy are you against freya? does her almost certain Final boss status mean making her actuality on bells side remove too much tension?
Racenrise
2025-01-07 23:28:01 +0000 UTCHuh… given the chant i thought it might become that strong but thats kind of a spoiler.
Racenrise
2025-01-07 23:26:25 +0000 UTCBehold the power of STICC!!! Kek!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 22:57:50 +0000 UTCBell will learn to beat people into health with his wellness stick.
zorro99
2025-01-07 22:53:49 +0000 UTCGlad you like the harem line up! Sleepy Puppy and Bi-Elf Disaster are both adorable, yes! No, I will likely never use Freya. Riveria is a maybe on a future Premise that I have some vague plans for right now. Happy that you enjoyed it!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 22:14:42 +0000 UTCThank you! Glad you liked it!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 22:13:35 +0000 UTCThey are definitely a thing.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 22:13:26 +0000 UTCMonster on the surface lay eggs, from what little we know about them. It's a cloning process, rather than mating.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 22:13:18 +0000 UTCAlready I’m loving the harem lineup! I love seeing Naaza and Lefiya I can’t wait to see more moments with them. Just out of curiosity have you ever thought about having stories with Riveria or Freya in the harem? Overall a fantastic start I hope the next chapter gets voted in soon!
Hayden Stuart
2025-01-07 21:57:07 +0000 UTCGreat chapter
striker James
2025-01-07 21:50:49 +0000 UTCI hope bell and naaza become a thing
striker James
2025-01-07 21:50:45 +0000 UTCI know this is odd question but I member monsters on surface can breed monsters in dungeon can't so in Canon damachi does that mean that they grow dick or pussy after escaping dungeon and what about Xeonos in Canon they sometimes sold to be used can they bredd???
striker James
2025-01-07 21:48:43 +0000 UTCI always love the first chapters, I just hate that so many of them stay that way lol
David Zimmerle
2025-01-07 21:44:33 +0000 UTCYou REALLY love this! That makes me happy! But I DO NOT control the Muse! lol
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 21:02:34 +0000 UTCI think it should be added to main rotation. We should have a vote on that lol. Also, tell your muse to keep going with this one lol.
Nick K
2025-01-07 20:59:14 +0000 UTCGot to Style all over the enemy!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:58:50 +0000 UTCOh, most assuredly! *Cackles in plans* Miach: "What's that father? My Familia's ability to restore flesh and blood limbs makes your prosthetic business completely unnecessary? Hmm, seems like a Skill Issue! Sucks to suck!" And that STILL ties back into the Irish Mythology of Dian Cecht, Miach, and Airmid too!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:58:11 +0000 UTCYeah, you guys get the chapters even before the Beta Readers, so small mistakes make it into the chapters here.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:55:54 +0000 UTCGlad you like it so much! But everything is voted upon, unless it's Main Rotation, or if my Muse just WON'T shut up about it. Kek!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:55:17 +0000 UTCYes, all of the blame to Kyros Vasera! He knows what he's doing! Happy you liked the first chapter!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:54:36 +0000 UTCAll the blame upon Kyros Vasera! Kek! Glad you enjoyed the new pilot chapter though!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:54:02 +0000 UTCIf I was isekaied into Final Fantasy, I'd want to be a Red Mage. The undeniably sweet outfit, Swords, Black and White Magic, catastrophic rizz. Red mages really have it all.
meh
2025-01-07 20:53:46 +0000 UTCThis is why I have Beta Readers before I post these on the free sites. You guys get the updates even before they do!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:53:20 +0000 UTCYeah...I know. BLAME KYROS VASERA!!! He keeps using his Tier Reward to get out new pilot chapters! One of the already in-progress stories will have Bell develop a very similar spell to one of his Aunt Alfia's spells in the future!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:52:39 +0000 UTCRed Mage Bell for the win! Healing Magic, Attack Magic, Melee, Style, Rizz...what more can you want? Kek! Yeah, I could see Miach taking in Bell if Hestia wasn't around, figuring out Bell's skill set took far longer though! Heh! Miach and Bell, both oblivious playboys! lol
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:49:30 +0000 UTCHappy you enjoyed it so much! Yep, Bell with uber powerful Healing/Cure Magic is fairly unique! More will come in time, just as with all the other stories.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:47:45 +0000 UTCGlad you liked it! More will come in time, just like for all of the stories!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:46:53 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it! Never saw that Series, but I think someone told me the basic premise of it before. Yeah, I don't ever recall seeing a Healing Bell either. So this is definitely unique, or it is for me.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:45:45 +0000 UTCHmm, that would be funny. lol
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 20:45:09 +0000 UTCi wonder if dian cecht is gonna get pissed about his son having a skill comparable to dia saint and undercutting him and stealing customers
DALucifer
2025-01-07 20:33:09 +0000 UTCExcelia gain is an exponential process and it’s why almost half of all Adventurers bever make it past Level 1 spelling error bever -> never
DALucifer
2025-01-07 20:32:02 +0000 UTCCan we just get more of this story without voting? It should immediately be a regular.
Nick K
2025-01-07 19:51:40 +0000 UTCDamn you Kyros Vasera, you keep baiting Kairomaru into taunting me with amazing first chapters.
David Zimmerle
2025-01-07 17:18:09 +0000 UTCHeaps of blame upon Kyros! How dare he make you drop a new premise! Here I am feening for more chapters of your other stories and then this drops giving me something new to anxiously wait for. Seriously though, great chapter Kai looking forward to see how it progresses
Kirito Beater
2025-01-07 17:05:31 +0000 UTCThis was the first thing I thought of for Bell in this one due to Miach being a healer.
Kirito Beater
2025-01-07 16:58:22 +0000 UTCNaaza glaring at Miach and muttering about how it's all his fault.
Matlef
2025-01-07 15:42:56 +0000 UTCfic the roof, I think you mean fix
nigh13shade
2025-01-07 15:14:35 +0000 UTCI love new stories, but damn you got quite a few Danmachi stories in the works. I don't suppose you have one with Bell having the same magic as his aunt Alfia in that mix somewhere?
Nelm_Knight
2025-01-07 14:41:12 +0000 UTCExcellent. I have a deep love for Red Mages, so I hope this gets more chapters. Miach is also someone who would probably have taken Bell if Hestia wasn't around, he's a good bean. And he's already taking after new dad by being an unintentional playboy. Zeus would be so proud!
meh
2025-01-07 14:34:37 +0000 UTCI think this one is by far my most favorite premise from you, Bell with powerful healing magic is really cool! Already can't wait for another chapter, really good work!!
Jirsaacek
2025-01-07 13:12:19 +0000 UTCThis pilot was fantastic. Loved every single second of reading this. Cant wait for more.
Racenrise
2025-01-07 13:03:56 +0000 UTCI don't know if you've seen it, but there's an anime series called: The Wrong Way to Use Healing Magic. I think you could put Bell on that path, believe me it's very funny It's very rare to see a healing Bell, I think almost no one uses it. Thanks for making this effort Thanks for a new story, I'll wait for the next chapter with impatience
savitar
2025-01-07 12:58:28 +0000 UTCSince Bell is going to be the Red Mage, I kinda want to see Naaza be the one to buy him the outfit thinking it would cute. Then slowly regretting it over time as Bell becomes an unintentional playboy like Miach.
Viezor
2025-01-07 10:34:02 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it so much!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 09:01:58 +0000 UTCKeep it up dude love this premise
E TheRandom
2025-01-07 09:00:45 +0000 UTCBell's women agreeing to team up just to keep the REST of the women in Orario away from their oblivious Chick Magnet. Kek!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 08:57:22 +0000 UTCExactly! I figure his natural charisma and just hanging around Miach will make him as smooth as a Red Mage ought to be. So it's just the clothes he is lacking now.
Matlef
2025-01-07 08:55:17 +0000 UTCGlad I finally hit everything on your checklist! Kek! Red Mage Style? You mean like a sweet as hell red coat and hat?
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 08:48:53 +0000 UTCHappy you liked it! Yep, Red Mage Bell, a bit of Healing, a bit of Melee, a bit of Attack Magic! Either you're getting healed if you're good or obliterated if you're bad!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 08:44:26 +0000 UTCBell using something other than a sword/dagger/anime sword as his main weapon? Bell healing? Bell being good at non adventuring things and making money not just by delving into the dungeon? Red mage Bell?! This is like all the things i have been hoping to see in a premise at once! Now i just have to hope that Bell gets the proper Red Mage style.
Matlef
2025-01-07 08:43:23 +0000 UTCThe incantation is in reference to the myth of Dian Cecht , Miach, and Airmid in Irish Mythology.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 08:43:06 +0000 UTCGlad you adore it! Red Mage Bell indeed! Healing, Fire, (Third Magic), Melee! He's got something for everybody! Lefiya and Ryu loving is incoming! Woo!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 08:42:26 +0000 UTCThat was a great chapter! I loved that you made Bell a healer and a fighter
Tarek Kanaan
2025-01-07 08:39:33 +0000 UTCFather failed? Cause Dian failed cause he’s a disgrace, or cause dad couldn’t get a cure for mom?
Blank
2025-01-07 08:38:50 +0000 UTCI utterly adore this. Red Mage Bell! Now all he needs is some variable sword or support magic! Also, Lefiya interest is a major plus. And Ryuu! The best elfs, ahoy!
MultiverseCosms
2025-01-07 08:38:46 +0000 UTCKek! Happy you enjoyed it and are looking forward to more!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 08:22:00 +0000 UTCOnce more from the top… But for real though, it’s really cool, can wait to see more in the future.👍
Git_Gud Elliott77
2025-01-07 08:09:56 +0000 UTCGlad you like it so much! Naaza is so very lovable!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 08:07:25 +0000 UTCThis was beautiful. Naaza is underrated. Good work.
Shane Deal
2025-01-07 08:05:43 +0000 UTCGlad that you enjoyed it! Bell/Lefiya can be very cute, yes! I have not, but I may try to look into it in the future.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 08:03:20 +0000 UTCLove how this story started so far, especially since it’s one of the Bell/Lefiya premises. I will die on the hill that this pairing is underrated and that so is Lefiya, even if it’s not necessarily romantic I feel like she has amazing chemistry with Bell. Also, have you ever considered adding the option to open a file in the post to read the story? Cause on the Patreon App it’s very easy to accidentally swipe while trying to scroll down the story and close the post(did it while reading this chapter actually lol).
Guipa__
2025-01-07 08:00:40 +0000 UTCThank you for the compliments! They're greatly appreciated! Yes, we're spoiling our adorable sleepy puppy Naaza this time around!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 07:53:21 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it so much! Yeah, the Miach Familia is super chill! Bell is gonna keep his promise and get their Familia out of debt, all the while making the adorable sleepy puppy Naaza happy as he slowly helps her overcome her trauma.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 07:52:23 +0000 UTCYou never miss, my good sir. Always have such good stories that make it hard to wait for the next chapter. Also I’m glad Naaza is getting spotlight in this one.
Callum Moxey
2025-01-07 07:51:38 +0000 UTCI loved the chapter so much!! I love the Miach Familia and Miach himself, so seeing Bell with him and Naaza is awesome! Their interaction and cuteness they have is so wholesome!
Diego Cantu
2025-01-07 07:50:10 +0000 UTCRed Mage that can do a bit of everything was an interesting concept, so I decided to roll with it for this premise! Glad you enjoyed it and are looking forward to more!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 07:39:31 +0000 UTCI love the red mage from ffxiv, it's one of my favorite jobs. I honestly can't wait for the next update to see how Bell expands on his abilities.
Benjamin Bravo
2025-01-07 07:29:19 +0000 UTCNah, I never got into that Series.
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 07:20:04 +0000 UTCYeah, I feel bad that some of them take so long to update. More blame upon Kyros Vasera! lol
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 07:19:48 +0000 UTCHmmm. Have you thought of making an Edens Zero story?
Zero Shadow
2025-01-07 07:16:31 +0000 UTCLol have fun on your break then
AegaeonRC
2025-01-07 07:13:53 +0000 UTCIt's frustrating. I want more chapters of the others but the new ones are always so good.
Ben knight
2025-01-07 07:09:04 +0000 UTCKEK!!!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 07:08:12 +0000 UTCI'm sure Kyros Vasera will be happy to hear that! Kek! After this monster of a chapter that took me almost 3 days to write, I think I'm gonna take a day or two for a break, bro. lol
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 07:07:49 +0000 UTCOnore Kyros Vasera!
jben96
2025-01-07 07:06:16 +0000 UTCI'm glad they used their reward for this. The chapter is amazing but now I want more of it lmao
AegaeonRC
2025-01-07 06:58:04 +0000 UTCYup
Julian Casarez
2025-01-07 06:58:02 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it! Should be a fun story as we continue!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 06:57:17 +0000 UTCSLEEPY PUPPY!!!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 06:56:00 +0000 UTCYeah and I can't wait to see him paired up with the sleepy puppy
Julian Casarez
2025-01-07 06:54:54 +0000 UTCI love this!! Can’t wait to see more!
Dr_SCP1313
2025-01-07 06:52:48 +0000 UTC20,000 words in 25 minutes?! IMPOSSIBLE!!! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! This is a Mage Bell story (a first for me, actually) so it'll be fun!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 06:49:17 +0000 UTCGreat chapter loved it and I can't wait for the next update
Julian Casarez
2025-01-07 06:45:13 +0000 UTCLol
swift arrow
2025-01-07 06:43:10 +0000 UTCIt's ALL Secretary of Defense Kyros Vasera's fault! He used his Tier Reward for this!
Kairomaru
2025-01-07 06:41:20 +0000 UTCYou can't escape the muse can't you lol
swift arrow
2025-01-07 06:21:44 +0000 UTC
