Bastet Familia Premise Chapter 2
Added 2023-12-21 05:38:40 +0000 UTCThis won OVERWHELMINGLY in the Polls! So, I gue
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Indeed, it has begun! Kek!
Kairomaru
2024-04-05 18:06:13 +0000 UTC*Rubs hands together in glee* So the Fall of the Ishtar Familia has begun...
The Foreign Traveler
2024-04-05 11:58:32 +0000 UTCGlad that you like it! Don't worry, Bell will keep all of his Amazon women happy!
Kairomaru
2024-01-31 21:23:14 +0000 UTCI hope this gets a 3rd chapter very soon. I also hope Tiona and Tione can join the group date. They won't be left out.
Nick K
2024-01-31 15:54:36 +0000 UTCGlad that you enjoy it and are looking forward to it!
Kairomaru
2024-01-19 03:25:57 +0000 UTCJust reread and got to day I hope this continues with the rest of the danmachi premise stories. Lol
Kirito Beater
2024-01-19 03:11:46 +0000 UTCThank you very much! I'm happy that you enjoyed it! Radiant Magic just kinda fit with this Premise, so I'm glad it worked out. Ishtar is very much 'BITCH' in Danmachi, so I'm glad that I was able to capture her character so accurately! lol Freya Familia is gonna just go ahead and nip this problem in the bud...PERMANENTLY.
Kairomaru
2023-12-27 04:55:08 +0000 UTCHappy that you enjoyed the chapter so much! Yep, this Bell is a bit more confident, and his Amazon Fever makes him want to get close to the lovely ladies that're showing him so much attention! All of the Fluffy Fuggles for Bell and Bastet! Things are definitely about to go down in Orario! And, for once, it's NOT Bell's fault! Kek!
Kairomaru
2023-12-27 04:51:39 +0000 UTCHello Kai, gotta say that I love how you wrote this chapter. The Radiant magic is a nice touch that I very much enjoy, I am excited to see how it is used going forward. I feel like you really captured just how awful Ishtar is in just two paragraphs which I feel is pretty impressive. I wonder how the Freya Familia will handle this? Regardless, keep up the good work!
Kz3838
2023-12-27 04:43:58 +0000 UTCHehe... whoops. Completely lost track of time with this. As you may (or may not) know, I've been pretty engaged playing P4 Golden nowadays, and I spend less time reading fics. Actually forgot I had this page open :haha: But here we are now! And as usual, you dropped an excellent new chapter! I like how Bell is continually trying to get stronger by trying to beat his Dungeon crawling record from the previous day. It especially helps when he constantly finds himself being attacked by large groups of monsters at once. Yay! Bell and Bastet are finally a couple! And they had quite the steamy night! :Lenny: Bell finally gets his second Magic (and it seems he very much likes those overreactions when he sees something new :Kekius:)! This will certainly help him with range now. Those pesky bugs won't be a problem anymore! :EvilLuffy: As someone who knows as little about DanMachi as I do, all I got was Ishtar is planning something very bad, Freya and her Familia are going to have to take care of it. Bell gets to meet up with some lovely Amazons he knows, and even helps Ikumi buy some rare spices! Such a nice gesture definitely earned some brownie points with them! I do like that Bell is just perceptive enough to notice something wrong with all of them and willing to find out what. Then he gets to learn that not all Familias are as wonderful as his own... And then he goes and breaks the Charm on Aisha! Blew their minds there! No doubt this will influence where they decide to go when Ishtar's Familia eventually disbands! I also admire how much more assertive Bell is in this story and how willing he is to accept advances from women and even reciprocate them. It seems like he just always knows exactly what to say to make their hearts race! :Kekius: Very much enjoyed that ending! I thought the group would actually run into Tiona and Tione during their outing, but this was much funnier! :OchaPffft: And Ais being adorably confused was... well, adorable! Can't wait for you to come back to this with another chapter!
sparkydragon98
2023-12-27 00:29:11 +0000 UTC
