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Ganesha Familia Premise Chapter 1

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Ardee is a sweet bean! Much love for her!

Kairomaru

ARDEE! Glad to see her alive and breathing! I always felt bad for Shakti for losing her Little Sister during Orario's Dark Age but she's alive and well in your story! And Bell's joining of Ganesha's Familia was just as boisterous as I thought it'd be! "I AM GANESHA!" indeed!

The Foreign Traveler

KEK!!! Ah, Ganesha is such a memelord.

Kairomaru

It better! lol

Kairomaru

I have one gripe and that is that you should haveended the chapter with a hearty "I AM GANESHA!!!"

Mark Edward Wyndham Tiller

It is said that the dungeon itself moves its walls to get out of the way of Bell's weapon.

Nep

Kek!

Kairomaru

I can't help but think of kamen rider Zeronos: "Let me tell you this from the start, I am very strong!"

jben96

Glad you liked it so much! Physical Beast Bell is going to be breaking through anything in his way to becoming a Hero! Not to mention attracting the attention and affection of multiple ladies! Hehehe~

Kairomaru

Absolutely love this new opening chapter, the martial arts practices is absolutely cool, and his new sword is incredibly bad ass. Really love his rate of growth, as well as his incredible strength that is already showing in the story. Really excited to see where the story goes as this was already fantastically fun.

Christian Jeffress

I imagine Tiona's eyes will be sparkling at seeing Banry­ū for the first time! lol

Kairomaru

There will be 3 Amazons, no worries there! But WHICH three Amazons you'll find out later! Kek! Yes, Bell will need ALL of his Endurance! lol

Kairomaru

I can't wait for bell to meet the amazon sister, their reaction to his weapon is something that I'm waiting for

nigh13shade

Kai once again you have knocked it out of the park. Seriously you have single-handedly reignited my interest in Danmachi. I don't know who will end up with Bell in this story but I really hope the Vice-Captain Ilta Farna is one of them. If you go your usual route and include the Hiryute sisters, my god a triple shot of Amazon fever. Good thing Bell's endurance is steadily increasing.

Viezor

I did some research into Ganesha before writing this, so yeah, that was intentional! Wait until you see Bell's Growth Hack Skill and what I named it! lol Ganesha: "I AM GANESHA!!! And I am so happy that you're already so attached to me and the Familia, Bell!" *Manly tears*

Kairomaru

That’s good to hear. A friend of mine pointed out to me how it’s even more ridiculous how she’s still a lvl 5 when Ais and Ryuu both became 4s in AR and shot up 2 levels before she went up one. Either way I went back and read this again and I’m not sure if it was intended but when it said that Ganesha rewards those that “push past the obstacles of life” I thought that was a great nod to Ganesha’s aspect as a “Remover of Obstacles.” Lastly as soon as you mentioned Banryu I immediately thought of Inuyasha and the possible adventures in the future for Usagikotsu.

Erebus13

Glad you're enjoying it! Yes, Physical Beast Bell will indeed be seeing Soma Familia in the future! Bell: "I'm gonna go pay them a... What do you call it?" Lili: "A visit?" Bell: A beating! Yeah, that's it! I'm gonna go pay them a beating!"

Kairomaru

Things will definitely be different here and there going forward! And if Bell keeps working out and taking his shirt off all the time, I think Ardee and Shakti will both be a little distracted! Hehehe~ Yeah, no worries about Level Ups! I despise how Omori doesn't seem to let characters that clearly deserve a Level Up to do so. Look forward, in ALL of my Premises, to other characters Leveling Up when they earn it!

Kairomaru

Well, it can't be in the Main Rotation since those positions are full. But we'll see how it goes in the future! Glad you like Ganesha Familia Bell so much!

Kairomaru

You're welcome and I'm happy that you like them!

Kairomaru

Well, it's a good thing that it's July now and the Main Rotation will start back up again! Kek! Glad you liked the Premise, it'll definitely be different from quite a few of the others!

Kairomaru

Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, this Bell is gonna be STRONK!!!

Kairomaru

This story kicked ass. I’m liking it. Please keep it in main rotation. Your the only author that has bell in Ganesha family with your quality of writing.

Michael Turner

Ahh finally the story that gives a legitimate excuse to include Shakti as a main character, plus Ardee lives in it?! I’m sold 100%. I always loved Shakti’s design and personality which is a nice contrast to ol’ Ganesha. While I doubt Bell would be completely helpless against the first Minotaur I could still see him getting saved by Shakti and falling in love with his captain. Plus I can picture a funny scene of Bell watching Loki Familia getting chewed out by her for their stupidity with the Minotaurs. Hopefully Bell’s work ethic will inspire her to level up. It always seemed unfair that the 3 Loki execs and Shakti leveled up at the same time in Astrea Record but now the former are all 7s and she’s still lvl 5. While this story won’t get as much focus with all the other stories I will definitely be reading this right away as soon as it gets updated.

Erebus13

Awesome premise, I’m loving Bell as a physical beast…..can we have a moment of silence for what will probably be happening to the Soma Familia in the future?

Nikovius

Thanks for the chapter I really enjoy your danmachi stories

Aeonstorm

Ahhhh damn it Kai i need some hp mha. Nah only joking great premise looking forward to seeing how the story changes

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Dang danmachi really does have you in a headlock but Another great chapter and another fun premise and very different from all your others which have focused on bells powerful magic I look forward to seeing this one progress

dudeitschill

Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Bell's Physical Stats will eventually be: YES. lol

Kairomaru

Thank you for the great chapter, love that you are using the Ganesha Familia they aren't used often so it's nice to see. Bell becoming a physical beast is awesome, for some reason I'm picturing Fate Heracles status in his future. Keep up the good work!

Kz3838

You're welcome! I'll keep doing my best!

Kairomaru

Well looks like I’ll be subscribed for a long time then lol. Thanks for always producing such quality work.

David Zimmerle

Yes, yes, you are! lol Glad you liked it, Tristan!

Kairomaru

*ahem* IAMGANESHA

Tristan McKenzie O'Meara

I do plan to write up the various Danmachi Premises! One at a time, if possible, so that I never have to worry about getting overwhelmed. But that should provide entertainment for years and years to come! Not to mention that I'm trying to break away from Canon here and there a bit more to put my own unique spin on things with each Premise!

Kairomaru

I mean this in the nicest possible way but you continue to be the worst person for giving us all these awesome premises that likely won’t go full length.

David Zimmerle

Oh yeah, Bell is the hard worker here! He's literally exerting himself so much that his Endurance stat is keeping pace with his other stats even without him taking damage! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Kairomaru

Glad to hear that!

Kairomaru

As per usual I enjoyed this premise quite a lot especially cause it’s off the beaten path. Although I do see Bell having an easier time here which would have served to stunt his growth if he wasn’t so motivated! So ig the extra support will only boost him higher

KaddyD

You made an already great day amazing ❤️

KaddyD