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One Piece Plot Bunny #5!

Here we go again friends and fans! Anot

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Maybe later in the future. Or perhaps when I eventually (probably) make this into a fic someday.

Kairomaru

Please make a part 2 for this, even if only in a plot bunny, it's just that good and I want to see(read) the hancock sisters reaction to Luffy and Uta. Excellent work brother! 👍

Alexander

I hope we get more plot bunnies out of you in this Year of the Rabbit

El Pirato

Meat...obviously.

Kairomaru

if it wasn't broken, what do you think Luffy would wish for? I know it wouldn't be to become Pirate King, because that would kill the adventure side of it

El Pirato

thanx for reminding me DX, Oh well

El Pirato

............Dude. Seriously. This is why you got kicked out of the Discord in the first place. Never mention that shit ever again. That is fucking disgusting.

Tristan McKenzie O'Meara

Yes

Kairomaru

Still no... hate her character.

Kairomaru

Would a Wish Wish fruit be a broken idea?

El Pirato

I meant Linlin as in the younger version of her, not the Big Mom we all have come to know

El Pirato

Hell no... that's gross.

Kairomaru

Do you have a plot bunny of Luffy going back in time and having an accidental relationship with Linlin?

El Pirato

Imagine Uta vs the Kuja

El Pirato

In the anime, the baby has Makino's hair color, if not darker (closer to black) so...it seems less like Shanks's child to me.

Kairomaru

I don't think so especially when Oda himself has hinted at it by saying it's most likely "That Mans" or something like that and I believe there were hints that he's thrown in at times in the manga not to mention the hair color

Jeremie

It would be rather appropriate, huh? lol

Kairomaru

I'm happy that you enjoyed it so much!

Kairomaru

For some reason I can totally see Uta singing "hoist the colors" at marineford before the battle

charger2040

Man, what I would give for this to become a story

Sunwardust 646

Given the timeline including the timeskip...the baby we see in Canon COULD actually be Luffy's child, considering everything that happened pre-timeskip is said to have only taken a few months according to Oda. The baby we see post timeskip could easily be over a year old, so Makino wasn't visibly pregnant when Luffy left, so that's +9 months from Canon start, then you have the 2-year timeskip starting before those 9 months are up, so that could realistically make the child born in the first six months of the timeskip, meaning after the timeskip the baby would be roughly 18 months old. Which fits with the baby we see in her arms post timeskip. Ergo...by the timeline in Canon, Makino's baby could legitimately be Luffy's.

Kairomaru

with Makino putting her hand over her stomach does that indicate you're gonna go against the popular theory and have Luffy be the baby's daddy instead of Shanks as everyone suspects? lol

Jeremie

Damn right it is broken Broken is love Broken is life 🤩 Just an idea think about it

darknexx97848

I recall it...but that was a broken ability iirc. Happy New Year to you as well!

Kairomaru

Merry Christmas and Happy New year BTW 😁

darknexx97848

Another great bunny kairo, I love the fact that you used Uta since the very beginning, question: do you know about the power "all fiction" (I think that was the name at least ) ? If yes have you ever thought of making a bunny, for weather one piece or my hero academia, using that power?

darknexx97848

Happy that you enjoyed it! Time Skips in Bunnies are just to show how things could play out in the future. They wouldn't really be part of the story itself.

Kairomaru

nice to see a good One Piece fic there's just been a severe lack of good ones lately and this one has a lot of great potential. Btw just one minor complaint and that's that you should warn before you do a time skip such as Luffy and Uta just starting to them suddenly being in Saobody

Jeremie

Right? So adorable! Must snuggle and give love!

Kairomaru

Thank you for the compliment! My Muse still has other ideas as well! Just roughly trying to recall all of them there are: 3 more Logia, 3 Paramecia, and at least one more Zoan/Mythical Zoan.

Kairomaru

KEK!!! So glad that you enjoyed this Bunny! Uta deserves ALL of the fluff and love! Must snuggle!

Kairomaru

Happy to hear that! Uta is adorable and needs love and snuggles!

Kairomaru

Nice, we need more uta fics in the crew

sebastian contreras acuña

So good to see a another chapter i hope to see more but with every of your idea you could make a story with each one of them.

MAEGHT Maxime

OH FUCK YES~! I always loved how Uta and Luffy complimented or suited one another ever since One Piece Red came out! Fuck, can you imagine that if Uta appeared in the same beginning as Luffy back when it all started... That would have brought out a whole new level of fanfare and shipping war, plus it would have different types of significant hits. I don't care what others say; I shipped Luta or Uffy! Bring out more fluff and smut, but fluff more!~

Joonsensei!

yessss i really love this fic and the fact you added uta to the mix is perfect

dadoo

I'm glad you liked it! It's a fun Fruit, that's for sure.

Kairomaru

One more !!! One more!!! Full story on the way please. Most one piece good stories are abandonned, it just loses on the most abandonned ones to Campione

Triton

Thank you so much! I'm happy that you liked it! It's a fun Devil Fruit, huh?

Kairomaru

This is soooo fucking Awesome Great Work.

GhostKingGengar

*Happy Kai Noises* Thank you very much for the praise! I'm glad you enjoyed this so much! Man, the One Piece Bunnies have fans and that makes me happy. Should have plenty of stories for a long time to come!

Kairomaru

Bro... bro...... BROOOOOOOOO, if the question is should you make this a full fic the answer I'd say is a resounding yes, the foundation you just layer is immaculate

Ant Franklin

Happy to hear that! It was a fun idea for a Devil Fruit!

Kairomaru

They're adorable together, yes! Glad you liked it!

Kairomaru

Doge Kek!

Kairomaru

This was great! Hope to see more

Branden Lord

Great chapter, like the idea of Uta and Luffy being together. Keep up the good work!

Kz3838

Much yes. Very fuffy. Such Uta. Wow

Tristan McKenzie O'Meara