Overlord Premise Chapter 1
Added 2022-12-06 04:05:00 +0000 UTCHey friends and fans! Kairomaru is brin
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I appreciate it, but this is the un-Beta-ed version, because my Patrons get everything first, even before my Betas get to see it and go over it for corrections. The Bets have already finished with this chapter, as well as Chapters 2 and 3 too.
Kairomaru
2023-04-09 06:22:39 +0000 UTCIt was a steady rhythm, just as it should be.She was a living being, so it was only natural. Missing space This confirmed for Momonga that friendly fire was indeed an active part of the world. Aura had genuinely seemed hesitant at first, and now was convinced that she could use her Skills on him. Unlike in YGGDRASIL were friendly fire was turned off. YGGDRASIL where friendly
Chichi son
2023-04-09 06:18:26 +0000 UTCYou're welcome! I'm happy that you enjoyed it so much! The first two chapters are longer than anything else that I've written, but the third is more manageable in length. I just wanted to get the basic lore and background information covered so that I could get to the changes that I wanted to make to the Series.
Kairomaru
2023-04-08 20:45:16 +0000 UTCThanks for the immensely entertaining and fun chapter, excited to read the next two chapters
Christian Jeffress
2023-04-08 18:47:42 +0000 UTCI'm glad you like it! Things will definitely change as we continue to move forward!
Kairomaru
2022-12-16 17:46:06 +0000 UTCThis is really good. I’m looking forward to the continuation of this story!
Bill Egghead
2022-12-16 09:25:40 +0000 UTCLater, sooner, far in the past, or way in the future, perhaps not at all? You'll have to wait and see!
Kairomaru
2022-12-08 17:39:16 +0000 UTCThis is super interesting, I’m guessing the kitsune guy will show up later? If so I really like it
Donald Bagwell
2022-12-08 16:31:38 +0000 UTC
