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Familia Myth: Journey to Hero Chapter 5

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>A female Adventurer of the Ganesha >Familia … gasped when she saw the other members >of her Familia all lying on the ground or against >something. They all looked completely out of it with >strange smiles on their faces. Sounds like Jack Nicholson’s Joker visited them!

Mad Hatter

Finally going the harem route. Kinda sad that Freya is going straight down the villain road. Before I found certain info from the latest novels. That Syr was my favorite character. And Syr/Bell is my favorite pairing. 2nd by Tiona/Bell and 3rd by Eina/Bell. But, Freya/Bell was on the list too. But, that pairing often isn't seen. Okay, onto the Xenos! YES! I really hope Bell gets the Tame skill then if its' canon to your story. I want Wiene to be his monster that he gains a friendship with! PLEASE! The Xenos were always my favorite addition to the story.

SHE Superheroine Encyclopedia

Glad you like it! Things will change as we continue going forward. I hope you'll enjoy the changes as they come!

Kairomaru

This story and Force of Souls are currently my favorite stories and I can't wait for the next chapter of both! I hope you keep up the good work and I can't wait to read what you come up with next!

Haseo187

According to Canon, Hephaestus strongly promotes a 'My Way is My Way' mentality amongst her Familia. All of the Smiths in her Familia are heavily encouraged to focus on their own methods and styles of Smithing. That's probably why Welf doesn't ask about it until much later in the LN's.

Kairomaru

You know what always struck me as odd that welf never asked to look at bell’s knife you know as a smith he would probably be interested in looking at other peoples work for inspiration especially if he found out that his goddess made the knife

Redpyramid

Glad I could make your day better! Look forward to future updates!

Kairomaru

Thank you for the lovely Chapter once again, made a rainy day all the better being stuck inside :)

I'm glad you enjoy it! Yeah, there are several little things that can be changed to make the story flow better. Not to mention, just outright preventing certain problems that wouldn't have been problems if anyone had thought about a solution for more than a minute.

Kairomaru

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the change! It makes more sense for Ouranos, the closest thing Orario has to a King, to be able to solve the Xenos problem by himself. Bell shouldn't be burdened by that mess that Canon put him through. He has enough to worry about with growing the Hestia Familia and working toward his goals of becoming the Strongest Adventurer and a Hero!

Kairomaru

Great chapter! This is the only fanfic I’ve read for this series and I can’t imagine there is a better one out there. I especially enjoy the small, logical tweaks you make that keep this story free and clear of the usual tropes that were in the original.

Clark Kent

Another fun chapter I like what you did with the Xenos it makes more sense and gives more freedoms to parts of the story

dudeitschill

Glad you like it! It seems to have quite a few fans already and that makes me happy!

Kairomaru

I love the new change and can’t wait for that talk and this my favorite story that you have written

Redpyramid

It could potentially work, but the risk of death is very high. Fighting in a Life and Death battle with a handicap is NOT advised.

Kairomaru

Great chapter!!! Just had a thought though what would happen if bell ignored his status updates for a week or two and allowed himself to fight at a handicap for longer periods of time would that make his status updates more impactful not just the delayed experience but the would he earn more experience fighting at a handicap I wonder?

John Balman

Glad you like it! If it becomes your favorite that just means I'm doing a good job!

Kairomaru

Indeed, she does. But good things happened too! And soon enough a certain someone appears!

Kairomaru

In terms of your stories I feel like this one is quickly becoming my favorite.

David Zimmerle

And thus, Freya starts her shenanigans.

Tristan McKenzie O'Meara