Familia Myth: Journey to Hero Chapter 1 (Danmachi Story)
Added 2021-10-05 18:48:37 +0000 UTCHello friends and fans, Kairomaru is br
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Some things will change and other will stay the same! But this Bell has much more proactive tendencies and you can bet that'll change the situation for the Hestia Familia much faster!
Kairomaru
2021-11-14 19:09:03 +0000 UTCI like it already and although this was only the first chappy, I would love to see him get stronger at an accelerated pace, he has a lot of catching up to do.
Dex
2021-11-14 19:00:57 +0000 UTCYeah, most fans didn't.
Kairomaru
2021-10-18 05:38:37 +0000 UTCThat's a very good reason right there thats for sure I really did not see that coming at all
Sebastian Pineda
2021-10-18 05:36:58 +0000 UTCHow far are you in the series? Are you Anime Only? There's a VERY important reason I didn't add Syr to the Harem and it's a major Spoiler.
Kairomaru
2021-10-18 05:05:02 +0000 UTCOut of curiosity what about syr
Sebastian Pineda
2021-10-18 00:21:21 +0000 UTCWill do! Glad you like it Triton!
Kairomaru
2021-10-09 16:05:52 +0000 UTCYessssss break canon, throw it away it should only be a guideline nothing more
Triton
2021-10-09 08:14:36 +0000 UTCI have a limit on Harem size that I stick to. Chigusa and Ouka are supposedly in a relationship in Canon iirc. Mikoto is in love with Takemikazuchi.
Kairomaru
2021-10-07 22:17:50 +0000 UTCRead it and had to go read the premise again and honestly am quite surprised you didn't have Mikito or chigusa in the harem but it's a great start to a awesome series thanks
DeadEyedKush
2021-10-07 22:13:37 +0000 UTCHappy to hear that! I'll do my best with this story too!
Kairomaru
2021-10-07 17:17:57 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it!
Kairomaru
2021-10-07 17:17:22 +0000 UTCHey, I really enjoyed this! I like Danmachi, and have read a lot of the light novels, but there were always a few things that bothered me. There really aren't many good fics on fanfic.net. I'm looking forward to what you've got in mind for this one. I hope it can be with my other favorites like Magma King and Logia Bros. Keep it up!
Middlemoe2
2021-10-07 09:16:48 +0000 UTCvery well written can't wait for more
Blizzard Burn
2021-10-07 09:15:17 +0000 UTCI wanted the first time to be more innocent since they're both virgins. But I know me, I'll make it way too steamy for virgins. You'll get your fix in the fic, don't you worry! Glad you liked it! I'm hoping that I lived up to the expectations of all the Patrons that voted for it!
Kairomaru
2021-10-07 02:15:21 +0000 UTCIt was alittle disappointing you didn’t write the lemon just because your really good at writing them it’s aways fun to read yours but this was still a very entertaining chapter and really shows the potential great story all of us who voted for this option we’re hoping for
dudeitschill
2021-10-07 02:10:35 +0000 UTCI changed the Harem talk to baby-talk/Demi-God info. My buddy Primordial Vortex said that it would be better to have the Demi-God aspect pointed out in the first chapter since it is a major deviation from the Canon Material.
Kairomaru
2021-10-06 19:58:31 +0000 UTCSo what changed? Also love that you're actually acknowledging the family dynamic of the Greek God's that is ignored or glossed over in the show!
John Balman
2021-10-06 19:51:19 +0000 UTCYeah, that was weird to me too. Like, everyone knows who Ais is, she's famous after all, but Bell basically went instant creepy stalker fanboy about it with how much he became obsessed with her.
Kairomaru
2021-10-06 17:26:24 +0000 UTCGlad I could provide some extra entertainment on your vacation!
Kairomaru
2021-10-06 17:25:19 +0000 UTCI like how you did the encounter with Ais, and that inspiring Bell to get stronger unlike in canon where he sort of becomes besotted with her and basically all his motivation revolves around Ais which is kinda creepy to me when I think about it because in canon Bell doesn't know anything about her.
Aeonstorm
2021-10-06 17:15:00 +0000 UTCI’m on vacation currently so I have been a little negligent on notifications, but this; this is a notification I’ll drop things for. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Tree
2021-10-06 15:49:51 +0000 UTCThank you, I'm glad you like it!
Kairomaru
2021-10-06 15:26:04 +0000 UTCI absolutely love it keep going my good man
Mark Edward Wyndham Tiller
2021-10-06 11:06:10 +0000 UTCNot at first, Hestia was only initially wary of it because she didn't understand it. It wasn't until Bell shot up so much like two or three Updates in a row that she truly started getting worried. I'm waiting for Level 2 before Hestia shares the Secret with Hephaestus. But that's not technically because of Liaris Freese, but because of what happens when Bell Levels up the first time. Hestia realizes she won't be able to protect Bell without support and so tells Hephaestus the secrets.
Kairomaru
2021-10-06 05:58:36 +0000 UTCHey will hestia tell Hephaestus abou bell skill when she vists with questions cause the way I see Hephaestus could be trusted with the secret, after all she from everything I have seen of her character she would not care about that unique skill heck she left welf transfer over to hestia’s familia when she needed help and he had pretty the skill that was a smiths wet dream it could give bell another ally and maybe introduce welf early
Redpyramid
2021-10-06 05:41:27 +0000 UTCThank you! Happy that you enjoyed it! Little changes in the beginning become big changes later!
Kairomaru
2021-10-06 02:14:49 +0000 UTCAwesome first chapter! I love how the subtle character differences are already resulting in some interesting situations.
Clark Kent
2021-10-06 02:12:04 +0000 UTCNope, just a thought in my head and a joke I liked in the Abridged.
Kairomaru
2021-10-06 01:08:35 +0000 UTCNice. Is this a preview of a soon to be chapter?
Pheonix774
2021-10-06 01:03:33 +0000 UTCThey'll bicker at Ganesha's Banquet of the Gods, yes. His Title is probably going to change. Hestia: "Bell! I got you a Title that's not a complete joke!" Bell: "What is it?" Hestia: "Well, that bitch Freya told the other Gods to make it 'cute' and like the fools they are, they wouldn't let go of the 'Rabbit' Schtick. I was able to get them off calling you 'Bunny' at least!" Bell: "So what is my Title?" Hestia: "...Fire Rabbit."
Kairomaru
2021-10-06 01:02:21 +0000 UTCAgreed. Can't wait to see how you doin the first time it happens. When is that going to be? The first party in canon? I forget what it is called. And is he going to get the same nickname of 'Little Rookie' or are you going to come up with a new one?
Pheonix774
2021-10-06 00:48:43 +0000 UTCI'm glad you enjoyed it! Yes, a Bell that actually listens to his Dungeon Advisor does better than the Canon Bell that completely ignored her, shocking isn't it? The Hestia vs Loki bickering will always be fun!
Kairomaru
2021-10-06 00:46:08 +0000 UTCGlad to see this actually as a story. The few that I found good enough to read in my opinion on Fanfiction.net is few and far between. Read the other comments and I have to agree with everything you said about the series, especially about Bell starting out. Anyway, great first chapter and I can't wait to see more of this story in the future, especially the eventual catfight between Loki and Hestia you mentioned in the premise. Lol.
Pheonix774
2021-10-06 00:23:16 +0000 UTCThank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Kairomaru
2021-10-05 21:08:17 +0000 UTCGlad to read the story Kai it's awesome.
DanielJ27
2021-10-05 21:06:28 +0000 UTCGlad you like Proactive Bell! I always thought he'd have done WAY better as an Adventurer if he'd actually listened to Eina. *Smiles* You get a cookie! You noticed exactly how Hestia phrased her talk about other lovers/a harem. Mortals only! She'll go Territorial on another God or Goddess trying to take her Bell!
Kairomaru
2021-10-05 20:52:03 +0000 UTCYep I agree with you plus I like how Bell is a lot more prepared and forward thinking and willing to do things step by step. Also in regards to Hestia it seems that she doesn’t mind bell being with other girls as long as they meet certain standards but only in regards to mortals is she going to get very territorial about bell when it comes to other goddesses?
Aeonstorm
2021-10-05 20:47:30 +0000 UTCThank you! I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, Canon Bell went from, I can't love a Goddess to 'I WILL DEVOTE MY ENTIRE LIFE TO GETTING STRONGER SO THAT THIS GIRL I MET FOR LESS THAN A MINUTE WILL LIKE ME!' Danmachi really isn't a series where 'too fast' is applicable for relationships.
Kairomaru
2021-10-05 20:39:36 +0000 UTCI love this, I can’t wait for the next chapter. I really like how you’ve written bell’s character, also I like how you’ve started his relationship with Hestia because i find Canon bell very sort of indecisive about a lot of things.
Aeonstorm
2021-10-05 20:30:22 +0000 UTCHappy to hear that! Yes, things have already started changing and you know how I love to let the Butterfly flap its wings!
Kairomaru
2021-10-05 19:49:49 +0000 UTCGlad you liked it! Yeah, I don't like how certain things have been written in Canon. So I figured I could break part of Canon over my knee, and then make a good story in my own way.
Kairomaru
2021-10-05 19:49:05 +0000 UTCIndeed it does! I hope you've already enjoyed the changes!
Kairomaru
2021-10-05 19:47:46 +0000 UTCMy my, it's been a while since a story has been able to grab my attention like this one. I'm looking forward to seeing this one continue! 😄
Mylael
2021-10-05 19:32:37 +0000 UTCI absolutely love danmachi fanfics since I don’t really enjoy the actual story. Really looking forward to where you take this!
David Zimmerle
2021-10-05 19:17:00 +0000 UTCAnd thus, the journey of the White Rabbit of Orario begins.
Tristan McKenzie O'Meara
2021-10-05 19:10:17 +0000 UTC
