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Tinesia, POV #1 W[H]IP

Tinesia entertains you--the guest of the great Xiro.

Chosen takes and timing are not final.

Tinesia, POV #1 W[H]IP

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Hopefully resolved that in the release :D

Sadistic Dreamer

Honestly I don't know if the timing is an issue or not without further context. I mean if a mood or tone is established prior to this makes it work. Then yeah. But without that and just as is? Then I can see it being preternaturally slow paced and the tempo could be slightly quicker. I don't know. Excellent rough edit in any case.

David


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