Progress report vor v.0.02 of Amity Park
Added 2017-08-08 16:57:32 +0000 UTCThis will be included in the next update.
I am currently working on more locations, character and dialogues.
Locations:
School:
- Hallway Part 1, 2 and 3 (Done)
- Girls Lockerroom (In Progress)
- Boys Lockerroom
- Girls and Boys Restroom
- Nurse's office
- Class room
Park: - (Done)
Nasty Burger
Character in game to talk to:
from the show:
- Paulina
- Jazz
- Maddie
- Tucker
- Sam
OCs:
- Park lady
- Nurse
- Saleswoman at Nastyburger
Comments
0.11 review. Hello Stareagle here, i must say i liked your art and style a lot. everything but characters i would't change anything even if i got paid! but, the 2 girls naked stomach were waay to tin=small, it was like seeing a stick litteraly. i don't mean to sounds mean and i truly apologuise if i do, but in my opinion you need to make them on stomach side a little wider=bigger, Butt and breast and legs were fine if not great, sam's legs could been tiny bit better if were talking about perfection here in my opinon atleast. The heads looked alright no complains. but the stick stomach up to breast in size was a little bit sad to see and tiny turn off honestly. If i may be so bold to say it looked like a kid of 10 years could hold the whole stomach of 1 girl in 1 hand. X). Check out Nighty City Productions. or Creator of camp pinewood game (or both) here on patreon those 2 should give you a better view idea for your characters, the boy's atleast with clothes were fine, as i haven't seen them naked can't say anything there. tip about other game parts The introduction were alright, however in the future, 2-3 rd release a free tip make sure that players can skip the accident part untill waking up in bed. it will give the players time to jump right into the game instead of waiting. also a tip for 3rd release try get up stat screen of some sort if you plan to have any, even if its not usefull for players really for a loong time it would be good to have it up to show what kind of mecs we are going to have fun getting to use and work with to play your game. :) Str ect is a common stat screen, but even a relationship screen of some sort would be nice esp in a dating game. Other than that good job and keep working hard please i look forward to see the fruits of your work on v 2! :)
Magics&Mundane
2017-08-28 23:47:09 +0000 UTCWell I got nothing to lose. So... Umm...How about this for an idea? A virginity system? It could only be a small stat or something, but what i mean by it is this. When danny starts the game, he is (as far is his girls around him know) a virgin naturally. And weather or not they think he is one or if they are effect how certain girls will react to him. For example, if or when you start a sex scene that involves vaginal penetration, whichever girl can ask if danny is a virgin, if he chooses to say he is it has some extra dialogue and the girl will respond in turn, which also varies on weather or not they are one as well and such, such as sam being happy about sharing her first time with him, but say paulina being a bit smug about it. But them knowing he isn't one, either because they have seen him with the others or something could either could lead to them being displeased with him as he lied to them. Hows this for an idea?
nacia belk
2017-08-24 01:34:47 +0000 UTCI am intending to change the sizes of all characters.
GZone
2017-08-16 21:24:37 +0000 UTCCan I suggest that make the characters more zoom in
Kazuostrife
2017-08-16 15:18:08 +0000 UTC
