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"The Depths" - Page 75 (work in progress)

The script:

  

THE DEPTHS: PAGE 75:

Panel 1:

[Leilan and David smile and wave from the boat deck, leaning just slightly over the rail.]

CAPTION: A few days later…

Panel 2:

[David starts to nuzzle her neck affectionately, while Leilani churrs with delight and her eyes close.]

Panel 3:

[David stops nuzzling as he sees Malana looking at him none too kindly from beside Leilani.]

Panel 4:

[David goes back to just watching the water, and Leilani looks slightly sheepish as she pretends to look the other way.]

DAVID: (in thought) “Well, this is going to be fun, the three of us…”

Panel 5:

[All three turn their heads incredulously, looking stunned, as a dripping-wet, barely clothed Kalea clambers onto the deck.]

Panel 6:

[David looks even more unhappy as Malana ducks away, and Kalea slams into Leilani in a wet pounce, knocking her down.]

DAVID: “Four of us…”

KALEA: “I come too!”

LEILANI: “OOOF!”


And thus wraps up Story Arc #1. We're taking a break until August to work on the next story arc, but while we're away, "Wild Coast" will be in the offering, a short-subject comic spinoff of "The Depths" featuring Leilani's descendant. ^^ 

As far as Story Arc #2 goes, we'll see. We lost a lot of support in the last few months, and time (and a big marketing and advertising campaign) will tell us if we're going to continue. 

Stay tuned, and stick with us if you can, and we promise we'll try.

"The Depths" - Page 75 (work in progress)

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