"The Depths" - Page 40
Added 2018-08-28 12:24:33 +0000 UTCPage forty. When you look at it, it's really not much of a comic yet, is it? ***^ I mean, it's barely anything. Leilani and Thierry make love, she confesses her love to him, and all of a sudden we're taking readers on a whirlwind adventure of romance and danger in the sea otter's past.
Have you noticed something else? Riff picked up on this, but ever since Leilani recounted "No more words..." and pounced David for sex in the undersea cavern, there's really not BEEN anymore words from the narrator! *^^*
So...I'm toying with the idea of not doing her narration at this point, since we're already in suspended belief because how could Leilani know about what was said in her absence, right? *^^*
Anyway, this also is an important page because it's the last one for pencil artist ABlueDeer. Next week, a brand new artist's pencil takes the stage, Twinkle-Sez, and I'm hopeful you find the art just as pleasing to the eyes.
I want to sincerely thank ABlueDeer for the push to get "The Depths" started, and the hard, tireless work and effort he's put into the webcomic for me. <3 Wishing only the best for him and his own projects, "Moonlace" and "Bethellium".
Art: ABlueDeer and Kino Jaggernov
Comments
I wouldn't worry about it being "not much of a comic yet". It's been fantastic so far, and you are clearly taking your time with story. Having lots of build up will just make the pay off greater when the action happens :)
otters007
2018-08-28 13:09:12 +0000 UTC
