Short Story: Escape from Venus
Added 2020-06-26 16:01:00 +0000 UTCInspired by The Universe, which I had been watching on Netflix, here is my latest short story. I also decided to experiment with present tense. (Hopefully I kept it all the way through lol)
Please let me know in the comments what you think!
Comments
Thanks Matthew! I actually just couldnβt figure out how to have her tell it if she was supposed to be in the pod. But I might have an adventure or two more for this world. Thanks for reading π₯°
Sarah The Rebel
2020-06-30 18:20:51 +0000 UTCMore short stories in general I mean, you don't have to stick to this setting if your heart isn't in it <3
Matthew Genus
2020-06-30 02:23:48 +0000 UTCThat was pretty great, I was enraptured the entire time! Are you gonna expand on this because the seemingly lofi futuristic setting is very interesting to me, I've only seen it a book who's name I forget and heard second hand about how the Planescape tabletop game supposedly takes place billions of years in the future. Also, I personally would've liked to hear directly from Aglaea how they fared in their initial escape rather than from a captain's log since I don't have the rest of the story to immediately read, but as a cliffhanger I really liked it. More pls.
Matthew Genus
2020-06-30 02:22:10 +0000 UTC
