DOS Ch-252
Added 2025-07-05 23:11:01 +0000 UTCHere's the link to it. I have a feeling that Patreon's AI system may block this chapter because of one particular scene, and I didn't...
I have a feeling that Patreon's AI system may block this chapter because of one particular scene, and I didn't want to change it, so I'm adding a link to it instead.
Comments
Nando v movies! I love that guy he has rewritten a lot of Marvel movies and made them a lot better
Clutch R6
2025-07-06 11:25:36 +0000 UTCNice chapter! Do wish he changed Pepper Potts to a different actress though some one like Kate Beckinsale.
Hyuga Tobirama
2025-07-06 09:04:47 +0000 UTCNot a big fan of the link format but I can see why you wouldn't risk it for the chapter
David Karlsson
2025-07-06 05:24:12 +0000 UTCEhh he'll be fine lol still likely in the 20Million club once it's over
David Karlsson
2025-07-06 05:23:13 +0000 UTCOr keep it slightly closer to Pg13 short of R. Increase the stakes a bit? Sure it might not be the ideal business decision for merchandise but then the later movies wouldn't have a dance off
David Karlsson
2025-07-06 05:19:22 +0000 UTCBlack widow & Black panther would also probably get their movies earlier because I think the CEO Ike Perlmutter was the main reason it took so long & he got bought out/stepped down when Troy bought Marvel?
James Harrold
2025-07-06 05:13:41 +0000 UTCGreat Chapter, can't wait for the audience reaction. With Troy owning Marvel I hope he doesn't let the quality drop post-End Game.
June Soriano
2025-07-06 05:11:38 +0000 UTCI don't know if you've seen the video but a guy on YouTube made a good case for how to improve Iron Man 2 I quite liked. Instead of having Vanko as the main antagonist make Justin Hammer his adversary with hired help, the government etc. Vanko was such a dull antagonist to me while Hammer was great both for the comedy and the symmetry of billionaire vs Billionaire. Weapons manufacturers. There was another point about creating distinct versions of those Hammer drones. Like 7 different airforce, army etc with different weapons and ways to build them in lego. it could help boost Merchandise sales which would help MCs business credibility.
David Karlsson
2025-07-06 04:55:45 +0000 UTCI kind of want to change the actress for Pepper Potts. Both because of her behavior irl. She's also very close knit with certain groups and has some nepotism favours in the industry so I have a very hard time believing she'd agree to a 5 picture deal let alone 5. Her and RDJ had good chemistry but so could a different actress
David Karlsson
2025-07-06 04:45:52 +0000 UTCA good chapter if a bit short. Wonder if Scarlet will be black widow and if so will he be kinder in negotiating her contract seeing she was screwed over OtL
David Karlsson
2025-07-06 04:40:59 +0000 UTCif my faulty memory and divination was correct, we should be getting double chapters tonight. >.> <.<
YayPepto
2025-07-06 04:26:13 +0000 UTCCan't see any reason why she wouldn't.
James Harrold
2025-07-06 03:05:18 +0000 UTCI don't think iron man got delayed.
James Harrold
2025-07-06 02:34:29 +0000 UTCIs Scarlett still going to play Black Widow?
Clutch R6
2025-07-06 02:32:53 +0000 UTCExcellent work
Qweku_v
2025-07-06 02:25:24 +0000 UTCTftc!
JL
2025-07-06 02:25:19 +0000 UTCI kinda feel bad for RDJ lol
JL
2025-07-06 02:18:37 +0000 UTCBang up chapter man
Grey Doomer
2025-07-06 02:09:23 +0000 UTCWait does that mean your having TDK and iron man up together frighting at the box office? Or is the delay on iron man going to be until the TDK ends? Because TDK will ruin iron men if they are on together
Gaming Guru God
2025-07-06 01:22:51 +0000 UTCGreat chapter
Kenadams
2025-07-06 00:51:22 +0000 UTCAmazing, I'm so excited for the public reactions
Demitas
2025-07-05 23:56:10 +0000 UTCJust a minor nitpick the Joker walks into that scene with the shotgun that he takes off the bank manager from the bank heist. I think it runs through the whole movie were he will take something from his previous victims.
James Harrold
2025-07-05 23:53:38 +0000 UTCAbsolute cinema- I love this story so much haha
Zack
2025-07-05 23:41:24 +0000 UTCCan't wait to read the next few chapters with the reactions. So good, thanks for the update
Fraül
2025-07-05 23:35:08 +0000 UTCtime to patiently wait for the next chapter.... is it done yet? also great chapter
dark helmet9
2025-07-05 23:33:03 +0000 UTCThe moment between Maggie and Troy. I don't know if they would, but I'm not taking the risk. The lesser strikes I have here, the better.
Fable Weaver
2025-07-05 23:31:06 +0000 UTCWhy would they block it?
Vilas Boas
2025-07-05 23:27:23 +0000 UTCThank you!
Fable Weaver
2025-07-05 23:25:20 +0000 UTCGreat Chapter.
James Harrold
2025-07-05 23:22:58 +0000 UTC
