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Added 2022-01-13 18:20:40 +0000 UTCThis is my first time drawing manga. Please tell me if this is strange English.😊 漫画æãã®ã¯åˆã‚ã¦ã§ã™ã€‚変ãªè‹±èªžã ã£ãŸã‚‰æ•™ãˆã¦ãã ã•ã„😊
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Diva
2022-01-14 18:10:09 +0000 UTCDIVA先生ã®â€¦ã‚¨ãƒƒã‚»ã‚¤â€¦ï¼ï¼Ÿ 個人的ã«ã¯ãƒ–ãƒãƒƒã‚³ãƒªãƒ¼ã«ã¯ã‚´ãƒžãƒ€ãƒ¬ã‹ã‚±ãƒãƒ£ãƒƒãƒ—ã§ã™ã…
2022-01-14 16:30:34 +0000 UTCthank you!! will will will
Diva
2022-01-13 22:04:13 +0000 UTCthank you!! Drawing manga is a great way to learn English.😂
Diva
2022-01-13 22:00:40 +0000 UTCJust a little strange on the "I make it " changing it to" I'll(I will) make it" sounds better
Nephthys
2022-01-13 21:14:23 +0000 UTCNice manga! "It's so hard to me" sounds kind of strange, "Looks too hard for me" or "This is too hard for me" would sound better I think. It also makes the joke at the end seem more natural 😊
Marcel
2022-01-13 18:56:09 +0000 UTC
