Plan for the Galaxy Chapter 37
Added 2023-08-26 12:08:15 +0000 UTCHere is a very early release on the next chapter. The last chapter was going to be a long chapter but I cut it in two and went with an extra release, getting two chapters ahead, before I upload the wildcard story.
I'm opening it up to the top two tiers first to get your opinion on how Noveria ended. I value the opinions of my readers. Am I building Shepard right? is it consistent? That sort of thing.
I have started on the next chapter already but I am going to update the wildcard next.
Comments
I feel as Shepard can come off as I little bit odd (imo) at times but you've got a consistent enough picture that it's really not anything to be worried about. Noveria in the games always felt like a really long section that left me holding my breath for the whole thing and tired by the end, I'm glad you had that to end the section as well.
Ezoz
2023-08-27 02:12:04 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed this. I don't mind renegade/paragon action shepard mix. My problem with the game was that if you choose renegade then they stopped being renegade after awhile and went full evil psychopath. I'm enjoying how you have her doing paragon actions but doing some renegade actions when the situation calls for it. She can make paragon decisions but be more renegade when she needs to enforce her power as a spectre on people who won't listen (unlike the game which was unfortunate). Like that benezia was caught alive, I just hope they find something happened to her mind and find out about indoctrination (it would be nice if the asari could find a way to stop it). Though I hope they don't treat benezia horribly as it wasn't her fault with the indoctrination
Eva Cole
2023-08-26 16:12:28 +0000 UTC
