Plan For the Galaxy Chapter 34
Added 2023-06-22 16:32:31 +0000 UTCHere is the latest update for Plan For the Galaxy. I wanted to get this out at least a week ago but between work and sick kids, well, life happens.
I hope this meets expectations and you all enjoy it. I hope to be back with more updates soon.
Comments
Makes me wonder if the galaxy would consider the horror movies worse or better than the FNAF game series in terms of scares
asdo
2023-07-05 03:08:18 +0000 UTCMight be a possibility in the future. Not sure if it will work against geth so much but I will consider it. Besides, Shepard hasn't seen his weapon at full power yet...
Bored Peasant
2023-07-04 00:56:51 +0000 UTCI have sort of already done Expendables for the reviews. I think that the krogan loving My Little Pony would be hilarious (just imagine Wrex with a colourful plushy that he snuggles with in his sleep) but I don't know if I would do a review of it. Underworld and Van Helsing certainly are possibilities though
Bored Peasant
2023-07-04 00:55:21 +0000 UTCA few things. First, I love your story here. I've been keeping up with in other on Fanfiction, but I was too impatient, so when I saw the patreon offer, I had to take it. But now I'm sad again, I have to wait. But that's how it is with good stories, they can't be rushed. Second, I have a few ideas for your "Reviews" section, which happen to be my favorite of each chapter when they appear. In terms of games, Werewolf the Apocalypse: Earthblood, Monster Hunter if you haven't done that one yet, maybe the Kingdom Under Fire series since a lot of people don't really mention that too much, and I can't remember if you've done it already, but the Halo series as well. For movies, Van Helsing, The Expendables, the Underworld series, and one that should really affect the minds of the galaxy, Raya and the Last Dragon. For anime, Overlord is the only one in mind right now, I know there's others that should be added, but I've been on an Overlord binge so I can't think of any. I don't know if you've done Cartoons, but I think My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic would be PERFECT. I think it would be HILARIOUS to make a Brony out of a Turian or a Krogan, or both and they being friends for it. Besides, that show, despite being meant for kids, DOES have a lot of lessons that make a good point. Also, I would LOVE to see a Krogan TRY and deny the ponies are cute and need to be protected, given Krogan protectiveness rivals that of a mother crocodile. I have WAY too many ideas to list them all, so I'll just spread them out from now on as to not make a massive post like this. @Josh Barney If he DOES put that scene in, he better end it the same way. "Remember that shit at Christmas!"
The Senn Master
2023-07-01 13:22:49 +0000 UTCI don’t remember if you wrote something like it yet, but there definitely needs to be a scene where Brock whips out the AA12 turns the enemies into paste like Terry Crews from the Expendables lol. Great chapter tho
Josh Barney
2023-06-23 07:11:16 +0000 UTCThanks! And I might use 'Alenko the Boring' at some point, if you don't mind?
Bored Peasant
2023-06-22 23:59:32 +0000 UTCI like the mentor..ish role he is taking with Shepard and how she been reluctantly excepting the help. I feel a good friendship in the making. Can’t wait to see how Noveria will turn out. Thanks for the chapter.
BuzzGrave
2023-06-22 22:30:59 +0000 UTCAlso just wanted to say thank you for another great chapter! I understand life getting in the way and I really appreciate the work put into this.
Eva Cole
2023-06-22 22:26:19 +0000 UTCI'm happy to see Ashley be told she needs to get her act together. I like her more as time goes on (which is why i chose her to live),but racism and that chip she has on her shoulder always annoyed me in ME1 and ME2. Hopefully she actually earns her officer position this time and it not be just about politics. I get politics held her back, from being a Williams, but politics should not give her a position she hasn't grown into (especially becoming a spectre). I also am happy that Brock didn't just trust C-sec to show up to the orphanage on time. I believe i know who showed up and I just hope none of them get in trouble for hurting the bartarian as he deserved it for what he tried to do. I also hope they're able to send a message to other slavers to keep them away from the orphanage. I love Persei and how her and Brock interact (if they ever get together I think they'd be a funny power couple to follow). I'm also glad he's helping Shepard realize how much power she has now, that should she enforce it and that she's having people on her crew call her spectre and not commander.
Eva Cole
2023-06-22 22:23:53 +0000 UTCHow gratifying to finally have a scene in which Ashley gets an interview without tea and biscuits, as the Brits say 👍 While I always let her live instead of Alenko the Boring, one, no two things she is not. Officer, let alone Spectre material. The way she (and Alenko) dismiss Shep in ME2 always rubbed me the wrong way. You never take things at face value, especially not when you are in the SF trade. Good chapter, thanks.
JotunAltHist
2023-06-22 17:50:13 +0000 UTC
