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so i got stuck on the story line for a month now and what i do most is research and get distracted... woof

now this is something good to share, a recap of my mistakes in the episodes that needs to be answered in the future


now see those red ink? yeah so many errors HAHAHAHA


so the thing is i can't show you because i also wrote my thoughts about each episodes and it contained spoiler alerts

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no no their's nothing wrong with misa's identity. he's just have a thing with crossdressing

you could also spend 1-3 weeks updating old chapters, erasing little to big "mistakes". If you have some really big problem with the basic story, adding a character or an element that brings in new things can explain the things that didn't work before. Also, if one of those things is Misa's sexuality: I know 4 people who outed as queer (bi, 2x gay, demibi) and they usually never really know what they are for a long time. One gay thought he was bi, the bi one doesn't know if she's pan and the demibi is still confused as hell. With a dialogue you could fix Misa's case if it is one of those "errors".


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