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Added 2023-02-02 02:08:20 +0000 UTCdetailed doodle of this project page (not the comic I'm working on, just a single page for other project), at the end i used the rejected version for a maybe 2 pages mini-comic, also decided to remove the kiss part as it was going to make the page too crowded, so decided to give more focus to the main intense action (if once colored can be added maybe i will but i think it won't work as good as i thought because will share and steal frame with the main one (but sincerely i wanted to add it hahahaha, maybe i will add it in the main frame if anatomically possible)
i think is ready to start working on the detailed sketch
some details will be added or slightly modified in the detailed sketch
update: decided to do add the kiss within the main frame characters it looks better and fluid, now is ready to start sketch detailing
Comments
not my decision to take here, i proposed versions i think are the way to go only
Alejandro
2023-02-02 17:10:33 +0000 UTCI think you had it right before. Don’t know how to explain it but it it looks unbalanced with the kiss.
icedkocha
2023-02-02 11:24:39 +0000 UTCIt's a shame the kiss was removed but seeing there's a little saliva trail to imply the kiss was a good comprise. It's always a nice detail to see in drawings :P
Corvus
2023-02-02 02:23:53 +0000 UTC
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