Tides from the Deep - Chapters 21-30
Added 2024-09-14 09:51:25 +0000 UTCChapter 21 – Teamwork Makes the Dreamwo
Comments
1. You can only get initiated in the Deep.
Cinera Verinia
2024-09-24 08:22:51 +0000 UTCUgh, I really don't like how Fiora is being handled.
Cinera Verinia
2024-09-24 08:15:00 +0000 UTC"wondering about who might her stab in the back" her stab -> stab her
Pholt
2024-09-22 19:12:38 +0000 UTC"Riala nodded, quite confused, afraid, but also heartened that someone would treat her with such familiarity." Riala -> Talia
Pholt
2024-09-22 19:07:27 +0000 UTCI find it both convenient and cliche how every time someone important appears, a random student shouted their name.
Touch
2024-09-21 10:43:35 +0000 UTCHello, thx for the story ! There is a few things that are not clear to me: The first is during the attack on the island. Woudn't all the people that killed abyssal scuttlers be initiated ? Why isn't it talked about and why not one of them chose to go to the academy ? Why do people stay uninitated when there are weak Monsters to kill. A lot of people could be initiated with the assistance from relative or other friendly water rider. Second is during the test on the boat. The prof is killing teens unopposed ? It's said that those that don't pass the test do not survive. Is it only Talia's view ? I don't see people, riders or not, accepting 90% of temnagers killed even for the pride of one man.
SecondBlahm
2024-09-20 11:57:45 +0000 UTCDamn it, I somehow messed up with the numbers again. I'll correct it. It's not supposed to look like that.
Maeve McCarthy
2024-09-17 16:23:01 +0000 UTCKeanu Reefs
Aclys
2024-09-16 09:36:57 +0000 UTC+0.7 to your Constitution (2.6/2 to 1 Constitution)] -> +0.7 to your Constitution (2.6/2 Constitution)] makes more sense if I understand the leveling/siphon system.
Onyxdragon666
2024-09-15 19:59:30 +0000 UTC
