44-50!!! pages fix + new pages (THE END)
Added 2021-02-03 17:01:15 +0000 UTCwell here is the last of the pages. been a half a year but were finally done.
thank you for all who stick around the whole time and those who supported.
at the end i like to ask one thing form you.
PLZ rate and review the comic.
and be honest if you can.
you can give it a range from 1 to 10 stars
or
1 to 100 stars for a bigger scale.
also wright down what you liked and did not like and if you have any questions.
i hope you enjoyed the comic and maybe i can make a new one later after getting back in the green (sooo in the red right now) also am trying to plan for a new comic just getting the time to make it is the prob but will see in time.
thank you allllll for the support and later may be more post
see you next post^^
Comments
7/10 - Overall solid and enjoyable, definitely a lot of new steps taken, but with plenty of potential areas for growth and improvement if you choose to pursue them. You seemed to put this out pretty quickly, which suggests you use a lot of techniques to speed up your artwork. This is not a bad thing, especially when trying to make a living from artwork. However, as you develop longer and more in-depth stories, this often comes with more attention to detail from the audience that you might want to consider. For example, for a story that focuses so much around water and swimming, the characters rarely look wet, especially Troy after he got completely dunked!
Taerjaga
2021-02-09 03:20:45 +0000 UTCto a degree i feel the same with the onomatopoeias, tho by the time i was half throw the comic it was kinda part of the look of this comic. i feel next time i should lighten up the onomatopoeias. ( reason why there so much is gave my self a rule of : if there is movement there be SFX) thank you for your feed back^^
Ru Zarptag
2021-02-03 18:39:53 +0000 UTCI feel like sometimes the text onomatopoeias were overwhelming. Other than that everything is great!
ShadoCadInk
2021-02-03 18:25:29 +0000 UTC
