I like the art here. The dialog is a bit weird… a patron mentioned some dislike of it in a dm to me and my response was, yeah. I didn’t write this, I was just hired to do everything else! I made suggestions on some things about the writing, but it wasn’t my passion project, Bryan had the final word. I didn’t want to say too much about dialog because I am certainly not the best at it myself. Glass houses and all that.