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Dave Davenport (dogspunk)
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Stray Bullet 1 web gallery

It's up, and I will post notices as I make changes.

FERAL and the GHOST SKATER: Stray Bullet #1 

The purpose of this gallery at this time is to get your feedback on the issue before I call it done!

A few pages are obviously not there yet (and have placeholders instead), and there are some glaring changes that need to be made yet (such as the end of pg4 of Loose--- I had decided I needed to change those panels to show the man running from the steam room more obviously going through the Ghost Skater and moved the last one to the next page, but haven't yet fixed those panels). A few other panels just don't work well for me and I want to fix up. There's also some details through-out that I am tempted to tinker with... such as the Skater's goggles getting too square sometimes ( I like them better rounder), and the skull-headdresses in Loose can be a little better drawn. IDK, maybe you all think these things are okay as is. I will add page numbers for y'all to reference if/when you comment/make suggestions. When this is all done and off to the printer I will leave this up for the perusal of my patrons! 

Stray Bullet 1 web gallery

Comments

OMG this is so awesome! Canโ€™t wait to own one ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Angel Galindo


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