Ghosts pg.7
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Hey it's a new page! I'm glad to see Shawn again even briefly, I like his character design. Just a few more pages to go! I had written this to be just 6 or 7 pages but when the layout began I realized I was having to trim dialog and even actions to make it all fit on some pages... so I quickly decided to de-densify it. So it adds a few more pages... there's more room for the art them, right?
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It's interesting reading the pages one at a time, as opposed to all in one sitting. I lost track of what was happening when I got to this page, went back and re-read the whole deal, wondering if I'd missed a page or three. I understand it much better now, and am really curious to see what happens next. I like the off-hand "councilman" bombshell in the last panel.
Bradley Rader
2018-11-12 20:09:31 +0000 UTC
