Page 27 the 2nd (preview)
Added 2018-07-26 20:12:06 +0000 UTCHey!
So if you were paying attention to the description and the comments on the last post for Stray Bullet pg. 27, and my replies to the comments on that page, you’re already privy to the fact that I wasn’t happy with it and that friends and fellow creators had problems with it as well. The same with the original version, which I applied for the Queer Press Grant with. This page in that version was also singled out for criticism. Having tweaked the plot slightly since then also added new problems with it, and so I decided to scrap it and start the page over completely, so I wasn’t wasting more time trying to make something that wasn’t working... work.
Don’t anyone feel bad about it please. I knew I needed to do this and hearing about it from people I respect just told me that I already knew what I needed to do, so I did. I am 100% happy with the results, it fits the story better and switching the art up ditched the staleness that was creeping in. It’s livelier, sexier, and that’s that.
All this being said it’s my boyfriend’s birthday and I’m taking a few days off to celebrate with him, so this will be late... but hopefully worth the wait. I think so.
Love, Dave
