Stray Bullet pg. 27
Added 2018-07-20 04:48:30 +0000 UTC(replaced on 8/2/18 but post text left intact)
Last page for issue 1!!!
So you may know that this is rewriting a previous version of issue 1, and the situation of how and how long Jayson and Doug have known each other has changed... and that has meant some rewriting of dialog. I think it's been fine so far, but this page can be better, so expect the words to change before this sees print.
More on what's to come in the next post!
Qapla, me Droogies!
Comments
ah! wordplay!
William O. Tyler
2018-07-23 21:59:54 +0000 UTCto be fair, we're all hoping for a little tail. hehe.
Mike
2018-07-23 21:54:23 +0000 UTCit wasn't a technical observation, it just struck me as cozy, cute, and kinda funny -- once you get past the whole socks in bed thing, like what's that about anyway?!.... lol, kidding... it actually seemed like these guys were having fun, tail or no tail :)
TomQ
2018-07-21 00:06:27 +0000 UTC
