SYLUS COMIC WIP and rough sketch fixes I’m gonna do
Added 2025-02-27 19:24:50 +0000 UTCI predict 2 more weeks? And it ends. This week a big load as tier 2 coming to end as well. ALSO after some hard thinking…when the comic ends I’m fixing and redrawing panels. I did rough draw over of things I’m changing in dialogue and proportions. When I started this I wanted sylus to seem player like because at that point in the game he was mean and we didn’t know much about him but as time went I wrote him based on his lore and softness. After we got to know him more and lore I realize them meeting because sylus having frequent sex doesn’t suit him at all and it bothered me so much😭 a vip advised me I can redraw but it was a lot of work so I was hesitant but since I put so much time on it I rather fix it.
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bye why does it look so hot already just as a sketch 😭🤤
clo
2025-03-03 09:02:18 +0000 UTComgggg the wip of him solo before the confrontation would’ve been SO GOOD
4lusst
2025-03-03 08:18:01 +0000 UTCoh my….. i wish i was her 😭😭😭😭😭
TK
2025-03-02 18:36:36 +0000 UTCMe and my praise kinks are eating this one up, yes ma'am 🙂↕️🙂↕️
Guppies
2025-03-01 05:31:31 +0000 UTC“atta girl” and the last panel OHHH MY GOD. also you work so harddd thank you the revisions 🥹 im excited to see the one of sylus on the bed colored hehe
ilovyoo
2025-03-01 04:42:52 +0000 UTCAnother master piece *chef kiss*
Kyl-li J
2025-02-28 16:37:11 +0000 UTCOmg?? That’s such a great idea! I’ll incorporate it into the story and cred you!😭🤣
Mimi
2025-02-28 15:37:55 +0000 UTCNo plotholes, luke and Keiran did a bad job assembling his bed so it rocks more 😂
DarkFemSteff
2025-02-28 11:23:49 +0000 UTCHey don’t apologize I completely understand. And I understand that their characters do not follow conventional male behaviour because irl he would be a heaux looking like that LOL This is no fault to you at all I am just happy you changed it so please don’t beat yourself up about it even if you hadn’t changed it it’s your work and you should be proud of it regardless!
DarkFemSteff
2025-02-28 11:21:07 +0000 UTC🤭🤭🤭
Mimi
2025-02-28 07:10:43 +0000 UTCYes😼😼😼
Mimi
2025-02-28 07:02:16 +0000 UTC🤭🤭🤭🤭
Mimi
2025-02-28 07:02:06 +0000 UTCLOLL🤣🤣🤣 that would be fun
Mimi
2025-02-28 07:02:02 +0000 UTC🤣🤣🤣
Mimi
2025-02-28 07:01:51 +0000 UTCThank you so much!!!🥹🫶🫶🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 07:01:43 +0000 UTC🤭🤭🤭
Mimi
2025-02-28 07:01:33 +0000 UTCThank you so much!!!🥹🫶🫶🫶hope you guys will like it all finished! and yes! I love drawing tummy folds they’re so cute 🤣
Mimi
2025-02-28 07:01:27 +0000 UTCThank you!!!🥹🫶🫶 ahh i have a lot to say when it’s done 😭
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:59:25 +0000 UTCThank you so much!!!😭😭yall are so sweet
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:58:43 +0000 UTCThank you for enjoying my work!!🥹🫶🫶 i must do the sylus girlies justice 😤😤😤 hopefully it all comes together!!
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:58:19 +0000 UTCLOL cotton ball in alpha body 🤣🤣 thank you so much!!🥹🫶🫶 I’m honored you enjoy them!!! I’m learning so much so i hope next comic is better!
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:57:28 +0000 UTCThank you!!!🥹 I’m so excited for when yall read the ending
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:56:33 +0000 UTCYes! He’s such a softie AHH 😭😭😭
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:56:07 +0000 UTC🤭🤭🤭
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:55:47 +0000 UTCThank you for enjoying it!!!🥹🫶🫶 can’t wait for you to read the rest, and sadly no😭😭 milkman was just at the moment for fun 😩 but I’m happy to hear you enjoyed that!! I can try to explore more stuff like that in future tho! (The begging)
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:55:41 +0000 UTC🤣🤣perfect timing
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:54:12 +0000 UTC🥰🥰😘😘
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:53:55 +0000 UTCYes!🤭🤭
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:53:47 +0000 UTCLOL🤣🫶🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:53:39 +0000 UTCThank you!!!🥹🫶🙇♀️
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:53:31 +0000 UTC🥹😘😘u are
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:53:23 +0000 UTCTHANK UU🥹🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:53:16 +0000 UTCThank you!!🥹🫶🫶🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:53:08 +0000 UTC🤣🤣🤣
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:53:01 +0000 UTCThank you so much for understanding!!!🥹🫶🫶 it’s def a learning process 😩 it’ll feel better as a creator to fix it!🙇♀️🫶🥰🥰
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:52:53 +0000 UTCIt irks my soul not changing it LOL dw I’ll find time after it finishes and during the week i prep for Geto comic!
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:51:00 +0000 UTCThank you for enjoying it!!!🫶🫶🫶 I’ll make the changes and when it’s all wrapped up and redrawn parts i hope it’ll feel fresh when rereading!🥰
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:49:50 +0000 UTCYess my apologies not much was known of him when i started the comic🙇♀️ it does suck to hear caus i been mentally ridiculing myself for this for months and tried hard to push through. I rlly didn’t want to drop it but finally decide to change it. i hope the change helps in some way😭
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:47:51 +0000 UTC🤭🤭🤭so hot
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:43:19 +0000 UTC🥹🥹🫶🫶🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:43:13 +0000 UTC🤭🤭o yes
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:43:08 +0000 UTC😛😛😛
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:43:03 +0000 UTCThank you!!🥹🥹🥹
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:42:59 +0000 UTCLMAOO😭😭 AHHH there’s the bit of plot hole so let’s just pretend he’s THAT frustrated LOLL
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:42:53 +0000 UTC🤣🤣🫶🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:42:26 +0000 UTCThank you!!!🥹🥹🫶🫶 still need few weeks, i hope i do it justice😭🙇♀️🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:42:20 +0000 UTC🤭🤭😘😘
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:41:57 +0000 UTCI hope is two weeks! Hold off on vibrator until after i finish and do revisions 🤣🤣🤣
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:41:50 +0000 UTCThank you!! You’re always supportive 🥰😘🫶🫶 i think I’ll save the player trope for another character where i can write him hella player like. It’s just as i went i realize Sylus is so soft and it’s kind of suspicious to go from sleeping around to fixation on her 🤣
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:41:26 +0000 UTC😼😼😼😼
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:39:56 +0000 UTC🥹😘😘😘
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:39:45 +0000 UTC🥹😘😘thank you!!!
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:39:38 +0000 UTCThank you!!🥹🫶🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:39:25 +0000 UTC😂😂🫶🫶 thank my social anxiety that art is my outlet 🤣🤣
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:39:12 +0000 UTCHAHAGAHA
Ali
2025-02-28 06:38:52 +0000 UTCLMAO I’m not sure if it’s u i think i remember your comment about it months ago?🤣🤣
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:38:50 +0000 UTCThank you so much!!🥹🫶🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:38:25 +0000 UTCGlad you think so too😭😭 it just doesn’t fit his character..i shall save the player trope another time!🤣 and thank you!! It’s been bothering me for months..😅
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:38:12 +0000 UTC🤭🤭🤭
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:36:49 +0000 UTC😛😛😛hehe
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:36:44 +0000 UTCYou like captured all of what we don’t see Sylus get to do y/n in game SO FUCKING GOOD. LIKE HES EVEN MORE FUCKING CONSIDERATE, AND YEARNING/NEEDY THEN HE ALREADY IS AND ITS…AMAZING, THIS IS SO FUCKING GOOOOD I WANNA CRY 😩😭🥹
reiin
2025-02-28 06:36:40 +0000 UTC🤣🤣🤣
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:36:27 +0000 UTCThank you!!!🥹🫶🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:36:19 +0000 UTC🫶🫶🫶
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:36:11 +0000 UTC😌😌😌
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:36:07 +0000 UTC🤭🤭🤭
Mimi
2025-02-28 06:36:03 +0000 UTCTHE POSITION IN THE LAST PANEL! OH IM FERAL!!! 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 fuck Sylus! fill us up! 🥵
mcxyp
2025-02-28 06:35:00 +0000 UTCI LIVE FOR THAT LAST PANEL HOLY LORD!!!!! 😩😩😩😩
707
2025-02-28 06:27:21 +0000 UTCHOLY SHIT!!! That last panel 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵
Amandab.d
2025-02-28 05:03:08 +0000 UTCIf you ever drop one of those books that gotta be wrapped in plastic labeled 🔞. I’m buying it deadass 🙂↕️
SmallRatPatootie
2025-02-28 04:23:14 +0000 UTC“Come on sweetie, give me a big one” took me out 😩
Sam
2025-02-28 04:01:17 +0000 UTCI loved the revisions. Thank u sm for your hard work! I always enjoy reading your panels and can see how much you've improved. You've come a long way Yuana, amazing work 😭🫶🏼🥹
taev
2025-02-28 03:51:44 +0000 UTCTwo heartbeats
Joan
2025-02-28 03:06:15 +0000 UTCi’m absolutely losing my mind at the pillow oh my GOD. but also that last panel 🥺🥺🥺 the way you draw realistic bodies and include the tummy folds is so warming to me :’) also the revisions look great! it does feel a bit more like sy as we now know him and the inclusion of him humping the bed is going to be all i think about now 😵💫 it’s all absolutely incredible and i love this comic SO so much!!
chelseas_dagger
2025-02-28 02:40:43 +0000 UTCI love how you are doing some tweaks! The comic was and is already amazing but, the tweaks and effort to refine it really show how much care you are putting into your work. 🥹🫶
Fish
2025-02-28 01:19:06 +0000 UTCThe revisions are wonderful🥰 I really admire how hard you work it really shows throughout your work. It’s a pleasure to support you❤️
Mila^_^
2025-02-28 01:12:06 +0000 UTCI love this so much! You are such an incredible artist! You love what you do and I love how we can clearly see it in your work. I love how you’re looking to stay true to the characters! Thank you so much for all the time and love that you put into your works! Keep up the incredible work! 🩵🙇♀️😍🤩 Also as a huge Sylus fangirl, thank you! ❤️
Lady Pau
2025-02-28 00:59:59 +0000 UTC😭 it’s amazing that you’re taking your time to re-design and finish this comic as well, thank you so much for your work really 😭😭 you’re one of my favorite artist in this platform, it makes me giddy and excited for your next projects this year! And you’re right! Sylus is a cotton ball on an alpha body 😭
Jessica Phoenix
2025-02-28 00:06:39 +0000 UTCThe revisions are excellent!☺️ I honestly love the character either way but it's your comic so whatever you like I like! I'm gonna be so sad when it ends regardless though😭
carls
2025-02-27 23:50:47 +0000 UTCI love the revisions so far!! I think that's a great idea and I'm glad you're taking the time to make it what you want it to be! I'm also truly in love with how his character is now so much more fleshed out because of the lore! ❤️
Ruth Hope 🩷
2025-02-27 23:26:00 +0000 UTCThe PILLOW? The final page? We are fed so much omg 😭
dejavuuu
2025-02-27 23:20:32 +0000 UTCJe ne sais pas quoi dire à part que comme d’habitude, tu es très impliqué dans ce que tu fais, et que tu as même voulu rechanger entièrement le cours de l’histoire, merci pour ton travail et je suis un peu dégoûté que ce soit la fin mais ça fait quand même un bon bout de tant que tu es dessus ! 😙D’ailleurs je me demandais est-ce que tu penses que ce serait possible que tu fasses un come-back du Milk Man ? ( it’s my favorite)Gros bisous, prends bien soin de toi ! 💋🇫🇷
Mélissa Dft
2025-02-27 22:28:27 +0000 UTCone more look through for what’s to come and it’s not just me. sylus too. *deep sigh* yuana, i’m not even ovulating, but I will be once I see this fully rendered…
mochu
2025-02-27 22:13:20 +0000 UTCThank you for this delicious meal 🙏🏾
Ma'Laiya Delen
2025-02-27 22:05:56 +0000 UTCYesss I love the revision, he really is just a sweetie !
Faleshia Evans
2025-02-27 22:04:04 +0000 UTCRespectfullyyyyyy vibe time is gonna slap 😩🤌🏻 your comics are immaculate 👹
Sam
2025-02-27 21:32:58 +0000 UTCLove the new panels and revision. Suits him 🖤
Catvin
2025-02-27 21:28:09 +0000 UTCYou are a goddess
Diena
2025-02-27 21:25:20 +0000 UTCTHIS IS GETTING SO GOOD AHHH
ꈤꀤ꒒
2025-02-27 21:11:40 +0000 UTCOhhh Yuana🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭I think this fix is incredible 😭😭😭😭
Clairezzz
2025-02-27 21:09:00 +0000 UTCaw lawd he humping the bed???? 😩😩😩😩
maddie
2025-02-27 21:04:07 +0000 UTCOh my GOSH that final panel is incredible!! 🫠🫠🫠 I support making revisions if they feel right to you!! I personally have enjoyed the comic so far but Sylus’s character in the game has developed more since you started the comic, so I get why you’d want to make adjustments. Revisions are a normal part of writing so I think it’s admirable that you’re open to revising your creative work as well. And comic creation is just as much writing as it is art! And I know you’re very focused on making improvements and growing as an artist so this move makes sense to me!!
Maggie
2025-02-27 20:59:36 +0000 UTCI love your rework but if it’s too much please do not bother!! We appreciate anything you give us
Zoya Rez
2025-02-27 20:50:18 +0000 UTCAaah this has been such a good ride tho…. Like I absolutely love this and seeing that it’s coming to an end soon it kinda feel bitter sweet 🥲🥲🥲 ahaahahahahahahaha I wish I could just go back and read this with the excitement from the first time, anyways thank you mother for your service💖💖 also pls I hope you take enough rest and are doing well
Aditi Pandey
2025-02-27 20:40:26 +0000 UTCYeah NGL him being a heaux never sat right with me I know it is AU but still it’s such an antithesis of his LADS lore that it made me feel like this character was not Sylus. This isn’t criticism in anyway, I was willing to accept that this is an AU so yeah they aren’t the same people but it still kind of messes with your mind.
DarkFemSteff
2025-02-27 20:29:48 +0000 UTCTHE PILLOW HUMPING NGHHHH
Lisa Heisler
2025-02-27 20:15:28 +0000 UTCNo words. Just 🫠🫠🫠
Arisa
2025-02-27 20:12:06 +0000 UTCwhat a man 😋
i love nanami
2025-02-27 20:11:57 +0000 UTCGIVE IT TO MEEEE
Kitkat
2025-02-27 20:02:00 +0000 UTCSo excited for the reworks 😭💗💗💗
Amy
2025-02-27 19:57:53 +0000 UTCUm humping his pillow THAT HARD🥵🥵🥵 Yuana, I love this change!
Cinna
2025-02-27 19:51:18 +0000 UTCThat last panel is actually going to kill me
Violet
2025-02-27 19:48:18 +0000 UTCmy favourite comic is coming to an end 😭😭😭 I love it so much! ❤️❤️❤️
Aki
2025-02-27 19:48:01 +0000 UTCGOD YEES!!😫
RoyalBl00d Keeper
2025-02-27 19:46:09 +0000 UTCbut wow. 2 more weeks and all done. i’m gonna miss it. I can’t wait to see it all through. pour me a glass a wine and read it with my vibrator for a fun night in 🥰🥰
mochu
2025-02-27 19:44:00 +0000 UTCam full support of you redrawing if it’s something u wanna do, but know that i’ve loved/enjoyed this from the very beginning. I think it was nice like here’s this whore but he’s not and is thoughtful. had me and my lady (😻) quivering. I think ur hard on yourself, miss yuana lol
mochu
2025-02-27 19:42:47 +0000 UTC😼😼😼😼😼
Amanda
2025-02-27 19:42:09 +0000 UTCGod bless yuana for the hard work ilyyyy🫶
Symone ꒰ᐢ. .ᐢ꒱
2025-02-27 19:41:25 +0000 UTCthank you for feeding me while i’m working 😩 beautiful sketches!!
Tyler
2025-02-27 19:37:44 +0000 UTCI agree with your thoughts about reworking Sylus as well, can't wait to see it ☺️
Kira
2025-02-27 19:36:35 +0000 UTCYUANA IM SO GLAD THAT YOU PICKED DRAWING AS A HOBBY 🥲🫶🏽🫵🏽 I BE BARKIN AND SHIIII😭😭
some.cucaracha
2025-02-27 19:36:14 +0000 UTCMy jealous ass is glad he's just jacking off instead of being a fuckboy hihi
tojishostage
2025-02-27 19:35:48 +0000 UTCYou put so much passion into everything you do, it shows ❤️ I love your stories and your interpretation of their personalities ❤️ Thank you!!
ShyTora
2025-02-27 19:35:44 +0000 UTCI like it that he isn't having frequent sex. That he was just jacking off. Thank you. I know it's hard work. This is another reason why you are a top tier creator. You go back and make changes and consider suggestions. The sheer commitment 👏 🙌 👌 💪. Thank you for all your work.
Queen Brittania
2025-02-27 19:30:25 +0000 UTCGosh those pages 🫠🫠🫠
Kitsune
2025-02-27 19:30:20 +0000 UTCMY HEART AND POSSAY IS THROBBING FROM THE EXCITEMENT HUHUHU THAT ORGASM AND IS THAT A CREAMPIE? 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈😆😆😆😆
Karla
2025-02-27 19:29:43 +0000 UTCakdhalfjalsj YUANA PLEASEEEE WHEN THEY MAKE U LOOK AT WHAT THEYRE DOING TO YOU. I FALL TO MY KNEES
mochu
2025-02-27 19:29:33 +0000 UTCOH MY GOD THE SKETCHES ALONE ARE INSANE YUANA!!😭😭😭🫶🏼🫶🏼🫶🏼
Dana 💥
2025-02-27 19:28:37 +0000 UTCOhhh can't wait
Jasmine Diaz
2025-02-27 19:28:17 +0000 UTCPillow!!!🫠🫠
ChrisAna
2025-02-27 19:28:04 +0000 UTCTHE FINAL PAGE YOOOO
Nelia
2025-02-27 19:27:33 +0000 UTC
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