February 6th, 2023
Added 2023-02-06 07:08:50 +0000 UTCBeen neglecting updates, partly cause I was trying to make some hard decisions on this page; looking at the after and before, I'm sure you can guess what they were. The last panel in the page was pretty good, though I wasn't entirely sold on Makwa's expression there, and there were a few things that needed tweaking in general. But panels 1 and 2 were lacking; Kian's expression was just bad, the motion of the hip swing didn't really feel like it was delivered, there was no reaction shot of Makwa for that. I'm not sure that I have solved all of those problems, but I have at least solved some of them; it means more panels, but as closeups, they don't really have background to speak of.
I've also got a couple sketches for you of the unnamed coywolf, one from last month (featuring einraeslost) and one from this month.
Comments
Ahh! I think the tweaks you made to the page made it way better the expression are hotter! and the closeup makes it look way more dynamic :3 Also that coywolf rocks!
Redwolf150
2023-02-06 07:41:26 +0000 UTC
