Fools Day Chapter 3 page 3
Added 2023-04-15 14:00:02 +0000 UTC
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Now it's a party!
Sean Harrington
2023-04-16 05:04:47 +0000 UTCThere are worse ways to mess up a mission! :D
Sean Harrington
2023-04-16 05:04:35 +0000 UTCThank you very much! I'm glad you're liking it!
Sean Harrington
2023-04-16 05:04:10 +0000 UTCWell, at least everybody had a great time screwing up (and down. And sideways. And off).
Joseph Bonnar
2023-04-16 04:20:15 +0000 UTCI gots a map to the Chief's home! And a rocket launcher!
Joseph Bonnar
2023-04-16 04:19:40 +0000 UTCSean is producing sooo much content and so many simul stories i need a map!
Hammer
2023-04-16 02:44:56 +0000 UTCRemember the name of the story! :D
Sean Harrington
2023-04-15 23:49:38 +0000 UTCI love the page but, at this point, I'm thoroughly confused as to who is stealing from who and who knows what. For example, apparently one of Spider's gang is stealing from Tawni - but what does she have that would be worth stealing and why would she bring it with her? Similarly, the Cards seem to have stolen from one of the twins but the same question -why would either of the twins brought anything worth stealing? One of the twins is stealing from the Cards but, if they got the prize in the first episode, then that may make sense. And then we've got the two Scottish (?) women stealing from another location -at this point, they may have been the only ones in this whole situation not to use sex to distract! (And even that is not clear). Elena and the redheaded leader both seem to know who the other one is - we knew that was true of Elena but not the redhead. Anyway, looking forward to all of this making sense!
PS17
2023-04-15 17:22:57 +0000 UTC
