His Nocturnal Excellency 15
Added 2023-11-20 11:18:22 +0000 UTCThere's no need for a translation ;3
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Now this is some high quality gay sex 👌
Candlesofsmoke
2023-11-20 20:51:17 +0000 UTCLooking good jeday
Crossbow1701
2023-11-20 18:51:24 +0000 UTCI am grateful for your support, you and other patrons are the only reason this story exists. Still this doesn't mean you can influence the story, as well as it doesn't mean you can ignore my requests of not questioning everything I do - this simply positions you as one not respecting me or my work at all. I could be drawing next page now, instead I am here and we are having this senseless conversation. Asking you once again - please spare me from your questions and critiscism, it makes me feel uncomfortable.
JedaySkayVoker
2023-11-20 12:29:26 +0000 UTCI think you are overreacting, I never said once I didn’t like the story, in fact I do like the story, and I said I do like this picture, so I am not sure where you are going with this line of reasoning, it feels unnecessary, I already said your first msg made full sense to me, and I was looking forward to the next page, you are the one who seems to have the issue now, not me, and I would ask to be a bit more respectful to those who support you, and not challenge what they said as being more than is actually intended, that’s the senseless part, criticism, good or bad, is apart of the job, so I intended to not say anymore on the subject.
Grant Hynd
2023-11-20 12:18:27 +0000 UTCI am also trying to ask you to not question every action of mine. I am grateful for your support, but such conversations are very annoying and senseless because next pages usually clear it out. If you don't like my story you have a full right to not read it, if you like it would be cool to give me some space. Thank you.
JedaySkayVoker
2023-11-20 12:09:59 +0000 UTCOne thing you should keep in mind, is yes, you may of explained it before, but I have only been a Patreon for a little while, so the times you may of explained it, I wasn’t here. Essentially all you had to say was, they are both acting at the same time, as if it’s written as a roleplay, time elapses even when the current page is focused on one pair. Which you did essentially say in your message, so that’s all that was needed, then i understood right away.
Grant Hynd
2023-11-20 12:05:25 +0000 UTCOCs are different as well as their personalities. Showing off their personal features and preferences in sex is what makes story interesting. You should also keep in mind that two pairs are fucking at the same time, and we are jumping from one to another to keep the story clear and to avoid the "travelling in time". Being completely honest everything I do in the story has a clear reason behind it, but I m tired to explain it every time.. Maybe sometimes you should just wait for next pages and then you will understand the purpose of this all?.. Please be patient.
JedaySkayVoker
2023-11-20 12:02:14 +0000 UTCWhile I do like this as a page in its own right, it feels like a bit of a jump from the previous, in the previous it felt more like the first pair has a bit of build up before giving him oral, but in this page it’s just straight into the action, as if he was already mid fucking him, for example no showing of the penetration and their reactions, it’s just right into it, when to me I felt it would of been similar to the last, having a little introduction, then he fucks him, if that makes sense, again, I like it as it is on its own, but for continuity, it feels little off is all.
Grant Hynd
2023-11-20 11:55:39 +0000 UTCSomething looms in these stallions' future. Is it an opportunity? A threat? All a matter of perspective, it seems~
Silver Scroll
2023-11-20 11:19:57 +0000 UTC
