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BLINDFOLD ch.132

I hope my crisis is over 🤞

BLINDFOLD ch.132

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I know years have gone by since you got a block, but you doing a great job (both drawing and writing), take your time when needed

Nick

Yes!!!! They're back!!!!! 😍❤️☺️

Aretoussa

Niceee again 🙌

Nat GD

So tender 🥺❤️

Joanna

The moment they intertwine their fingers so Mitsu can be sure she is not hallucinating... It's so soft I'm in a puddle.

Kymilink

Screaming because they’re back!! 🥰🥰 Stunning as usual! Also, the character development for these two never ceases to amaze me 😭

JessyRnyx

oh goddes yes!!! they are back 😍 ugggh it's insane how much I love them ❤️❤️❤️

Carina

God, it seems to me that all authors live for such comments! When the reader gives such detailed feedback. Yes, I needed a break and I didn't even understand why, since I had already come up with the plot to the end. But I couldn't draw the details. And the whole problem was that I didn't understand Mitsu's condition. Although this character is very close to me. I didn't understand how she would behave. And recently, I discovered this. It seemed like such a small thing, but she wouldn't let me move any further. So it's valuable.

Mashersan

Sure ))) I had to make it already 🙃

Mashersan

Ahahahah - be careful but run fast👌

Mashersan

I like how you transitioned from the their relationship plot (AKA moments of care and concern) to the mystery plot (asking about Reed). It was extremely successful this chapter. The opening scenes and after showed us that Celia can be empathetic and caring even though it is hard for her/she tries to avoid emotion. So there was a lot of reader satisfaction in seeing that softer side of her. Additionally, Mitsu got to see that Celia cares about her, which doesn’t solve everything for their relationship arc but it is forward progress. And we got Mitsu opening up about being afraid because of the incident. Which you perfectly utilized to transition back to the mystery plot. Because of course the way Celia helps others deal with emotions is through establishing logic. (On a side note: it leave me curious as to how Celia and everyone else will react when they find out it wasn’t Reed 😏). Finally, leaving off with “Why didn’t you tell me about Reed?” opens up a natural dialogue next chapter for “what else do we both know that we haven’t shared with each other” in a way that won’t feel like an info dump to readers because it is them finally walking through things as a team. I think you really smashed it this chapter. I know just how hard it can be to have organic transitions when you have multiple plots and threads in a single story. I really love this story and the character so much! 😆 You are amazing! I wish you good writing luck and no more frustrating blocks for the rest of the story because you don’t need any luck with the art, it is already perfection 😁.

abardnamedkate

Aaaaah ! The babies are back !!!! Guess it’s time to reread from the beginning again !

theamazon13

Almost broke my ankle running here. 🏃‍♀️ This is Stunning! So excited

Kinsale


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