Update on Chapter 9
Added 2023-08-28 14:13:21 +0000 UTCAs commented upon by multiple readers here, Chapter 9 had some glaring OOC moments for Harry Potter as well as reactions from Sirius/Daphne/Fleur/Others that did not fit the theme of the last several chapters. So we went ahead and heavily edited it to make it more cohesive.
Please check it out.
Comments
We actually had to add some minor portions to Chap 4 - Animagery to make it more cohesive, as well as minor improvements to Chap 10. You do not actually have to go reread Chap 4 to continue with the story though.
The BlackStaff and NightMarE
2023-08-28 16:08:12 +0000 UTCI must say a massive rewrite wasn't expected or what I had in mind as a solution but I'm very happy you went and did it, regardless of feelings about that chapter. In my opinion it's far more the Harry we've seen since Act 2 ended and Act 3 started, and it's nice that the scene I read as OOC turned into something that isn't just in character but contains nice development of several relationships and story points.
Conor Mason
2023-08-28 15:57:19 +0000 UTC
