"Umbra's Edge 04 - Dumb Enough // Tangible Proof" comment/feedback post
Added 2026-01-31 15:11:34 +0000 UTCPart four of Umbra's Edge has finally been uploaded!
Click here for the updated PDF folder.
The artwork by Lucien is going out now to members of the art tier(s).
Any comments and feedback on the story? I'd love it if you were to leave them here!
Comments
Your feedback is always helpful and appreciated! Personally I think the porny bits were a little too short in this chapter, but time was slipping away from me and I had to get it posted on time so, regrettably sacrifices had to be made. Hope what there was of it was to people's liking, however.
BKM
2026-02-01 06:18:47 +0000 UTCLike mentioned previously on the other chapters, I do personally enjoy the continued world building aspects of this series, learning more about the corporations, politics, people, etc. Such details are always appreciated and help make the setting feel more authentic and interesting. It seems Miss Schwarz did indeed find a use for Kryno, the hints of cloning and mutations along with the asset / true AI certainly seems like she's planning something major. The erotic sections were brief but well described and presented, from the "coffin" and mechanisms to Trix being unable to control herself as she uses Kyrno every chance she gets. It was quite humorous when Aleksandra's group encountered Trix while she was busy with Kryno and the follow up scene when she decided to personally collect a sample from him as a way of leaving the facility with something of value. Aleksandra's group really were in over their heads and thinking they could just walk in without any trouble, given the reputation and security Schwarz & König are known for. When the true AI revealed itself you could definitely feel the sense of cold horror knowing the AI was aware of them the entire time. Overall I enjoyed this chapter and of course the artwork from Lucien is always fantastic to see when accompanying these stories. Very much looking forward to the next chapter whenever that may be.
DeviantHunter
2026-02-01 00:09:35 +0000 UTC
