"An Examination of Deadly Sins" comment/feedback post
Added 2025-11-29 12:19:30 +0000 UTCFinally had the time/energy to write again, and it feels nice. Not what I intended to produce, as I am still waiting on the artwork for the next part of "Umbra's Edge" which sits woefully incomplete at "almost done", but then the artist, like me, has a busy schedule at home. I also have (I think) an order in for new artwork for "The Power of Submission" which will allow me to continue that, which some of you have asked about. Hopefully that will be done soonish as well.
So for this month, I hope you will enjoy the new original short, "An Examination of Deadly Sins", the PDF of which can be accessed here in the updated PDF folder. The accompanying artwork is being sent out now to members of the art tier. As always your comments are most appreciated, and you can comment them on this post if you wish!
Hope you will enjoy this little tale, and I hope you all have a good weekend!
-J
Comments
Good to see you having the time and enjoying writing again and I do hope you're doing well. I quite liked this short story and the theme and interpretation of this story's version of the afterlife. The buildup and descriptions were brief but had enough detail to keep it engaging until the eventual erotic scene. The judgement rendered for the male character is quite fitting given his particular deadly sin and having Dawn and Dusk taking care of him for that period of time would certainly be considered both pleasurable and punishment lol. I did enjoy Dawn and Dusk's characterization, with one being more sultry and teasing while the other more warm and gentle, yet both eager and dedicated to perform their service. Overall this was definitely a short yet sweet story and the accompanying artwork from AndysDames is fantastic! Looking forward to the next chapter of Umbra's Edge and The Power of Submission as well!
DeviantHunter
2025-11-30 01:08:06 +0000 UTC
