The House Special, a D&D tale
Added 2025-03-28 18:18:25 +0000 UTCThis is the feedback and comment-post for the short story "The House Special, a D&D tale".
The PDF can be downloaded by all members here.
The link with the artwork by Elwinne will be DM'd to all members of the art tier. I got several versions of the artwork (clothed, nude, wet, dry, in different configurations) and decided just to share all of them rather than singling out one or two.
Hope you enjoy this Dungeons & Dragons-inspired story, and as always, I appreciate your patience and support, and also as always I really enjoy hearing your feedback.
Have a great weekend!
-J
Comments
This was a rather fun story set within Dungeons & Dragons and I certainly enjoyed the overall tone of it. I particularly like how you take time and effort to setup a scenario for the central character, not only for this story but in general with the others you've written. Such details are important in my opinion and you've always structured such scenes incredibly well. The setting being DnD inspired was quite nice and the beginning scene with Dilynrae was wonderfully described and erotic. You get the feeling of it being a DnD brothel as they conduct business with their patrons, where you're not sure if the girls are acting/performing or actually into their profession. I thought the idea of having a dungeon below the brothel was well done and I found it quite interesting how the Madam was into both sides of the business. When Red and Blue enter the story, you expertly build up the scene with the right amount of tension and teasing as they toy with the guy. Their interactions between each other and with the guy were displayed in a entertaining yet sexy manner. Overall while this story would probably be considered softcore (At least compared to some of your other stories) I definitely found it to be entertaining and I wouldn't mind you pursuing further DnD inspired stories in the future, given the amount of potential the setting has. Finally Elwinne did a fantastic job on the accompanying artwork and it's variants!
DeviantHunter
2025-03-29 08:30:58 +0000 UTC
