Life and death at the end of the world 109
Added 2025-07-05 16:34:32 +0000 UTC
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Thanks for your feedback, Mew. I still think there are some sex scenes we haven’t been able to explore properly (like a threesome, for example). The pacing of the story tends to slow down when there’s a sex scene — it kinda reminds me of Goku’s fights that lasted months for the viewers but only minutes for the characters... I’ll definitely reconsider this for the future, but I do feel these pages were necessary. Maybe we’ll find out more about this mysterious impaler (who, funnily enough, looks a lot like Iruka) later on. This phase of Hinata, according to the timeline of the saga, is one of total abandon — she dives into the most depraved practices. I had a few wild ideas, but fear of censorship made me hesitate... Great observation about the doggystyle — it’s true, there are plenty of positions left to explore, and I’ll keep that in mind. I think the best way to keep the story flowing is to make sure the sex scenes move the plot forward, rather than just being add-ons. We’re approaching the final stretch of the comic now, although I feel there’s still a lot left to tell. I’ll have to use ellipses here and there to keep things moving.
Super Melons
2025-07-06 21:06:22 +0000 UTCI want to say that I really enjoyed the “Impaler” short run. It’s exactly what this comic needed What I really like about this short encounter is three things: 1) This set ups a memorable and significant character for Hinata to fuck during her “unbridled sex phase.” Their dialogue played a huge roll in making him interesting. 2) It progressed the story during the sexual encounter. Most of the time when Hinata is having sex with a character this pauses the story’s narrative. Which is why we’re over 100 pages now. It slows down the pacing. Now in 5-6 pages we got introduced to an interesting character that makes her nymphomania “arc” significant. The impaler progress the story’s narrative and maybe hes a significant character depending on the next page. 3) introduced new sexual acts. Anal toys are not my favorite thing but I didn’t mind it because it made send to use it narratively so I enjoyed the sexual act. I liked the modified dodgy style with her feet up and the page where he grabs her neck. We’ve seen lots of doggystyle in these comics but these were the best yet! Sakura’s client, Iwabe, Kenta, and the Greek’s Nephew all had some elements of these three things. I think the nephew scenes were good but the Impaler with the new and innovative sex progressing the story is the best yet! I hope this trend continues!
Mew
2025-07-06 07:13:46 +0000 UTCthanks!
Super Melons
2025-07-06 06:23:03 +0000 UTCcool
George I
2025-07-05 20:10:29 +0000 UTC
