Life and death at the end of the world 007
Added 2024-11-15 03:23:52 +0000 UTC
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I agree as well. I wrote with the intention that if she’s going to be traveling around there should be a reason tying her to Naruto and it fits her character that had a sense of duty. I believe this is the character she’s going to become ultimately; confident, love of sex, cold, and strong sense of duty. I think the whole sex and politics stuff can be a good reason how she met this wealthy Greek husband of hers lol I believe the Raikage is not like the pathetic, downtrodden men Hinata fucks, so he won’t suffer the same fate as them. I like the story of her getting experienced with sex before she met him and sought it as a challenge to improve her skills. The first time it was on sided where should couldn’t keep up so from time to time she would visit to test herself. Hanabi’s involvement is because I would want to see, Raikage and her fucking lol, but also because she’s aware of Hinata’s role. She’s trying to break the last dependency Naruto has for Hinata so she’s sabotaging her sister’s diplomatic work. I also agree her visit to the village she was staying in was her first step to diplomacy but also to vacation. And that is separate to where she’s living currently where she had sex with Ryota. I’d like to believe that’s a more remote location. I’m glad you liked it! I’m open to making more of these if it helps!
Mew
2024-11-16 16:39:05 +0000 UTCVeo que Hanabi no soltara a Naruto por nada del mundo Xd...Asi que a Hinata no le quedara mas remedio que buscar (entre cientos) al padre de su hijo (Iruka?) PSD: No se si Tenten acepte compartir a Iruka con Hinata dado que incluso termino con su novio por culpa de Hinata pero si esta tan desesperada por casarse y tener familia no le quedara otra alternativa. PSD2: Es verdad a simple vista es extraño saber porque Hinata se enamoro perdidamente de Iruka (La respuesta es simple y contundente : sexo anal salvaje xd) y eso puede despertar la curiosodad sexual de mujeres abocadas al sexo como Sakura y Temari (Y por supueso Ino) PSD3: Gracias por tus aportes...ayudan y es genial leerlos!!!
Super Melons
2024-11-16 13:11:37 +0000 UTCDamn, the description of the setting is amazing, and the context is spot on. (The scene with the clothes thrown on the floor and the detail about the springs as an intro to the sex scene is something I’ll definitely implement.) Great work, Mew! I love Hinata’s coldness after the sexual encounter. After reading your input, I really like the idea that Hinata has been actively involved as the Hokage’s wife in diplomatic and community matters. Even after being "possessed by the ghost" and shifting her sexual focus, she hasn’t stopped fulfilling her role. (Of course, blending sex with politics, lol.) As an important Hyuga representative, she still has a strong sense of duty despite everything she’s going through. Naruto knows this well and has developed a certain dependency on her, which makes officially separating from her very difficult—almost impossible. On the other hand, Hanabi couldn’t care less about these responsibilities. I even want to think that Hinata took that vacation to the village where she met Iruka for health and work reasons. These reflections, I think, add an interesting layer to her personality. Also, the dialogues are the best part of your story. I hope I get the chance to incorporate it in one way or another. Thanks for your time and for sharing this!
Super Melons
2024-11-16 12:58:53 +0000 UTCThanks man! Why don't you add in the next pages? I can't wait to see her a killer slutty rider girl
George I
2024-11-16 12:56:36 +0000 UTCI think Hinata has lost more than Iruka... and, like Timothy, she’s hit rock bottom. Someone like that is capable of anything. I hope we can create an arc with Sasuke—nothing is off the table.
Super Melons
2024-11-16 12:26:52 +0000 UTCIt’s an interesting angle... because Hinata feels disappointed in everything and everyone.
Super Melons
2024-11-16 12:23:56 +0000 UTCCool! Now I want in the next page a blank period where we see Hinata completely different with the purpose "to heal" bad feelings. She becomes a slutty killer assertive evil biker girl!
George I
2024-11-15 11:31:52 +0000 UTCI Can already see the anger growing in hinata. She has to get revenge on Naruto and Hanabi by fucking someone they know. As I said in the other post I think Sasuke would be a good person to get revenge
Leon
2024-11-15 08:57:47 +0000 UTCAwesome! What a revelation! Looking forward to the next few pages. Im curious to see how this story is going to unfold. This set up opens opportunity for Hinata to embrace her promiscuity. Speaking of which I have a story suggest for a possible Hinata and Raikage hookup that could be incorporated to this story. Please bear with me a: I took time to type this out and it’s long. I hope the format works well for you to understand. *Exterior shot of the Raikage’s office building overlooking the cloud village. It’s dawn and we can see the sun raising over the horizon. Raikage: “oh fuck Hinata” *We pan over the Raikage’s office, piles of paper on his desk but the office is empty. We hear: Raikage: “oh yeah keep going, ride that dick” As we pan over we see piles of clothes lying on the ground, leading toward the side of the office and we hear moans coming from the other side of the door. We then hear: Hinata: “Ah ah ah oh god, Raikage-sama” Raikage: “Yeah keep going you Hyuga slut!” Next we see Hinata riding the Raikage, with one hand holding her right boob and the other behind his head holding himself up. The bed spring are making a lot noise as Hinata bounces on the Raikage’s dick, showing how hard she’s fucking him. Hinata has her hands resting on the wall just above the Raikage’ head, giving herself more leverage to thrust onto his dick. Next we see a silhouette of them as the sun shines through the Raikage’s window walls with the view of the city down below. We can see Hinata thrusting hard on the Raikage. Hinata as she’s riding looks at the Raikage and says confidently: “how do you like that? Didn’t expect this, did you?” *moan* Raikage impressed with her performance says: “Hehe, where did this come from? Is it because today is our last day together?” Hinata: “what do you think? Better than last time, right?” Raikage: “I’ve honestly lost track how many times we’ve fucked, haha” We see Hinata put her hands on his chest, showing signs she’s about to cum. The Raikage wraps his hands on her waist as he his expression changes from cool confident to ecstasy as he’s starting to tense up. Hinata: “Oh my god I’m about to cum” Raikage: “Oh fuck, me too!” As he the Raikage exclaims, he grabs Hinata’s ass and starts to thrust upwards, tensing up building to the climax. As he is thrusting he starts sweating and sparks of lightning starts surrounding them. Hinata: “Yes! Let’s come together Raikage-sama! She slumps over getting face to face with the Raikage as she’s about to cum. The Raikage locks eye with her and exclaims: “fuck that’s it, I’m coming! His eyes go white as he explodes inside Hinata’s pussy. Hinata cums as well digging her nails into the Raikage’s chest as she cums on his dick: “Yes! Raikage-sama give me all that cum!” We see the Raikage’s veiny dick pulsating as a both of their juices start flowing down his long shaft. Both laying next to each other trying to catch their breath the Raikage says: “New record! That’s the longest session we’ve had, look it’s already dawn. I wouldn’t be surprised if you get pregnant after this haha.” Hinata still trying to catch her breath says: “Me too. That was amazing” We see the Raikage’s cum dripping from her pussy. Raikage: “Well, I better start getting ready. Send my best regards to the Hokage. He sent the best “negotiator” for these peace negotiations! Haha To think that scrawny man was having amazing sex with you.” Hinata gets up and starting putting her panties says: Hinata: “No, actually. I’ve only recently started getting good at this. It’s a long story, I don’t want to bore you with the details. Let’s just say I’m a complete different person now.” The Raikage sit ups on the side of the bed getting dressed looks over the city. Raikage: “You Hyugas sure are something. By the way… I’ve been getting reports from my anbu of a masked vigilante attacking civilians. Reports say of a curvaceous woman with long black hair. It’s interesting, the victims are all men.” Hinata putting her bra on turns her back towards the Raikage. Hinata: “Why are you bring this up to me?” Raikage as he puts his sandals on says: “My intel informed me she has “white eyes”. The only people in this world with that fit that description are the byakugan. Of course there is history of our village abducting members of your clan in the past, I would hope after the last war there will be no ill will towards us.” Hinata finishing clipping her bra says: “You believe I have some involvement of this? I understand your suspicion but unfortunately I don’t have any knowledge of this vigilante. Members of my clan are not allowed to mess with foreign affairs, thanks to the efforts of my husb… Hinata pauses as she almost says husband then corrects herself: Hinata: … thanks to the efforts of my husb…the lord hokage, your intel needs to confirm these claims, we’re not trying to ruin our relationship with your village.” Hinata finishes dressing and turns around and hand papers to the Raikage. Hinata: “Well, Raikage-sama I have thoroughly enjoyed the sex the last few days.. unfortunately I have other matters to attend. I will be out of reach for a while… please sign these treaties and have them sent directly to lord hokage. Raikage leans over and grabs the paper. Without looking at them he smirks and says: Raikage: “I’m glad to hear you enjoyed yourself. I’ll admit the first time you came I expected a shy, timid, reserved woman but instead I learned how big slut you are. I’m curious how did you get this good? That scrawny brat could not be the reason. Not many women can keep with my stamina. Hinata smirks as the Raikage compliments her performance. Hinata: “If I would to tell you how, it would just get you in the mood for another round and unfortunately for you I’m low on time. For know just know you’ve met your match. I hope you can still keep up for next time, old man. Hinata starts to walk away. The Raikage with no words to say gets up and walks towards his window looking his village. He smiles of excitement at the prospect of have sex with Hinata. He reaches for a photo inside his coat and it’s a picture of Hanabi in disguise. He whispers to himself: Raikage: “I’ll find you… somehow.” Please let me know what you think. Apologies for such a long post.
Mew
2024-11-15 07:31:28 +0000 UTCHanabi tiene razón ya que hinata busque su felicidad con el hombre que la preño (iruka tal vez) PSD: se me acaba de ocurrir que tal vez iruka se pudiese quedar con hinata y tenten al final como un triángulo matrimonial o algo así PSD 2: se me ocurrió algo más loco basándome en la fumada anterior, tal vez para el final de toda la historia donde por extrañas circunstancias iruka termine en una orgía donde el se folle a hinata, tenten, Sakura, ino y Temari con estas últimas 3 tras querer saber el porqué hinata se fugó con el y tenten se casó con el, pensando en que es porque la satisface muy bien (puede ser) sin saber que es porque hinata si se enamoró de el (nosotros sabemos el porque) y tenten porque no desea morir soltera (solo nosotros sabemos) PSD 3: perdón por las fumadas per es lo primero que se me ocurre XD como siempre Gran trabajo
Yuu-Darkness
2024-11-15 05:39:52 +0000 UTC
