Kumiko | World Builder Project
Added 2024-10-14 23:41:25 +0000 UTCThis is Kumiko... this design was inspired by Avatar Juan’s drawing (thanks for sharing your art, buddy), and I thought it’d be awesome to share it with you all.
Just like in the last post, nothing’s final yet, so feel free to leave your feedback in the comments.
In a few days, I’ll post a poll to help decide the final design.
Also, in just a few days, we’ll be releasing the first pages of the new legendary comic in the "Hinata, Daughter of the Devil" saga (Life and Death at the End of the World).
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Yeah, Jamie Lee Curtis is super sexy... that scene always blew my mind. XD As for the translucent nipples, I’ll be adding that to the new Hinata comic, so don’t worry about it (the Halloween 2024 comic is already pretty far along, so I can’t edit it anymore). Thanks for the suggestion!
Super Melons
2024-10-18 00:43:19 +0000 UTCCool
George I
2024-10-16 20:50:26 +0000 UTCyeah, but you designed it like tranparent (same like she was naked)and with combination of colours, but now choose something like scene from True lies film (strip scene) for better example. Combination of black dress and the underwears in that scene was masterpiece. Try to not to overcook design and make it simple (clear black). For this its fine to share it here for critic ;). ....Today you uploaded the page of Red Comet comics and if you changed designe of corset to bra with clean black color and hide boob little bit, it has right direction from our feedback. :)
RiderBoss
2024-10-16 17:02:47 +0000 UTCInteresting option... we definitely need to do a poll about it. Maybe we’ll use both designs like you said, but with different leading roles. I think all this will lead to creating an interesting world with plenty of possibilities.
Super Melons
2024-10-16 15:12:14 +0000 UTCThat's a good point. We've previously done detailed designs of black lingerie (you can see more of it in Sand Women and Angel Savior 2). As for the issue of nipples showing through clothing, we’ve received similar feedback before, so we’ll definitely incorporate that into our stories. (It’s a habit we carried over from the early comics we made, and since they were short, we aimed for a more immediate erotic effect.) It’s a great observation as we prepare to publish the new Hinata comic, so I’ll keep that in mind.
Super Melons
2024-10-16 14:39:31 +0000 UTCI agree as well. A small critique I have is the models don’t have to be too revealing. An example is the nipples through the shirt, it’s just as sexy and exciting if the model showed cleavage. Short dresses or skits, it’s just as sexy if it accentuate the models curves, butt, hips than just showing the pussy and butt. I believe teasing the body reveal as soon as the plot asks for it. Example: Hinata has an amazing body. Big boobs, amazing ass and appealing pussy. Rather than outright showing these features, use the clothing she’s wearing to promote and tease her features so when she starts getting undressed, it’s more impactful. Imagine, Hinata has been teasing her cleavage not only to the male characters she’s about to fuck but also us the readers, so when she reveals her boobs and they flop out her bra, it’s impactful.
Mew
2024-10-16 02:36:03 +0000 UTCI think its nice model, well done, good job and my opinion about extra details can be adding model with underwear (black lingerie/bra and tanga-same color). Black colour is sexy on girls. One model with clothes showing on shoulder straps and one without clothes only in underwears. I dont know about story behind but from my side of reading comics are important details for creating atmosphere or mystery of story. I dont want to critizes your ilustrations or something but sometimes its fine to see little less from figures of story (nipples through shirt) and waiting to plot of action (story), if you understand me ;).
RiderBoss
2024-10-15 14:19:06 +0000 UTCWanted to say the Same thing
Leon
2024-10-15 06:28:00 +0000 UTCI thought that the design of the previous publication fits better with the intention of the story, it gives an image that in her youth she was a girl who does not break a plate and has nothing to do with a man-eating gyaru and that in the present she is a wife exemplary and this version is a great design but it gives an image of a woman who may be married but who works and is not a housewife or a single milf, but it gives an image of having a lot of experience with men since her youth. The previous design fits better to be the protagonist and this one is the friend of the milf from the previous design, (I imagine a plot twist where the one who looks more like a traditional housewife (previous design of glasses) put her friend (the design of this publication) to the world of lust and AV (With the latter being the most innocent and shy about things of sex.
Yuu-Darkness
2024-10-15 04:03:44 +0000 UTCI think this would fit more with the AV adult porn star background, she's got the motherly look for someone trying to hide their past.
BigBallENRGY
2024-10-15 02:47:26 +0000 UTC
