Team JNBY 1 - WIP 2
Added 2022-03-31 01:52:02 +0000 UTCI finish cleaning the sketch and now it's ready for the line art. Not only that, but I also made an alternative version of the last panel (that's not the extra scene, by the way), and I also draw Blake's weapons that I forgot to add, ups. Other changes that I made were on the dialogue, I believe it has a better flow now. But overall the whole strip has a better look now.
Thanks to my Patreons that allowed me to borrow their OCs for the first panel.
Slasher Bunnies: https://mega.nz/folder/UYFWWRjZ
Psycho Bunnies: https://mega.nz/folder/dJEURTob
Mean Bunnies: https://mega.nz/folder/5ZdiSDqA
Comments
This was a lot of improvements in a short time. The muscle definition for the characters is so much better. The way the dialogue flows was indeed better, especially at the start, going from formal to a much more natural voice. And that alternative scene was hilarious, the puns but especially Blake's. Great stuff!
ScribeOfS
2022-03-31 02:22:45 +0000 UTC
