Team JNBY 1 - WIP 1
Added 2022-03-27 00:04:18 +0000 UTCI believe that this first strip can tell how the rest of the comic will be. I may have made the expository dialogue a bit too long, but I'm still debating if I should change it or not.
I still have to clean the sketch a bit more, but once I'm done I'll start working on the sketch for the especial extra scene.
Slasher Bunnies: https://mega.nz/folder/UYFWWRjZ
Psycho Bunnies: https://mega.nz/folder/dJEURTob
Mean Bunnies: https://mega.nz/folder/5ZdiSDqA
Comments
It did. Thank you.
Casey Jeffery-Greer
2022-03-27 02:01:19 +0000 UTCI just send you the key once again. Let me know if it works now.
2022-03-27 01:48:51 +0000 UTCHe would also show off his meat
2022-03-27 01:20:50 +0000 UTCWhat is the decryption code?
Casey Jeffery-Greer
2022-03-27 01:16:58 +0000 UTCLove how expressive you made them here. Nora is very enthusiastic, especially. And of course Blake would hide her face before anything, Yang has probably been in a police lineup many times, Nora wouldn't care anyway and this is Jaune's first offense. And everyone's major features getting shown off in the middle panel. As for dialogue it fits Jaune. He can be pretty rambling, especially when he's talking about himself, so it works with me.
ScribeOfS
2022-03-27 01:04:24 +0000 UTC
