Intent of ReForm
Added 2016-09-09 22:02:25 +0000 UTC
Comments
Would've been interesting to see how you might've pulled off the first shot, but I like this dynamic better. Grit + grit can fall flat pretty quickly.
CappuccinoSquid
2016-09-10 07:59:39 +0000 UTCLove the new character. Much better to have someone that can actually partake in the story rather than just "be there".
Kenneth
2016-09-10 04:59:29 +0000 UTCYes, this is much better, thanks for the editing, Zdemian. Making her partner... alive is definitely an improvement, she's got a nice design, and the redo of the page with the cute bookworm helps give more character already, instead of just a rant.
BioYuGi
2016-09-09 22:30:53 +0000 UTCThis new character kind of reminds me of the pink hair vampire girl from Rosario + Vampire. =o
Loner2000
2016-09-09 22:26:39 +0000 UTCThe new girl is super cute, I think she'll work a lot better to make the story more interesting and less stiff, it opens more paths for events to happen with her and conflict with the MC
snakebit1995
2016-09-09 22:23:42 +0000 UTCIs it the idea that LG is pretty much (and no offense meant by this) a one joke character? Love the redesign.
2016-09-09 22:12:07 +0000 UTCI found the log funny, not everything you draw has to be giant boobs. I'd even read Twilight if it was drawn by you!
Shelby
2016-09-09 22:09:25 +0000 UTC
![さとと [satoto]](https://nokimo.com/istorage/108048.jpg)
