Let's Burn Some Muscle!! p99
Added 2014-11-12 06:49:26 +0000 UTC
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Just noticed another subtle clue which shows us how unaccustomed Alexis have become at that seemingly simple “living in her own body” thing. It was apparent on previous page, too, although it was not as pronounced. Look on Alexis skirt. It's not a secret that most skirts must be adjusted from time to time—or they are riding up. Females usually do that discreetly thus some males are not even aware of that fact. But if you'll take look on the last frame of the previous page and, especially, on the first frame if this page then it becomes clear that Alexis forgot all about that. Which shows us that it was a looong time since she actually worn the skirt. Again: got to commend zdemian's thoroughness here. But in related vein… on previous page Alexis wore some kind of socks (or slippers?), here she's barefoot. I know that her headgear (connected to figurehead) magically disappears and reappears thus it may be just a similar thing… or perhaps it signifies something, too?
Khimru
2014-11-14 04:46:23 +0000 UTCdude, I'm in love with the way you draw lips
foducool
2014-11-12 16:25:15 +0000 UTCAh, you meant the 16th page of the fourth chapter. I see.
BioYuGi
2014-11-12 12:44:48 +0000 UTCWell, file is called LBSM_c4_16.jpg, thus it's 16th page, but HTML claims it's page91, so there: <a href="http://www.patreon.com/creation?hid=1084662">http://www.patreon.com/creation?hid=1084662</a>
Khimru
2014-11-12 12:42:54 +0000 UTCDo you have the right page number on that? Page 16 is where she's starting to recover after a blissful orgasm in the shower.
BioYuGi
2014-11-12 12:14:18 +0000 UTCHer hair was long on page 16 (the very first page where we see Alexis after a timeskip) but it was quite obviously greasy and unkempt. That's why I said that “Alexis now hates her own body and kind of tries to BECOME her figurehead” back then: I'm not sure if I completely agree with the idea that “a girl's hair is her life”, but I've only ever seen females with such a neglected hair when they were in deep depression (or were overwhelmed or had no easy access to running water, etc—but I doubt it's a problem for Alexis). Here her hair is finally properly shampooed and conditioned which practically makes her a different person. I think her hair looks better now then it did at the beginning of the comic (although I'm not sure zdemian himself will agree, LOL: I know he likes short hair). P.S. I've got to commend zdemian's thoroughness here: very few authors draw characters with enough details to see if they have “greasy unkempt hair” or “clean fluffy hair”.
Khimru
2014-11-12 09:03:12 +0000 UTCI am enjoying the fact that Alexis' hair has grown in the last couple of months. Its probably been brought up in earlier pics but it does make this series so much the better.
Ross Kandlbinder
2014-11-12 07:31:02 +0000 UTCVery sweet page. Have Alexis seen her own pictures? She's just too much fun not to tease: she's absolutely adorable when flustered! P.S. Minor issue: I'm not sure I understand how that bed is supposed to work. Pillows are just too far from Alexis body to be of any use!
Khimru
2014-11-12 07:12:42 +0000 UTC
