K 01.1
Added 2025-03-23 13:21:21 +0000 UTCin progress
sorry, i've been trying to redraw the first page and the second page all month, i don't like what i'm getting. in my head it looks better, but i just can't achieve it yet
maybe I'll draw it again, I'm thinking and trying, sorry
character by the Pit
thanks for the help OverworkedEditor
and my friend AQRA
Comments
sounds fair, thanks) plus I need to connect with the old pages, I'm trying to find something average in style, I hope you like the new versions.
temogam
2025-04-22 18:23:33 +0000 UTCthank you)
temogam
2025-04-22 18:18:55 +0000 UTCGreat work so far! Love the facial expressions!
BBC Waifu
2025-03-23 15:41:28 +0000 UTCSo, regarding the issues you might stuck in: 1. First version of this pic got too warm color temperature, while the recent is just more cool, and such change looks better! 2. The anatomic position of jaw during the talk of chracters is in the way like they're preparing to swallow the huge schlong :O I know that it kinda your specific style, that still look quite hot, but might feel like there's something wrong in the pic. 3. On the same comic pic there's a difference between Kitty's antropometry: buttock-shoulder height, buttock-knee height and popliteal height. To my small opinion - while she's laying it's just perfect! The rest is just cool, nothing to add. I hope you'll find out the way which will totally satisfy you! Good luck!)
Mael Kae
2025-03-23 15:17:18 +0000 UTCI gotta say it's good stuff, but in my opinion I think it's just the lighting or the shading it really looks good but I feel that what your trying to figure out. To me this one feel to light like the brightness was turned up from the other versions. But then again that's just me lol. As I said real good stuff!!
Zegan
2025-03-23 13:25:57 +0000 UTC
