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Sorry, it seems I’ve forgotten how to draw, or I just realized that I’m bad at drawing, I spent the whole month redrawing the last three drawings (fanart of the Pit characters). The more I begin to refine the drawing, the less I like it. More dirt appears when drawing in detail. I think I've become dumb after the depression. from everything I understood, I like the stage of a sketch or sketch from a spot, when I have not yet crammed in a lot of dirty colors and the drawing looks even more blurry

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How can you say you're bad? I still miss your collabs with Tufos. You're one of the goats

bufalo

I agree.

CoxvilleWikiCurator

These are great Temo however I would suggest that you increase Kitty’s tits size so that it is close to Susan’s. Susan’s tits are only slightly bigger than Kitty’s and so Kitty’s tits need to be made bigger to show that they are only slightly smaller than Susan’s. Kitty tits look a bit too small in the pics where she is drawn alongside the other cheerleaders. The order for tits size out of the cheerleaders goes Patty with the biggest, followed by Susan and then Kitty is slightly smaller than Susan’s, then Miko is smaller than Kitty and Pam has the smallest tits. I think the sizes are good except for Kitty who should be much closer to Susan and Miko who should be slightly bigger than Pam but still substantially smaller than Kitty. Kitty is famed in the lore for being supremely curvy with her small height, so her tits are slightly smaller than Susan’s, meaning they need to be bigger than they are drawn here. Plus, Kitty has the most perfectly round bubble butt in the Coxville Universe alongside her mother. Jenny and Kitty’s bubble butts are the most perfect ever and Kitty’s bubble butt is emphasised in the story and art. Here Miko’s ass looks far more pronounced than Kitty’s when Kitty’s bubble butt is supposed to be the most perfectly round and pronounced out of the teens. Kitty is short but she is incredibly curvy for her size due to her big astonishingly round tits and impossibly round bulbous bubble butt.

QWEASDZXC

I can guarantee you that you aren't bad at drawing. It is natural to try to refine the art process, especially when suffering from a depressive episode. However, in my opinion, oversimplifying a drawing also hurts the art itself, that results in that blurry look you mentioned in this post, which is very noticeable when the hands are shown. That is why a black outline/linework helps to make the art more "stable", if that makes any sense. Also, I really hope the poll you made will help you come to a decision about the direction you want to go :) You are one of the best artists I know of. Please, take care of your own health first. I'm sure every one of us on here will be happy to help you with advice if you want, at any time. So please, don't talk down on yourself, I'm sure the depression would pass and you'll be happy again.

CoxvilleWikiCurator

I think these are great Temo, your artstyle is second to none and you are one of the most talented artists out there, these look as good as anything you have done. I love seeing the cheerleaders, especially Kitty. I love Jenny and Kitty more than anything I think you capture the girls looks and personalities well in these images. I love how you show Kitty making the heart with her hands just like you did with Queen Jenny in the pic with the Housewives. Jenny and Kitty are the Queen and Princess of the Coxville Universe, Jenny is the supreme BBC slut, the ultimate ultra busty bimbo whore with the most legendary and gigantic tits in the Coxville Universe. Her legendary cardinal physical traits are her unparalleled beauty, her astonishing blue eyes, her golden blonde hair and of course her legendary, humongous tits. Jenny is revered by everyone in the country as a goddess, the Queen of the Coxville County, and Kitty as her daughter is just astonishingly beautiful as Jenny. I think you capture Kitty’s exceptional beauty here perfectly, as well as her beyond perfect tits and her beautiful muscular thighs and bubble butt. As Jenny’s daughter Kitty is the most remarkably beautiful, famous and popular teen in the county. She is identical to her mother at her age and Jenny is the revered as the most beautiful girl anyone has ever seen in the lore, with her being the most legendary and famous beauty queen in Coxville County’s history, winning every single competition she entered for years and years. Kitty is just as beautiful as Jenny and it’s great to see that beauty conveyed the art. Plus Kitty is the most extreme BBC slut out of all the girls alongside her mother. Jenny and Kitty are the most supremely slutty and BBC addicted bimbos in the universe. I love how you show this with Kitty here with her outfit, with her showing off her tits and cleavage under her top, it emphasises her supreme sluttiness. Plus having Kitty in the centre is perfect. Kitty is the captain of the cheer squad, just like her mother was and Jenny and Kitty are the main characters. Jenny is the alpha milf, the leader of the housewives and the biggest BBC slut ever, she and Kitty being in the centre of their pics is perfect, it showcases their centrality to the universe and their positions as the Queen and Princess of the Coxville Universe. Keep up the amazing work!!!

QWEASDZXC

Thank you, my friend, I'm sorry, I'll reply to you in the mail soon

temogam

Please don’t speak poorly of yourself my friend. I know you’re going through a lot but know that many of us like your work. Please take care.

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