Epic Loads Comic - CHAPTER 7 SCRIPT

So, after months of thinking over the plot-line of the Epic Loads Comic, I've finally sat down and figured out how to wrap chapter 7. Of course if you rather experience the comic unspoiled, CLOSE THIS POST RIGHT NOW!

But if curiosity is your weakness, then I hope you enjoy this preview of what might be the start of a new era for the comic.

EPIC LOADS Chapter 7 - The Rings

- Hiro is trapped in a cell. Again. He reflects upon his bad luck, using the best of his mental abilities to crack a way to escape this predicament. So far his royal bloodline and endowed looks have only failed him and his captor's plans for him had an aura of gruesome cruelty.

H: Don't worry, im going to get us all out of here...

- Fury turns to Hiro with mild annoyance.

F: You're a Virilian aren't you ? 

H: Y-yeah... how did y-

F: You all reek the same - he scoffs - How ironic that you of all people would end up caged with us.

H: Wha... What do you me-

Mr.G: QUIET! you speak when I tell you to speak. 

- MrGold, the wicked Circus master watches over them menacingly. With a click of his remote controller he opens their cell.

Mr.G: Come out! line up! here! NOW!

- Fury gets up and walks out with awful submissiveness. Hiro follows more hesitantly. MrGold observes both of them with pride.

Mr.G: "Oh what a glorious show it will be! Imagine the crowd's reaction when their eyes feast upon you! A beefy lad such as yourself is sure to keep the audience on the edge of their seat! You'll make an excelent ASSistant!" - he remarks as he fondles Hiro.

"Not as impressive as this pup though" - MrGold pats the shackled half-beast, standing with a defensive posture, with a mix of anger and terror in his eyes - "This little freak is going to make my circus the greatest show in the realm"

- The Circus master once gain jerks his remote controller, activating the collar around Fury's neck, forcing him into his berserker state. Hiro first instinct is to reach out, but is paralized at the sight of this small young man becoming bigger and bigger.

- He is ordered to do the obstacle course. A sequece of traps creating a long pathway of peril. "C'mon, beast! Let's do a practice run! Chop chop!" 

- Hiro outraged attempts to call out the master on his abusive behavior. "You coward! You monster!" 

- Provoked, the master then decides to put Hiro through the gauntlet instead. "Perhaps YOU'd like to go in it's place". Hiro reluctantly but honorably accepts. "F-fine"

- The Gauntlet is merciless. Hiro goes through a barrage of Fire wheels, hot coal, electrified water, and other crazy obstacles. At the end of it, after swinging ropes over a pool of deadly poison was the gaping hole of death, a tube made of rows upon rows of sharp metal teeth that rotate in opposite directions, Hiro knows he  wont make it out in one piece.  He trembles at the plank, staring at it, as the Master yells, "GO ON! JUMP!" using the colar to shock him into submission.

- Fury takes advantage of the opportunity and knocks the master out with one powerful punch. While he is unconscious, Fury carries Hiro away from the wicked machine. Hiro asks if the Master is dead and Fury denies it. "I am not a murderer".

- Hiro suggests to escape, but Fury is reluctant. "That's right, the others..." Hiro picks up on the fact that they should stay and help the other furries. They run to the back where all the cages are. As they are about to set them free, the master shows up from behind, controller in hand.

- He amps the power to a maximum and presses it, activating all of the collars.

Hiro cant hadle the pain and passes out while Fury escalates his rage to it's limits, losing all his consciousness, now writhing, curled up on the floor

- The master laughs at the sight of his captives squirming, he approaches Fury with his condescending speech about obedience only to be swiftly interrupted, with one sudden jerking gesture Fury launches him into his own meat grinding machine, and the master meets a gruesome end.

- Hiro wakes up to find a passed out Fury, detransformed and with his collar unclicked.

He feels around his own colar to find that whatever kept it locked in place before, now was loose and it clicks open.

- Hiro kneels upon Fury and jerks him around in a humorous way, as if waking a sleepy friend. "Hey Get up! We gotta go!" Fury doesn't respond. 

- Hiro insist, losing his natural cheer. He lifts Fury up and tears start to sprout on his face. "W-WAKE UP! H-HEY!", "you're so loud..." Fury complains with a frowny face. Hiro smiles, his tears now made of joy.

- The furries are freed from their cages, they gather, and after thanking Hiro they start leaving, together with Fury. 

L: "Thank you human" A lion speaks up "Any other would have left us to die here. We will never forget your aid" 

H: "O-of course! I was trapped too, you know!"

Hiro understands that Fury must go with his pack, but assures him that they will meet again.

- Hiro puts up a smile and gives them the most cheerful send-off possible. Once he's by himself his face fades into a whimper and he sheds a few genuinely sad tears. "I dont think this adventure was a good idea anymore..."

- Some time goes by and Hiro feels his head being patted. "What a blockhead. Are you really going to cry because you cant get ass for a couple days ?" Hiro rejoices at the sigh of his friends. He hugs all of them. 

H: "YOU GUYS FOUND ME"

D: "Dont get too happy, I was just following the trail of light from this ring and it brought us here... for some reason..."

Magus interrupts and announces that its high time he explained the predicament that they have been made a part of. 

"Sigh, I'm sorry it took me so long to clear things up, this road has been unpredictably rocky. Hiro, There's no easy way to tell you, you're-"

"HE'S HERE! PRINCE HIRO!" - a voice shouts from the opposite direction.

"WHATS UP WITH EVERYONE SNEAKING UP ON US ALL THE TI- oh Roxo, Verde! it's you!... What are you... doing here ?"

R: "Your majesty! We have searched for you high and low! We are here to take you back to the castle!"

V: "Your father is VERY worried about you, your majesty!"

H: "HE IS NOT!" - he pauses - "Is he ?"

RnV: "Of course!"

V: "We are here under orders from king Phallus himself!"

R: "That's right! You know you're not allowed to leave the castle! let alone the kingdo-GASP!" Verde! - he points at Dagger - That's the thief isnt it!?"

V: "That's positively wonderful! Hiro caught the thief! Your father is going to be so happy!"

R: "The legendary criminal Dagger brought to justice by Prince Hiro himself! This is histerical!"

V: "Historical!" 

Hiro casts a doubtful look to Dagger.

D: (mockingly) "Oh by all means arrest me, but before you do that, would you care to explain why are there Virildom Emblems all over the office in the back ? Say, like in "THIS" letter of commendation..."

RnV: "GUAAAARDS!"

Hiro shoots the twins a glare, that question caused the twins to recoil.

H: Dont be ridiculous, what are you saying ? That MY kingdom has something to do with THIS ?"

D: *Ahem* "In gratitude of the services provided by MrGold's Enteprise to the kingdom of Virildom I hereby allow capture of any beast, including those descendant from the Feral Islands, for use in his Circus and products in collaboration with our research. Furthermore, the King may retrieve any of the especimen, at any given moment, if he so desires. Lastly, we bestow upon MrGold, temporary ownership of Dr.Stun's latest genetic-engineered subject for endurance testing. - Dagger points at the bottom right of the letter where a very recognizable Virildom Emblem is stamped - Look, signed by your precious King - he adds.

- The increasing sound of several knights marching over were clear indication that Hiro had to make a decision fast

Magus: Hiro, it wont be long until the knights arrive. You won't find the truth caged in a castle. Come with us...

RnV: Prince Hiro... come back!

H: Roxo,... Verde,... I missed you,... I miss my bed, and the FOOD,... I didnt have as much fun out here as I tought I would... *sigh* Tell my Father... - Hiro breathes in and clenches his fists before shouting - HE CAN GO FUCK HIMSELF!

Roxo and Verde gasp visibly and loudly 

H: So far ive been captured and humiliated left and right! But anything is better than living inside my room. I wanna see the world! I'm... I'm going with them. I'm sorry.

- Hiro steps back, Magus rests a hand on his shoulder and activates his teleportation spell. Converged into lightbeam the party once more flies off like a shooting star.

- A new scene fades in, The party is standing at the edge of a hill looking over a desert.

M: Hiro, have you ever hear of the Epic Loads ?

H: Heh, nope! is it like, super jizz ?

M: You are absolutely correct.

H: Oh I see... wait, WHAT ?

M: To put it simply, semen carries genetic information, it evolves the bloodline with each generation, in a lot of ways it's the essence of life. The Epic Loads is a legendary formula, distilled from the combined semen of specific bloodlines that trace back to the very first paragons of humanity. It grants the one who drinks it unphatomable power. 

H: Sounds... Epic! Why are you telling me this ?

M: Your father, King Phallus himself, is trying to succesfully recreate this potion.

H: Pfff sure! - Hiro looks away and rolls his eyes.

D: It's true. There's a whole armoire of "samples" back there. They are all labeled. Probably from every furry that Gold has ever caught. It all adds up.

H: W-why would my Father want MORE power ? Virildom is already one of the richest most prosper kingdom in Atlas!

M: To be quite frank, I do not know for sure myself. But if I may be so bold, I think your father wants to start a war, Hiro.

- The last shot is a close up of Hiros #SHOOK face -

( Next chapter idea: A fan service chapter with no great peril or villain, just the boys having fun at the Desert City! Belly-dancing antics, Oasis skinny dipping, spicy food and of course, a lof of DUNAS! Delicious dark-skinned, oiled up Dunas! ♥ )