Yes. It's possible that she might not be able to speak properly due to the stimulation, though. You could leave out the "it", but I do think changing "feel" to "feels" would be for the better
黒ウ
2021-11-19 11:58:07 +0000 UTC
Thank you for your cooporation. Hornet's line "FEEL GOOD" responds to Shokaku's question in Japanese. Is "IT FEELS GOOD" correct in this case as well?
黒漆
2021-11-19 00:34:59 +0000 UTC
I might suggest "IT FEELS GOOD" for 気持ちいいわ since it sounds less abrupt
Also, while "come" is correct, in English it is typically spelled "cum". However, you may prefer it as-is, which I would understand. I suppose it's less vulgar