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v6 Prologue: We All Lift Together

I always did my best thinking while I worked on something else. While my body did one thing, it was easy to let my mind wander… and now there was plenty to think about.


It had been nearly a month since our home had been attacked by demons. Nearly a month since we had been forced to fight for our lives.


It, in some ways, didn’t feel real. Like it was a distant nightmare… which, to my surprise, I hadn’t really had too many. Sure, I got up at night most nights to check on everyone and make sure they were okay… but I was waking up less and less as the month wore on, and one thing became clear.


That we had won, and the demons truly were defeated.


But while that night sometimes felt like a dream… the aftereffects were all too real.


I placed down the burden I had been carrying on my back, and crouched down. I grimaced as my clothes rubbed against my raw skin, before the cold soothed the sensation. The electrical burns Zang Zeng had given me still hurt like hell, forming long, ropey scars that crawled from my hands to my chest. The skin on my knuckles was similarly raw, fresh, and tender, only starting to heal, and that was rubbing on my thick gloves. We didn’t know how effective the reinforced leather gloves impregnated with medical Qi and Spirit Beast beeswax would be as protective equipment, but better safe than sorry. I used an iron trowel to clear away the snow, until I saw bare soil. I grimaced at the slight purple tint to it, then sighed.


I looked up at the broken forest I was in. My favorite grove… or what was left of it. The physical reminder of everything that had happened.


The trees always looked a bit dead in winter, their limbs devoid of leaves, but they still stood tall, just waiting for the warmth of spring. Nowadays I could even feel the small spark of life in them, humming just beneath the bark.


Here, though, there was none of that. Here, there was silence. Everything around me was dead, and I could feel the echo of what had transpired, a gasp of pain that made me shudder when I concentrated on it.

The trees were puckered and withered, husks of once proud oaks, pines, and maples. Some had turned partially to mush and keeled over, slumping to the ground. The once beautiful grove now looked like the aftermath of a warzone, the corpses of the trees laying strewn like bodies.


I took a deep breath of the cold winter air, letting it fill my lungs. It was crisp, but tinged with a sickly sweet odor that burned my nostrils—the remains of poison in this plot of land.


The demons that had attacked us had left their mark, leaving wounds on our home. It had been irrevocably changed from what I remembered it as, the peaceful, beautiful place I had come to escape the life of cultivation.The land was dead. The old trees, a ruined mess. I could even feel the writhing feeling below the dirt, the poison that had sunk into the very bones of the earth. 


If it was left alone, this area would stay dead for a thousand years.


If we left it alone.


I pressed my trowel into the frozen earth, and it parted obligingly, more like it was sand on a beach rather than hard-packed dirt. I drew in the soil a symbol—a symbol I had gotten quite good at drawing. Then, I reached back and grabbed the things I had set down. A glass jar, filled partially with water, and shiny strands of silver wire.


My task complete, I rose again… and felt a weight alight on my shoulder.


“You done too, Big D?” I asked. I saw out of the corner of my eye scarlet feathers, and a rather beaten up fox fur vest. I had repaired it the best I could… but it had still definitely seen better days. The feathers on his chest were just starting to grow back in, his own wounds exposed to the cold air—a wound he had gotten attacking an Imperial Realm cultivator and succeeding in distracting him for long enough for Gramps to put the bastard down.


He was a bit of a mad lad, my disciple. And I wouldn’t have it any other way.


“Indeed, Master,” the rooster spoke, my ever-dutiful disciple’s voice was calm and pleased sounding. “I do believe we are almost done, and then we may banish this darkness that plagues our home.”


I smiled at his absolute confidence that the current plan we had for dealing with this would work, and turned, looking back the way I had come. Hundreds of glass jars and modified demonic Qi siphoning formations that had been set up in this patch of forest, directly over every concentration of demonic poison.


In addition to the jars, there was a small army of people in red toques and our medieval PPEs. It looked a bit strange to have everyone in thick gloves and aprons.


A great, rust red boar, an ox, and a man who looked quite a lot like a monkey were carefully dismantling some of the less affected trees. Chunky, Babe, and Gou Ren piled them together, while dancing green blades and claws made of Qi carved larger formations around them. Tigu and Xiulan worked very well together, none of their friendly rivalry here today. Tigu had her tongue poked out of the corner of her mouth, wild orange hair sprawling out from her hat, while Xiulan waved her finger like a conductor’s baton, directing her legion of blades. Her blue eyes practically sparkled in the cold light.


A silver-haired woman with a snake coiled around her arm delivered the last of the glass jugs to a fox-faced man, a woman wearing the same bandana as Gou Ren, and a monkey. Yin and Noodle had been working overtime to get the jars we needed, and Yun Ren, Xianghua, and Huo Ten hopped to get them into their proper places.


A pink-haired woman with a jade bangle around her wrist was seated outside the affected area, accompanied by a moose loaded down with a saddlebag. Peppa and Spooks had arrived with hot tea and food for any who needed it. 


Behind them was a pillar of smoke and the distant sound of a press.. Bowu was hard at work in the forge, finishing the last of the silver wire, helping in his own way. Nobody wanted to see what would happen if any of this poison got on somebody who wasn’t a cultivator.


“That one needs to go a little to the left!” a great dragon called down from the heavens. His sinuous body undulated as he kept himself aloft. In his claws was a paper with the planned formation on it, and Washy was studying it with great attention, determined to have the formation right. 


He had been spectacularly upset the poison had hurt our main maple grove, and sworn vengeance upon all demonkind for this most grievous of insults.


“Ah! Yes!” the young man below him called, while a shaggy white dog sitting at his feet yipped. Zhang Fei, the Torrent Rider, corrected the placement of his jar. We had him to thank for all the silver we currently had—we had bought all the silver we were using from his hometown. Shaggy Two used his nose to carefully adjust the wires. Beside the young lad, there was a behemoth of a man, clad in stone armor. Tie Delun was finishing up the formation on the ground.


Finally, my eyes landed on a group of two women, and I started towards them. One of the women had green hair, freckles, and purple eyes—and in my humble opinion, she was the most beautiful woman in the world. The other looked as if to be her sister—slightly shorter, but just as freckly. Both had just finished their own last jars, and had turned to observe, just as we had.


I reached out, and captured Meiling from behind, my arms wrapping around her shoulders. My wife leaned into my touch instantly. Big D hopped off my shoulder and on to Rizzo's, the small woman giggling as he nuzzled her cheek with his beak.


“Looks like we’re nearly ready,” I said, looking over what we had accomplished so far.


“And not a moment too soon,” my Meimei declared, her voice sounding just a bit nasally. She rubbed at her nose in irritation. “This place reeks. If I ever have to smell such foul Qi again it's too soon.”


I smiled at the way her nose scrunched up, but I had enough sense not to tell her she looked cute like that.


“You didn’t need to help with this. We had it,” I reminded her. I knew how sensitive her nose was to Qi. I couldn’t imagine having to actually be out here with her sense of smell.


“Zhuye kept looking off in this direction,” Meimei huffed after a moment. I frowned when she brought up our son. I knew the look. It made my own blood boil—the look of distress on his face whenever he glanced towards the forest.


Couldn’t blame Meimei for wanting this shit out of our home.


“Well. He's going to be having a good time with his Grandpa and his dancing friends.” Gramps and Vajra the bee were taking care of him today. “And then he won’t ever have that  expression again. Little D’s brilliant parents figured out how to get rid of the nasty smell!”


Meimei chuckled at the sudden pompous tone my voice took, and then she sighed.


“I hope this works,” she muttered.


“It will,” I replied.


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Less than half an hour later, our preparations were complete. Everyone went to their assigned positions around the edge of the area.


“Everyone ready?” I called, and a chorus of affirmatives answered me.


We pressed our hands into the ground, and activated the formation.


The earth pulsed, and I could feel the poison beneath the earth shudder and wail, as it was dragged out of the ground and into the jars. The silver started corroding. A couple of the glass jars got hairline cracks—but they held.


The earth seemed to breathe a sigh of relief.


Tigu, of course, was the first one to let out a cheer.


I let out a breath, and settled back on my haunches.


Despite our victory, the forest was still dead. Despite our victory.. We honestly had no clue what we were going to do with all these poison-filled jars.


I looked at the withered trees, and the wound on the landscape. The poison had stabbed deep. This place, this grove, would never again be how it was.


 I took in a breath, and the cold air once more filled my lungs, this time devoid of acrid taint.


But though those wounds were deep… they were not fatal. With time and effort, these wounds would become scars, physical reminders of what had happened.   But together, we would make sure that those scars would be even more beautiful than what had come before.


We still had a lot of work to do.


Yet our mood was joyful, as we walked back home, and our spirits were high.


“Were you good for Gramps?” I asked the rosy-cheeked boy, nearly a year old, in my arms. Zhuye’s purple eyes were alight with mirth as I tickled his belly.


“He spent nearly an hour tugging upon my beard!” Gramps declared. “My grandson’s endurance shall surely be legendary in the future!” 


Unlike the rest of us who had started taking off our bandages, the old man was still wrapped tight—the massive rents in his body barely looked like they had started to heal.


He had lost an entire Realm of cultivation, up there in the north. And yet the old man seemed to have a permanent smile etched onto his face these days.


“He's going to give us all the runaround for sure once he learns how to walk, aintcha?” I asked Zhuye, who once more giggled.


“It is only a good thing for a man to be so vigorous,” Gramps agreed, nodding his head.


I plonked down on the couch beside him, as our home became a hive of activity, the preparations for dinner well under way.


It was a good night… and not even the piece of news I learned before I got into bed could dampen my spirits.


Elder Xiao Ge of the Cloudy Sword Sect was taking me up  on my offer to have his people rest and recover at my home.


Tomorrow… tomorrow, we would be hosting Gramps’ old friends.


It seemed like a lifetime ago, that I had run away from all of that. That the mere mention of cultivators would make my stomach churn.


There was some nervousness, that was true. But as I climbed into bed that night… there was no fear.


A lot had changed in these past three years.


The only thing to do was keep trucking forwards.


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Welcome back everyone. A small prologue, and then next chapter it begins; its time for the long awaited Farm visit.

Edited by:  BargleNawdleZouss, 



Comments

Hmmm, re-reading, " writhing feeling " does seem better.

RBAWintrow

I could even feel the writhing feeling below the dirt, the poison that had sunk into the very bones of the earth. Maybe change it to: I could even feel the poison writhing below the dirt, sunk into the very bones of the earth. So it flows better?

RBAWintrow

Finally figured out what to say. First, this chapter is a breath of fresh air for the characters and for me. Thanks. I hope your break allowed you to catch your breath as well. (*shift* “return” 😖) As someone who now can’t do a tithe of what I used to, I do not enjoy stories that imply that only people who can work, or work at full capacity, are worthy of a comfortable home. I appreciate seeing that even cultivators may need time to rest and heal. It’s nice that Jin is leading the restoration effort of his farm while Zhuye entertains Gramps, who has not taken over with his massive power, to do cleanup. Bowu isn’t asked to do something unsafe for him. Meiling isn’t expected to tasks unpleasant for her that others can do, even tho she chooses to. It’s a community effort, and community building is what I love most about BoC. It’s also good that even though Fa Ram now has enough money to do/buy any normal things, they use their funds to pay their neighbors for goods, like Silver/ore. Those who can work still have to put in the work. Things don’t just magically get fixed (ok, *technically* they’re using magic to fix things😜), people need to work to fix broken things, &/or make allowances for things to fix themselves. So seeing that the Demon Fight, done in a day, will have a lasting impact, & has required hours & hours of cleaning, reams of supplies, thoughtful direction, & community cooperation, is a powerful way to start a new volume. Again, thanks.

Cranky Otter

Has Shen Yu accepted and etched Jin's way of life unto his soul?

Insertnamehereokokipressedokok

If we are talking about the ideals or the soul of Fa-Ram then, yes. I agree with the points being made. Though I believe that makes my first analogy even more applicable.

EverydayCrucible

Shouldn't it be “never“ and “too soon“?

Namorat

Huh, they might be able to clear out Demon’s Grave Ravine and similar sites with it…

CringeWorthyStudios

A tsundere grandma at that. 😅

CringeWorthyStudios

Through the cold mist, until we're lifeless together, together.

Wyatt

Push, to keep the dark from coming.

Wyatt

YESSSSSS

WolfKnight22

I suspect she'll think of. something -- if nothing else, using it to experiment on different ways to purify it.

Laura Hemly

Il a dit q'il nd publierait que deux chapitres en février.

Laura Hemly

Time to get Zhuye a grandma!

D J Meigs

Just re-read CF schedule post and realized they said 1 or 2 a week and had the thought. What if CF only does 1 this week? I mean I'm happy with what ever pace they want to write but I may have gotten into full BoC Fangirl mode upto 9 days before chapter one drops. I have made a critical error in judgement. Well time to go re read the entire series, fingers crossed it lasts until the Fa Ram visit.

Katharine Gould

Thanks for the Chapter Boss! How was the break?

Katharine Gould

Was looking for your take on this. You are always first to the chapters and I knew you'd be dying that the Fa Ram visit is not here yet! I waited a few days to read just incase the visit wasn't in the prolougue and I'm glad I did. Now I only have to wait 1-2 days! Race you to read chapter 1 when it comes out!

Katharine Gould

+1 one the work at what ever pace is comfortable for you CF. Also tatake good care of your health. All the Mangaka and LN authors getting sick and dying lately has me worrying about you.

Katharine Gould

You think the thunderhoofs will be mad. What do you think Senior brother Lu Ri is going to do when he finds out maple syrup will be scarce this year!

Katharine Gould

It's probably not a Warframe reference as it (warframe) is referencing a old folk song that CF is probably also referencing here.

Katharine Gould

It's still great. Just wounded. Make Fa-ram whole again would be more apt. But personally my hope is to Make Tilan whole again. Make the Azure Hills Great Again.

Katharine Gould

Are you using the desktop app, the desktop website, or the mobile app?

Katharine Gould

Dans la semaine, je crois.

Robert Adams

Hey sorry if this isn't the place to put this but i don't see the discord server whenever i am on discord, and whenever i try to join with the link it doesn't do anything

John Parker

C'est quand le prochain chapitre?

Net

I’m looking forward to MeiMei pestering him for healing scrolls too :)

Catherine

Divines bless your kind heart!

Beggar of Freedom

Welcome back!!! And you go washy. No one messes with food!!

Synova Vitale

Thank you.

Old Dog

Or a new helper spirit like the General?

Old Dog

Shen Yu's friends and allies would be very impressed by the purification notes and the results of all the work gone into restoring the land.

Brendan

hmm, I now wonder what Meimei is going to do with a rather large supply of demonic grade poison. probably nothing

N0m_N0m

The demon baker

leopard eye

Oh, and the Thunderhoofs. Spooky's master gonna be EPICALLY pissed when he finds out 😂

Alex Ingraham

I kinda want Shou to not know. It would be fun watching him freak out about a new plant lol

Alex Ingraham

Him and Wa Shi lol

Alex Ingraham

Hard, the land we call our home

Michael Foat

Look up warframe we all lift

Michael Foat

All is right in the world now that you’re back!!! Thank you thank you, love the tone of this chapter. A little serious, a little goofy, a little sad, and a lot of love. I see beautiful things in the future for the maple grove, maybe once a certain earth spirit wakes up? 🌺

Angel

and now the wait AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH great prologue though

WolfKnight22

Lu Ri: Ah, junior brother, it is good to see your home did not sustain significant damage. Jin: Yeah, we got off pretty light, except for the maple grove... Lu Ri: I SHALL SLAY EVERY DEMON IN EVERY HELL THERE IS FOR THIS INSULT

Insertnamehereokokipressedokok

I assumed they'd added a weight training room

Tijay Arnie

Second this. Prefer an author who can sustain their work at whatever pace is healthy for them to one that overdoes it and can’t write after a while. Will enjoy whatever comes out of that schedule.

Cranky Otter

I have listened to the 4th audiobook at least 4 times. While still worrying about the maple grove.

Cranky Otter

Cold, the air and water flowing Hard, the land we call our home Push, to keep the dark from coming

H

Let's fucking go!

Marian Ch

Imagine if even he has no idea what it is

Harish

Thank you for the chapter!!!

Kasinki

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (girlish squeal of delight!) 🥳🥳🥳

Andrew Carter

Yes! We'll finally get to see Shou gushing over Jin's plants, and he might even know what the fire root is.

Arin Storm

TFTC

Bi-Dailey

A dragon that knows true power

Rat with a Pick

That is what I was wondering. Definitely a banger

Nick Brakhage

As always, thank you for the chapter. Been re-reading the other books on RR and am really looking forward to the audiobook. Take care and thanks again.

Old Dog

I am now held enraptured in waiting for this as well!

Nathaniel Jacob moore

Thanks for the chapter

Pamela Gillespie

Even if CF doesn't write about it, I'll be picturing the Thunderhoofs tearing the demons to shreds. Because you're right, the way they go absolutely insane with happiness just by tasting the maple syrup is impossible not to enjoy!

Laura Hemly

FARM VISIT. I hope you enjoyed your time off but I've been waiting for this since Gramps called for them. Cannot wait for tsundere Minyan and Shou spitting blood.

Rake1810

Yup, and being able to purify the land easier is probably worth a bit. They probably can already do it, even if it takes just burning everything to ashes, but this is probably much cheaper than anything that they have.

Mr Crowley

I bet they will be impressed that the poison was removed already…

Kat

I don’t know about that, the formation that helped Gramps was what made the town so special to the Cloudy Sword, no?

Kat

Thanks for the chapter 😄

Kt-x

I'm sure they already have it or something like it. It's probably just not easy to use in most cases, unlike at fa ram where they're just cleaning up the mess left behind.

Robert Adams

Welcome back, and thank you for this new beginning. I can’t wait to see how this new book turns out.

Aki_Iokua18

So excited for the next chapter!

James Faulkner

Thank u for the story

C0bra$

??? Isn’t this whole chapter about how it’s not doing great? That it was doing great until bad people came in and poisoned it?

EverydayCrucible

That would imply it was ever anything LESS than Great, before.

Benjamin Lawton

😏Make Fa-Ram Great Again?

EverydayCrucible

Same >_<'

Simon Andriessen

Noooo we've waited two months for the 'Old Fogies see Fa Ram' chapter! >_<'

Simon Andriessen

It is form an old folk song that Warframe also used.

Devon

So happy these chapters are back! Almost teared up reading this for no obvious reason. Just joyful and grateful for this story and these characters

Palmer Evans

Warframe reference?

Rad

Either he’s a fan or it’s just chance. Cause I didn’t even notice one. Not every reference is really a reference.

Mitchell Calhoun

Tftc

Gg

Keep On Trucking ever forward~ Glad a break did your mind well.

Duke of Coffee

Hell yeah! Thanks for the chapter.

Jesper

WOO! TYFTC!! I'm so fricking excited for this to be back

K1NG_CHIMP

Yay! Bittersweet but lovely.

Angela Roberts

Hmm, I imagine the Emperor would be rather interested in that formation.

Mr Crowley

I can't wait for all of Gramp's friends to gawk further. 🤣

Sacchito22

Welcome back, CF! Thank you for the chapter, I hope you had a good break! I know you were still working on other stuff, but I hope your time was good nonetheless!

BlueMage_VT

New fan here. Why the Warframe reference?

Pam Phuong Nam Son

TYFTC!

Alex Ingraham

Awesome! Glad this is back! :) Thanks for the chapter!

Zero Wrath

I want the chapter now!😭

Scholar of Endless Knowledge

This, the song of sons and daughters

Raraki Kraken

I think Bailu and Seiyu are going to be more preoccupied with Vajra's booze and Washy's food.

Alex

Thank you!

kkkkkkkkk

And here! We! Go!

Just A Dude

He is known as the Hell Walker, the Unchained Predator, the Doom Slayer.

Just A Dude

I can't wait for the Storm Sisters to party with Tigu and Yin. We'll be lucky if Fa Ram is still standing afterwards!

Truedragon5374

Shou might have an aneurysm when he finds out how much Qi Jin dumps into the ground; Shou isn't on the Path of Shennong, so he can't afford to use all of his Qi on a daily basis.

Alex

I believe farmer mentioned a 2 ch/week schedule in one of his earlier posts. Wanting to finish the next volume for publication before going back to 3 per week.

Ope 'scuse me

I love this so much. So they don't know what to do with the bottled demon juice hmm? QUESTION: Would a steampunk car fueled by demon juice be better or worse for the environment than a modern gas guzzler?

Truedragon5374

With Meimei's sense of smell I don't think that'll be a problem; what will be a problem is that the maple grove got hit hard in the attack, so the volume of syrup is going to go way down this year. I want to see Spooks and the Thunderhoofs start a crusade against the heavenly demons when they find out how much maple syrup was lost.

Alex

Not yet, 1-2 chapters a week for this month

Derek Walker

Are we back to a M/W/F schedule?

Michael Larsen

WE'RE SO BACK. COLD, THE AIR AND WATER FLOWING-

Patrick Hoke

Wohoo!!!

Michael Larsen

If I was Jin, I wouldn't sell any Maple syrup to mortals this year... Or anything that might have been tainted by demon goop.

leopard eye

Huzzah! A wonderful chapter to open 2025, CF - thank you so much! Please don't forget to pace yourself and take appropriate rest. I for one, would be quite happy to have a slower pace if necessary, if it helps you keep writing. 😉 Nevertheless, each and every chapter will be met with greedy, greedy, grasping hands 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Kat Wilton

Awesome can't wait to see the shenanigans all the old coots get up too

Rune Shadow

Are we gonna see Jin show off his paradise for the voice of the emperor and see the other watch the crystal?

Will Gossage

Now I have to listen to it again. What a banger.

Nicolas Symeou

Me at the end of the chapter: Wait..... Where's the rest?!!!! My Fa Ram visit chapter!!!!!

WarStrider72

Hype

Brandon Yarberry

I just started playing Warframe a little bit ago. I got to the introduction cutscene for the area and I was like maybe I'll skip it. Glad I heard the whistling before I made that that horrible choice

Runus

The wordsmith has returned!

taukid

Woohoo! Can't wait for Jin and that one elder to nerd out over plants.

BelligerentGnu

Wonderful thank you!

Null_is_Void

For namer!

xerance

Thank you for the Chapter.

Demian Buckle

Welcome back I've been waiting for this for what feels like forever! Even though it was only 2 months!

Xavier Harris

Ten of thousands years later washy name is spoken in fearful whispers among demonkind , he still hunts them down with righteous wrath.

Vicente Huerta

Can't wait for people to visit the farm.

Deltoren

Glad we've got BoC back on the menu.

Stark Trist

Thanks for the chapter! The land begins to heal, and Tianlan shall surely be whole once more

Chakfor

Cold, the air and water flowing. Hard, the land we call our home. Push, to keep the dark from coming. Feel, the weight of what we owe. 🎶

WarStrider72

yay new year new chapter *new book*

Nemoboi

And we all lift, and we're all adrift, together. Together.

Robert Mullins

We're back baby

Maple

Thank you for the chapter

Sami Bautista

Thanks for the chapter boss!

WarStrider72

Insert whistling soundtrack here.

Cynsye


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