v5c32: Like Ants to an Elephant
Added 2024-07-31 04:44:09 +0000 UTCYin barely got her gauntlets up in time to block the sword screaming for her neck.
The fight around Yin had descended into chaos. The ground quaked like it was alive. The world was lit with explosions of elemental fury. Whirling swords screamed through the air, steam billowed from melted snow, ice obstructed vision, and the puffing whine of Xianghua’s Steam Furnace carried above the deafening sounds. Qi was so thick in the air that it was getting impossible for her to sense things… to her detriment.
Yin’s back hit the ground and she rolled before bringing both of her arms up just in time to catch the overhead strike on her gauntlets. The sword of her enemy bit into her golden armor, and the construct made of sunlight groaned.
“Wake up, damnit! I can tell you’re fighting it!” Yin shouted.
While the initial assault had been incredibly successful, as the fighting went on things were changing. Their enemies had been sluggish and clearly not fighting at their best; but now the poison in their blood seemed to have faded slightly. It seemed to be reacting to the fact that the mind-controlled cultivators were actually under attack, letting their true instincts take over.
It allowed them to make up the difference in numbers, but now only the strongest were left… and they were stronger than Yin was. This one in particular was in the Fifth Stage of the Profound Realm. She had run out of paralytic and had to use brute force against the man, but a punch to the jaw had instead partially snapped the man out of his fugue and made him fight all the harder.
“Die!” the man shouted, pressing down on his blade. His weapon glowed cherry red and smoke came from the man’s hands, but he kept on pressing.
So Yin made one of her gauntlets explode.
The detonation of light and Qi sent the man reeling. Yin was on her feet in an instant, driving her still-armored fist into the man’s stomach. When he folded over, her unarmored fist went for his temple, hopefully this time putting him down. Instead, the man blocked and lashed out with his sword. Yin barely managed to jerk her head out of the way, nearly losing an eye, but the weapon still scored a long cut across her cheek, grinding nearly to the bone.
Yin knew exactly how hard that was from Xiulan and Xianghua’s mock complaints about Yin and Tigu’s innate durability. A couple of her opponents’ attacks had bounced off of her, but others could actually hurt her.
Both Yin and her foe lost their footing as the ground heaved again and a shockwave hit them, Big Bro Jin’s fight was still ongoing. They were a couple of Li away by this point, but every time a big hit went out it sent everybody staggering.
Yin’s opponent managed to recover faster. His eyes were completely clear now and he looked around wildly before a haze came over them again and he snarled. Yin reformed her detonated gauntlet… but it proved to be unneeded.
A storm of swords took him from behind, piercing into non-lethal—for a cultivator, anyway—areas.
“Forgive me for making you fight this one alone for so long, Yin,” Xiulan said. She still looked regal, if not entirely pristine. There was some sweat and a couple of thin cuts on her hands, but otherwise she merely looked slightly winded.
“I’m good, let's take the rest of them…” she trailed off as aside from the distant booms of Big Bro Jin’s fight, it was a lot quieter around them now. Xianghua’s last blow sent her foe to the ground. The steam swirling around her looked like a heron and Xianghua herself stood tall and indomitable, her glowing orange eyes searching for another foe.
“Yes, we have accomplished our current mission,” Tigu said from behind, her voice sounding slightly wheezy.
Yin turned to smile at her Senior Sister—but the smile died as she beheld her friend. “Tigu?!”
“It's just a flesh wound,” Tigu replied as she pulled the spear from her chest with an ugly squelching sound. It had stuck in deeply between her right ribs and had clearly penetrated a lung. “I accepted the blow to secure a swift knock out.” Yin watched as Tigu uncorked a bottle of the medicine they had been given. As Tigu took a draught of sparkling liquid, the most potent they had, the wound began to steam and its edges began to seal. “Now, the true question is what do we do with these men now? Most will remain paralyzed for a few hours, at least.”
Yin let the matter drop as Tigu’s breaths became easier and the hole in her chest rapidly repaired itself… but Yin didn’t have an answer for her question.
“Gather them up for now,” Xiulan commanded, putting words to action and moving to lift one of their fallen foes. “This is likely not the main force, so we have to—”
Whatever she was about to say was cut off as a pillar of light formed in the sky.
Yin’s breathing became heavy as a spear of light pierced the heavens, a crackling lance that rose above the clouds. The raw power hit her senses like a hammer, sending her staggering.
Yet something rose to meet that power, whispered on the wind.
And So, the Great Ancestor, Shennong, instructed his Disciples in the way of preparing fields. Till The Land. Fell The Trees…
The lightning descended. The lance hit something as the world hummed like the reverberations of a gong.
[Divert The Waters]
A gentle, fatherly hand felt like it touched her shoulder, keeping her upright and shielding her from the worst of the effects of the outpouring of Qi. Her heart started to calm. The light on the horizon grew brighter and brighter—
There was a moment of silence.
Then, there was a detonation.
Night became day—yet none of the lightning’s glow touched them.
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The world trembled under the golden light of a false dawn.
Birds took flight. Fish scattered and some even beached themselves. Forests and rocks groaned as the earth quaked.
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The rumbles were distant in Verdant Hill, the light on the horizon was dim, but the people of the town saw it and faltered in their Solstice celebrations. The dancers’ steps slowed and the thumping music paused.
Sitting on his balcony and overseeing the preparations, the Lord Magistrate gripped the arms of his chair so hard he could feel his fingers creaking. The only thing that had stopped him issuing an evacuation order was his student's assurances… and the fact that he was frozen. He couldn’t move even if he wanted to.
The memories of that day, when his wife was injured by an errant technique, flashed through his mind. Sweat poured down his back and his breath went ragged. His wife, his beloved Lady, was trying to put on a brave face… but her hands were trembling under her robe’s sleeves. Her eyes were not on the present and were, instead, on that day too.
He wished to run, to flee, to be anywhere but here. He had his horse packed and prepared. If he could master himself, he could rise and take his wife far away, where it would be guaranteed that he would not suffer from the clash between cultivators. They would surely be drawn to the town that was gripped with confusion over a lone man and woman on horseback.
“Lord Magistrate… what do we do?” one of his aides, Dian, asked. The man looked upon him with absolute trust, ready to carry out his commands.
The Lord Magistrate swallowed… and rose to his feet.
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In Hong Yaowu, the people flinched and huddled together in the chief’s house or their own homes. The streets, rife with festive decorations, were deserted.
The people stared in awe and horror as muffled booms of two distant, clashing titans rumbled in their bones. Wind blew through the village, the remnants of shockwaves from a battle far away.
Hong Xian the Younger reeled, holding his nose as blood dripped out of it. The smell of ozone clashed with the smell of a crisp winter day. It smelled like pine and mint, cold icicles and hot tea. His father’s arms held him tightly so he wouldn’t fall.
Eventually, the light faded. The village was plunged into darkness, for the wind had snuffed out many of the lit candles.
And then the whimpering began. Other kids started wailing, and several of the grannies and grandpas trembled, trying to put on brave faces. Even Big Bro Bowu, who had stayed in the village, looked scared. He and Ty An were holding each other's hands.
His father, Uncle Che, Uncle Ten Ren, and Auntie Hu Li rose and started walking around, making sure everybody was alright.
Quiet Liu, sitting beside him, tugged on Xian’s shirt. She looked at Xian. He could see the tears in her eyes.
He held her hand and pulled her closer. He looked again at the people of Hong Yaowu, his people. The people he would be chief of some day.
He looked at the terror on their faces. He saw their despair.
The darkness seemed to deepen, like a great shadow was crawling over the land to swallow them all up.
It was the day of the longest night. It was the day they were supposed to dance in order to bring back the sun.
It was his duty, as it was his father’s, and his father’s father before him.
The 78th Hong Xian swallowed thickly. He glanced at his father, who was still trying to calm everyone down. He took a deep breath and stood. His legs were shaking and knees were knocking together. Liu, surprised, looked up at him.
“I got something I need to do,” he told her simply. He made to let go of her hand, but Liu held on tighter. Her watery eyes held a glint of determination in them. Her grip tightened on his hand and she hauled herself to her feet with a huff.
With as much determination as he could muster, he strode on his shaky legs to Big Bro Bowu and Ty An.
They listened to his plan. Bowu took a deep breath and his eyes hardened.
“You got it, Chief,” Bowu said, as he too rose.
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“You are my sunshine, my only sunshine. You make me happy, when skies are grey. You’ll never know dear, how much I love you, please don’t take my sunshine away.”
A clear pure voice rose above the rumbles and distant booms, singing a song Gou Ren had heard Jin sing a few times before. It rose above the wails of a babe, soft and comforting, as a mother rocked her son in her arms.
He would never say how much comfort he too drew from Meiling’s soft voice as he stared at the golden light in the distance. She had sung to him a lot when he was younger, and that voice, when he had laid sick in bed, had been the sign that he would be better soon.
Slowly, Zhuye’s cries quieted. Gou Ren looked around him at the others who were all standing guard. Tie Delun, standing beside him, took deep breaths, his eyes closed, and his face set. Wa Shi was leaning against the wall, his expression one Gou Ren had never seen on the dragon. Huo Ten was clutching a spear made of crystal, his mining helm strapped tight to his head. Bei Be was calmly hitching himself into his plow. Pi Pa was shifting from foot to foot, a look of worry on her face. Miantiao was curled in on himself. The Torrent Rider was biting his lip, and Shaggy Two was growling low in his throat.
Then, the sky turned gold. Everybody flinched.
‘Report from the field. More enemy forces attempting a pincer movement. Contact lost with Emperor’s scouts,’ Chun Ke said as he watched Vajra wiggle. His voice was steady and strong. ‘—contact. Northwest. Contact, Southwest. Scouts along the southwestern route are being destroyed. A thin fog is rolling in before the scouts stop reporting. Likely poison.’
“Yes, I can smell them now. The one to the southwest does smell like poison. The other… I’m unsure. String, perhaps? Two of them are as strong as the one Jin is fighting,” Mei’s overly calm voice called out from the interior of their fort. She stepped into view, Zhuye clinging to her chest with tears in his eyes.
The mood turned grim at that statement.
“Don’t use poison against the poison cultivator,” Gou Ren muttered as he stared at Vajra’s map. New dots were forming on it as the bees rearranged themselves. “Vajra, get Mei’s traps to the northwest as fast as you can.”
Gou Ren paused as soon as he said it. Nobody was technically in charge, but… wouldn’t that be Meimei?
Mei, however, just nodded, and obviously wanted Gou Ren to continue. The bee buzzed and instantly a flight of them zipped into the room that was holding the glass balls. Fire crystals primed to explode, Miantiao’s Qi-infused glass shards, and Meimei’s poison.
“We need to slow down the poison one too, at least until Jin and the others get back. Any suggestions?”
‘Chun Ke will slow them,’ the boar said with conviction. Gou Ren turned… and then had to look up as he realised Chun Ke was not on the wall anymore. Instead, he was on the ground… and towering above him. His rust-red fur had turned to grass. His tusks were the trunks of giant trees. Stone armor clad his form.
‘Yes. We will slow them,’ Pi Pa agreed. The pink, dainty pig had steel in her tone. She looked up at Chun Ke, as if daring him to say no.
Instead, the massive boar nuzzled her. ‘Fight together again,’ Chun Ke said with a small smile.
Meimei suddenly scented the air. “Jin won. Tigu, Xiulan, Yin, and Xianghua are all fine as well,” she reported, a small, vindictive smile on her face “I don’t think he's too injured, either, but… it took a lot out of him.”
The last part was said with a bit of trepidation.
…could Jin handle two more at that guy’s level?
“I can handle one. Maybe,” Meimei whispered.
“Then we'll buy as much time as we can for Jin and the others to get back,” Gou Ren replied. “Alright everybody, let's get ready for a fighting retreat…”
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Wa Shi watched as the others discussed how they would sally forth to defend their home. He glanced up at the sky and shivered, remembering the torrent of power that had run through it. And they were going to have to fight two more of those.
It was terrifying. It was horrifying. He wanted nothing more than to just grab everyone and run.
But he couldn't. They were committed to defending their home. All of them were.
And none of them expected anything of him. Not really. They expected him to run. They were, if things went bad, relying on him to run.
It was the correct choice. It was the right choice. He did not want to die.
“Maybe, Wa Shi… you should go,” Big Sis Mei said gently to him. ”Get a head start, just in case.” She held her son out slightly. It would be so easy to take Little Bro and run.
To abandon everyone. To abandon everything.
If he took that route… he would not be a dragon. He would never be a dragon. He would be a scared little carp for the rest of his life, no matter what he looked like.
Wa Shi looked into Zhuye’s purple eyes. Into his tearful eyes.
Wa Shi rose to his feet.
“No,” he said, but not in Qi Speech. Instead, his voice came out booming and strong. “I will not forsake my home.” Big Sis took a step back as Wa Shi came to his full height. “I am a dragon. Dragons do not run. Chun Ke and Pi Pa are going to the south. I’ll go to the north. We’ll have as much time as we need.”
A peal of thunder punctuated his oath.
Big Sis stared at him, before reaching out her hand. Wa Shi leaned into the touch as she hugged his snout against her forehead.
Then she stepped back and reached into her sleeve. “I made this for you in case you needed to go fast… but you should be able to use it here,” she said.
Wa Shi stared at the bamboo container and at the familiar scent within. His mouth became wet with drool.
“An energy drink?” he asked.
“Triple concentrated,” Big Sis replied.
Wa Shi laughed, taking the gift, and turned to where Chun Ke was standing. His titanic friend and that saucy wench Pi Pa both smiled at him.
Wa Shi launched himself into the air, heading north.
Chun Ke and Pi Pa began their rumbling charge south.
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I was out of breath as I sat in the crater that had formed around me. Zang Zeng was leaning against the crater wall beside me, unconscious and breathing shallowly. I had no idea if the brain damage he had taken from having that gross mind-control parasite in his head would kill him later… but that was an issue for another time. The parasite was stored safely in a glass bottle—the glass bottle that had once been full of Meimei’s special medicine. Which was nice, because these electrical burns hurt like a bitch. As did my arms. There were a couple of golden cracks in them.
My shirt was gone and my hat was burnt to a crisp, its ashes somewhere out there. My shovel was stuck in a hill. I was beat up, I was tired… but I wasn’t out of the fight yet. I still had gas left in the tank. First, home needed to be warned, then I needed to go help the girls. I reached behind my ear, where I could feel the bee trembling. I reached back and gently took it… only for it to buzz pitifully. It had been knocked unconscious.
I sighed and gave the little one a pat.
Okay. I need another bee. I grimaced and made to rise. The girls might need my help—
“Master!” Tigu shouted as she appeared at the edge of the crater. I smiled up at her as Xiulan, Yin, and Xianghua’s heads popped up after her—and then I noticed the blood on Tigu’s chest and the hole in the bandages. I opened my mouth to demand if she was okay, but she preempted me.
“I’m fine, Master!” she called. “Mistress’s medicine fixed me up!”
I sagged slightly and let out a breath.
“Not just playing tough?” I asked her.
She shook her head. I would have to trust her.
“Anybody still have their bee? There's two more attacks coming our way.”
That got their attention. Four other bees appeared from behind their ears, buzzing up into the air. I thought they were getting ready to report back for us, but instead they started wiggling in the way that meant ‘get out a piece of paper.’
Xianghua did so, and the little ones quickly started writing, each one using a tiny nib of charcoal to help write out the message.
“Attacks coming from the northwest and southwest. Enemies strong. Please hurry.”
I took a deep breath and said a mental apology to Zeng and the Shrouded Mountain Sect people. We couldn’t carry them with us, and carrying them into a battlefield was probably not the best idea.
They were cultivators. They would survive a bit of cold.
“Let’s go. I just need to grab my shovel first.”
I needed my poor abused comrade. Its blade was all beat up… but the haft, the one Tigu had carved for me, had not a scratch on it.
Our feet started pounding on the path home.
“Country Roads, Take Us Home,” I whispered, praying that we would get there in time.
The land twitched under my feet.
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Huian grimaced as they lost the connection to the Puppet Worm. The last thing the beast saw was a man’s green eyes, threaded with cracks of gold, as he squeezed the life out of it.
They had expected Zeng to last longer. The power output had been much higher than they had expected from Zeng, but in the end…
What the Hells was that technique?
It was dangerous, whatever it was. And while Zeng had clearly tired the man out, Huian was wary. The man was a foe dangerous beyond measure. It was best to wear him down and distract him more. Huian sent a mental command to the reserves. The later arrivals, around half of the artificial demons, had been sent on a small diversion on the way here, investigating where a couple of their scouts had been killed.
The distance was a bit far, especially in the Qi void they were in, having circled around for a better angle, but the command to press forward should have been heeded.
A burst returned. Confusion. Anger. Under attack?
Huian grimaced. Damn things. They needed oversight still. They tried to connect to a scout. One flashed active—only for the thing to immediately perish, impaled by a throwing knife. The only thing Huian glimpsed was the knife, a flash of blonde hair, and then a wall of mist barring the way of the reserves.
Huian grimaced. They couldn’t leave a hostile force to follow and pick off the reserves at will…
Kill attacker. Press on. Reserves demanded.
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Far away, at a place known as First Den, an army of demons received new orders. They roared and advanced, their previous hesitation gone.
And just like last time, as they surged into the clouds, demons began to die.
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Next up: Lu Ri gets his time in the sun,a nd then back to Bi De and his squad.
Edited by: Brandon “Philosophysics” Zhang-Leong, BargleNawdleZouss, Aaron “Pastafarian” Sofaer, Massgamer,
Comments
Is it weird to ship Hong Xian (the younger one) and Quiet Liu after this chapter? They were cute.
CringeWorthyStudios
2024-08-27 07:14:26 +0000 UTCThe secondary demons were attacking the people at the first den, the mist and attacker is the fox kin…
Aesoir
2024-08-03 00:05:41 +0000 UTCDude, Im at work. Can't wait!
Net
2024-08-02 21:15:20 +0000 UTCMist and Raging Cloudy Sword Formation work together, I think. We'll see for sure next chapter.
Randall Brynsvold
2024-08-02 20:02:48 +0000 UTCBowu was also supposed to be part of that, and he's at Hong Yaowu.
Randall Brynsvold
2024-08-02 19:58:08 +0000 UTCLast mentioned in the previous chapter, just before Jin caught the lightning and separated out the puppet worm: "It was harder without Tianlan. She did so much for me, and with her asleep, it felt like I was trying to lift up the entire world. But there was something else. Something else once more lending its aid. Instead of Tianlan’s hug and warm touch, this was cold and dutiful. It was small and young feeling."
Randall Brynsvold
2024-08-02 19:48:03 +0000 UTCLook at the section that starts with Meiling singing to Zhuye, told from Gou Ren's point of view. Tie Delun is standing next to him, along with Wa Shi, Huo Ten, Bei Be, Pi Pa, Miantiao, Torrent Rider, and Shaggy Two. Chun Ke is also there with Vajra acting as translator.
Randall Brynsvold
2024-08-02 19:34:12 +0000 UTCimo give it another year or so, i believe that both TLM and wife will gain the spark, and be able to cultivate, will they is the question. mostly due to eating jin's food. EVERYONE has at least a little qi- even bowu.
Len
2024-08-02 17:08:20 +0000 UTCI doubt it would be Chunky. It would take a lot to kill him, given that he is the third strongest member of Fa Ram.
Rakkis157
2024-08-02 15:52:55 +0000 UTCThank you for the hilarious mental image.
Gwyn
2024-08-02 14:49:10 +0000 UTCOrthos would be so proud. Considering Travis Baldree has done the audio books for both series, it's not impossible we get a cross-over one day. I can too easily see the Cradle/Reaper crew pop out of a burst of blue light into Fa Ram for a vacation.
Gwyn
2024-08-02 14:48:28 +0000 UTCI think TLM would make the perfect righteous cultivator. Even more than Lu Ri or Bi De. I also think it would kind of ruin him in this story. He’s meant to be a prime example of how wrong cultivators are to look down on mortals because all the things they claim to fight for he embodies better than any of them. It’s part of his core traits that he is ultimately just a regular person. In any other story I’d be all for him and his wife to become cultivators and prove that even those who start late can conquer the heavens. But not in this one. I’d love to see an alternate timeline where they are cultivators though. They’d be a hell of a power couple!
D J Meigs
2024-08-02 12:40:20 +0000 UTCmaybe, tomorrow
Aune
2024-08-02 12:28:00 +0000 UTC✋️
Leili Mård
2024-08-02 12:06:40 +0000 UTCIs anyone else is waiting for the chapter to come out tonight?
umbrellaes
2024-08-02 08:32:30 +0000 UTCRight? Casual has been delivering bangers lately too. So happy to be a patron.
Mario Cole
2024-08-02 02:09:44 +0000 UTCi think Lu Ri is gonna use the cloudy sword formation thing that he has hinted he is close to being able to use? just a guess
Levi
2024-08-01 22:19:29 +0000 UTCI think that's The Befuddling Mists of Da Ji, as mentioned by Nezan back when he first met Yun Ren
Gray Code
2024-08-01 16:11:49 +0000 UTCMist, huh. Lu Ri is living up to the name of the Cloudy Sword, I see. :3
linkhyrule5
2024-08-01 07:02:10 +0000 UTCThis is definitely if not one of the best chapters ever one of the best chapters in a while, I've reread it three times the scene where Wa Shi finds his determination gives me chills
Rune Shadow
2024-08-01 05:00:54 +0000 UTCI mean, the amount of food he's received from Jin might grow his Qi
taukid
2024-08-01 03:24:11 +0000 UTCHelping Jin as a stand-in for Tianlan I believe.
Alex Ingraham
2024-08-01 02:03:31 +0000 UTCNew minor shennong technique: [Country roads, take us home]. Washy going full Dragon. Little Chief is going to dance for the sun to come. Looking forward to all the chapters.
jeffrey niski
2024-07-31 23:38:47 +0000 UTCCue Washi in human form: Toriko mode on.
Bruno Vieira
2024-07-31 22:32:25 +0000 UTCWa Shi going to play Dragon Ball
Old Dog
2024-07-31 21:42:35 +0000 UTCCRY HAVOC AND LET SLIP THE BEASTS OF FA RAM
WolfKnight22
2024-07-31 20:59:43 +0000 UTCDead... or mostly dead?
Paul Boros
2024-07-31 20:46:42 +0000 UTC[Cleansing Arts: You're Soaking In It]
Gray Code
2024-07-31 19:00:37 +0000 UTCShennong is dead. I'm inclined to believe Jiguang on that one.
Gray Code
2024-07-31 18:47:30 +0000 UTCOtoh Hong Xian Sr has qi, and he could have become a cultivator.
Abhimanyu Susobhanan
2024-07-31 17:27:00 +0000 UTCIt's mentioned that he had no qi. So he has no chance of awakening.
Abhimanyu Susobhanan
2024-07-31 17:25:08 +0000 UTCHopefully the poisons are in the Suborned Mountain Sect members' blood, and not also on their weapons. Shen Yu:"Okay, _second_ weakest dragon I've ever encountered. Maybe third."
Gray Code
2024-07-31 17:07:03 +0000 UTCI'm starting to think the magistrate should be made into a cultivator. It would eliminate a lot of his problems
Evander
2024-07-31 16:46:43 +0000 UTCLove that washy wants to fight but he is the little buds protecter and escape plan..
BigBro Bluesman
2024-07-31 16:13:10 +0000 UTCLu Ri DID say long ago he needs preparation to call upon the Raging Cloudy Sword Formation, and he certainly had that! These demons have no idea how badly they screwed up!
BlueMage Theneras
2024-07-31 15:45:25 +0000 UTCLets fucking go Washy!!
James Faulkner
2024-07-31 15:21:06 +0000 UTCI also love the contrast of Meimei singing sweetly and creating powerful medicine -- but also creating a strong paralytic poison that they all use, of course, on the enemy. She's a wonderfully complex character.
Laura H
2024-07-31 15:07:55 +0000 UTCThe Solstice dance was originally meant to empower Tianlan. Hong Yaowu performs it in order to bring the warmth back to the land. Xian the Younger is definitely about to awaken a very upset Tianlan.
tim
2024-07-31 15:03:30 +0000 UTC@ CUI13 I'll play Asshole's Advocate and say that I wouldn't mind if a few named characters died. Chunky is a really nice, brain-damaged boar who loves kids, Pi Pa and Fa Ram. Miantiao is... an old, sad serpent who's been a semi-father to Yin. Wa Shi is a cowadly fish-dragon who loves food and his finally found his courage. Their character arcs seem, to me, to have run their courses. With Chunky's death, seeing Pi Pa going "hog wild" with Void rage against demons would kind of rock. Right now, aside from everyone who basically lives at Fa Ram, you've got Bi De's group with Yun Ren and Ri Zu plus the SMS characters (including the lady they're trying to rescue) and the Thunderhoof. If they (or most of them) make it back to Fa Ram, we'll be at or close to the point where there's so many characters that there's not really enough story for them so they're just... there kind of taking up space. I'd prefer fewer characters who are active participants in the story than an army of characters who just sort of get lost in the background.
John D Jones
2024-07-31 14:27:36 +0000 UTCMeimei is going to channel some massive Momma-Bear energy. Not to mention the Away Team taking out Huilan at an advantageous moment while The Sword That Walks has fun killing the creepy old man. Also wondering if Shennong is still around, given the training courses he seems to have invested himself in where he seems to be aware of Jin and TianLan. I am now positing that TianLan is going to wake up... cranky... given that her Bonded invoked John Denver...
Paul Boros
2024-07-31 14:26:22 +0000 UTC*The Dragon
Rat with a Pick
2024-07-31 14:17:45 +0000 UTCDivines bless your kind heart! This little beggar has broken his oath just to see this and it is worth it.
Beggar of Freedom
2024-07-31 14:07:52 +0000 UTC[Country Roads, Take Us Home] The ghost of John Denver is pleased.
TwoRavens
2024-07-31 13:59:23 +0000 UTCThe Dragon Advances. The Dragon Destroys. The Dragon Conquers.
TwoRavens
2024-07-31 13:56:35 +0000 UTCNow that washy won't run, I'm imagining a swarm of bees holding up a baby flying down the road. Lol.
matthew gilley
2024-07-31 13:56:00 +0000 UTCAs always, thank you for the (incredible) chapter. Great way to get the heart pumping in the morning. Looking forward to the next few. What am I saying, I look forward to all of them. I can see the SM people waking up and seeing the lightening flashes and wonder which of their comrades is shouting [Demon Barbecue].
Old Dog
2024-07-31 13:32:18 +0000 UTCBehold, [The Demon Barbecue]
Old Dog
2024-07-31 13:25:59 +0000 UTCOf course the stressful aspect of this arc is that it feels like SOMEONE is going to die
CUI13
2024-07-31 13:24:48 +0000 UTCHaha, good catch. First den, blond hair, and wall of mist hit me too fast that missed the surge into clouds. Mist and clouds are super simpatico, Lu Ri's fiancee better set up the barriers.
Ch W
2024-07-31 13:24:48 +0000 UTCLet's go Washy! The Dragon does not run. The Dragon advances.
Gwyn
2024-07-31 13:19:48 +0000 UTCTftc! Next time, I'll bet we see how much Li Ju learned from Gramps about invoking the Cloudy Sword Formation, since Gramps helped him with advice and training as they were traveling. I'm really not worried about Li Ju! But seeing everyone around Hong Yaowu and Fa Ram working together and finding things within themselves that they could use to protect and show the others how they've grown is just wonderful! Xien, only 11 or so, is maturing quickly. Wa Shi has found his courage! Meimei has learned one of the sweetest songs people can sing to show love and calmness. Babe is arming himself with his plow and I'm sure Sunny will enjoy it. And the bees are just fantastic, helping everyone! It's a wonderful time story with incredible characters who make us proud nonstop!
Laura H
2024-07-31 13:11:23 +0000 UTCI really appreciate this arc because it finally feels like Jin and co. are going up against actual dangerous foes who could kill them. The closest we've come to this before was the Dueling Peaks arc and even then it was more "Will Xuilan and Bi De hold out long enough for Jin to show up and bitch-slap Lu Ban into non-existence? Obviously, yes." Now it's a lot more dangerous because there's a lot more characters. I think Jin, Meiling, Xuilan and Tigu are safe but everyone else is in some degree of in danger.
John D Jones
2024-07-31 12:40:59 +0000 UTCThe solstice dance provided Qi to the earth when they danced before. That’s how the quest started for Bi De … I wonder if it will help give Qi back to Jin so he can keep fighting
Daniel
2024-07-31 12:32:47 +0000 UTCFigure the corpse is in the jar so Meiling can dissect to lean what poison will kill it more efficiently.
John D Jones
2024-07-31 12:32:21 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter. Really great work on the level of scared/worry from the mortals and farm.
Justin
2024-07-31 12:30:54 +0000 UTCCould they possibly ever be named anything else??
Laura H
2024-07-31 11:59:49 +0000 UTCWa Shi and Memei's energy drink = DragonForce!
WarStrider72
2024-07-31 11:56:39 +0000 UTCOh, will we get redemption for the puppet worm? Or does Jin just has its corpse in the jar?
WarStrider72
2024-07-31 11:56:04 +0000 UTCThe part with Chun Ke getting ready to figt makes me think of two specific quotes. "Three things all wise men fear: The sea in a storm, a night with no moon, and the anger of a gentle man." and "Demons run when a good man goes to war."
Just A Dude
2024-07-31 11:37:15 +0000 UTCSo many great sequences in here. Poor Lord Magistrate.
Randall Norman Pick
2024-07-31 11:22:23 +0000 UTCI love this idea. Very fitting for Wa Shi. This comment even got me thinking of how it could work. Maybe Wa Shi can build up a sort of reserve of different elemental Qi as he consumes food that is infused with said Qi. His techniques could also be inspired by methods of preparing/cooking food. In order to replenish his reserves of the different types of Qi he would just need to eat the appropriate food, but to grow the maximum size of his reserves he would need to consume new varieties of food. Eating the same stuff over and over again would have diminishing returns. I think this would work well with his desire to taste new types of food.
Pebble
2024-07-31 10:54:49 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter! This is great!
Kali Smith
2024-07-31 10:13:42 +0000 UTCGo Wa Shi!
Kenshin McRee
2024-07-31 09:30:22 +0000 UTCEverybody wants to be a dragon... until it's time to do dragon shit. Wa Shi is a real one.
Gabriel McCall
2024-07-31 09:15:46 +0000 UTCThese are some great chapters we’re getting.
D J Meigs
2024-07-31 08:42:31 +0000 UTCThey just went plaid
Michael Foat
2024-07-31 08:36:49 +0000 UTCI think Xian Jr is going to dance the solstice dance, and they’re gonna drum for him… wonder if you could rig a drop hammer into a drum?
Kat
2024-07-31 08:16:07 +0000 UTCHe's gone to plaid
Lewis
2024-07-31 07:55:21 +0000 UTCForever ago, when they first awakened, Gou and Yun fantasized about being a great general and a sword master respectively. Well here ones commanding a siege defense and the other is assaulting a demonic stronghold with sword-in-hand. How far they’ve come.
SilasDrekken
2024-07-31 07:18:59 +0000 UTCMan, so many tears. Going back to sleep will be tough...
Namorat
2024-07-31 07:08:47 +0000 UTCThe mist of Foxes and the Clouds of Swords. Those demos will not see shit and will not last long
Cj
2024-07-31 06:56:59 +0000 UTCWow.. today I had to stop in between reading the chapter because I could not see from the tears... I never thought I could find another independent author as brilliant as Will Wight, but here we are.. and I don't even know your name 😅 If you haven't already, I hope you can make writing your full time job. You are a gift to the world. Thank you for the work you put in the Beware of Chicken 🙇
Leili Mård
2024-07-31 06:21:48 +0000 UTCTftc
Nick
2024-07-31 06:21:32 +0000 UTCOne-shot a demon, but more importantly, he'll discover vanilla, chocolate, AND coffee! :-)
BargleNawdleZouss
2024-07-31 06:19:27 +0000 UTCAh yes trow more demons at the expert demon killer. That'll work just fine.
leopard eye
2024-07-31 06:18:38 +0000 UTCThe carp grew a spine huh that's nice! Thank you for the chapter
Kasinki
2024-07-31 06:15:29 +0000 UTCthe you are my sunshine hurts. its what my mother and grandma sang to me as a kid when i was upset. talk about a stab to the heart. good chapter tho
michael shafer
2024-07-31 06:14:35 +0000 UTCyou might even say he would reach ludicrous speed lmao
suspiciouscoffee
2024-07-31 06:11:06 +0000 UTCWell, considering that the demons are walking into a cloud and then dying I’d imagine so.
CringeWorthyStudios
2024-07-31 06:04:28 +0000 UTCThank you for the Chapter.
Demian Buckle
2024-07-31 06:00:07 +0000 UTCI want Washi’s Qi Techniques to be named after food!!!
Sean Ulrich
2024-07-31 05:57:43 +0000 UTCBro you can’t have me start crying in public transport like that. Excellent chapter!
Lord Searing Simp
2024-07-31 05:45:38 +0000 UTCBabe grabbing his weapon had me shook, Huo Ten and Gou Ren to be fighting on the same battlefront is something I didn't know I wanted. Wa Shi being more than what they needed was beautiful. Lu Ri fighting should be a sight. He's had enough time to prepare the Raging Cloudy Sword Formation, right?
Ch W
2024-07-31 05:44:16 +0000 UTCThis has been so great with many stand out sequences. What is Bo Wu's iron dragon suppose to do to help? Him borrowing from steampunk so he can pull a trainbot into the mix would super surprising. Not likely but it's a dream goal, right?
Ch W
2024-07-31 05:43:22 +0000 UTCWell the artificial demons slamming into the psuedo-Elder that is Lu Ri with defensive wards to boot. They don't stand a chance in hell of arriving as reinforcements.
N U
2024-07-31 05:40:29 +0000 UTCSo damn excited!!
Alex Ingraham
2024-07-31 05:39:52 +0000 UTC"'Tis but a flesh wound!"
Alex Ingraham
2024-07-31 05:38:45 +0000 UTCWhere is ..THE GENERAL!!!!
Len
2024-07-31 05:27:30 +0000 UTCHoly shit what a chapter o.o thank you very much CF!
Nemoboi
2024-07-31 05:23:07 +0000 UTCThe last time he took a hit of that Energy Drink, WaShi nyoomed his way into a hidden realm and eventually dragonhood 😂 Triple concentrate, he's gonna surpass lightspeed lmao 🤣 Ok, 1 down, potentially 2 or more fights to go 😖
Lanter
2024-07-31 05:19:38 +0000 UTCPoor demons are jumping right onto a Cloudy Sword.
Gigifiy
2024-07-31 05:18:38 +0000 UTCHe’ll run when it’s time. It’s NOT that time yet.
Aki_Iokua18
2024-07-31 05:12:35 +0000 UTCAt the newly built fort, as part of the rearguard.
Aki_Iokua18
2024-07-31 05:10:50 +0000 UTCThe last time the koi got a dose of caffeine, he returned home a dragon. Now he's going off on a triple dose! What newer heights is he gonna be reaching now?
Havencross3093
2024-07-31 05:10:14 +0000 UTCIncredible chapter
Brian Thompson
2024-07-31 05:09:42 +0000 UTCHm.... where is Handsome Man?
Michael Beard
2024-07-31 05:09:25 +0000 UTCAbsolutely gripping stuff. How I wish I wasn’t caught up, so I could read more. Huh, so both heavenly demons are heading pincers. I’ll be honest, I sorta expected the puppet person to head to the first den since they brought it up. Hopefully the first den becomes a resource sink for the demons. I love the twin charges. They certainly won’t stop the bosses, but they can certainly finish off the minions and bleed out a good deal of strength from puppet and butterfly. And good on the mortals fighting in their own way. Strength comes in all shapes and sizes after all.
Aki_Iokua18
2024-07-31 05:08:13 +0000 UTCUgh my stomach is in knots and I’m kind of totally freaking out!!! Wa Shi, I love you forever you big glutton! Bring on the damn energy drink, this I gotta see.
Angel
2024-07-31 05:05:35 +0000 UTCPoor Jin the one person who would obey an order to run chooses instead to be a BADASS. Dragons do not run.
Gamer Doyle
2024-07-31 05:04:16 +0000 UTCGod this story is so good
Max Thomas
2024-07-31 05:03:03 +0000 UTCAh, it’s Tigu. So new paragraph also after “given.”
Kreylix
2024-07-31 04:55:30 +0000 UTCAwaiting “Arrow to a knee.”
Kreylix
2024-07-31 04:54:03 +0000 UTCThanks!
Trevor Mergen
2024-07-31 04:54:03 +0000 UTCTftc
Chris Warner
2024-07-31 04:53:35 +0000 UTCI am a dragon. DRAGONS DO NOT RUN. Orthos is proud of you, little buddy
Loah
2024-07-31 04:52:52 +0000 UTCYin watched as Tigu uncorked a bottle of the medicine they had been given. As Tigu took a draught of sparkling liquid, the most potent they had, the wound began to steam and its edges began to seal. “Now, the true question is what do we do with these men now? Most will remain paralyzed for a few hours, at least.” 1. Start a new paragraph here. 2. I do not know who is saying the dialogue here.
Kreylix
2024-07-31 04:52:44 +0000 UTCOmg omg omg omg!!!
Michael Beard
2024-07-31 04:50:24 +0000 UTC“It’s just a flesh wound.” 🤣
Kreylix
2024-07-31 04:48:51 +0000 UTCWa Shi's Big Damn Hero(tm) moment.
BargleNawdleZouss
2024-07-31 04:47:15 +0000 UTC