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v4c65: The Wheel Unending

Bi De moved his wings and neck, stretching himself out properly. It had been months since he had engaged in battle in this true form, and his opponent was not one that he could fight without being in peak condition.

He marveled at the way his body moved, feeling so much smoother and more precise compared to his human form. Breaking through increased… everything. His plumage was more refined. His eyes were sharper, and his senses had expanded in ways he had not known were possible. He was acutely aware of every part of his body. The little scars that Chow Ji’s impurities had left in his muscles had disappeared. The microfractures in his wings from Basi Bu Shi’s teeth, the scar on his leg from Sun Ken—all of these were no more.

It was like he had been born again from his egg; yet he could tell he still had much work to do. His body wished to change further. To expel more impurities and refine itself into a true weapon.

Bi De took a breath, the nourishing air of the Shrouded Mountain filling his lungs and replenishing his Qi. The damage Sheng had inflicted upon him was cataloged; it was only superficial.

This felt much better.

The roar of the crowd was in Bi De’s ears. Their tumultuous Qi filled the air as shock overcame them at Bi De’s true form. The tournament announcer looked for a brief instant like he was about to interfere… when he suddenly paused, his face going pale.

Zang Sheng’s mouth was open in shock and confusion.

“This one apologises for holding back. We may begin again,” Bi De said as he readied himself.

Zang Sheng went from shocked to angry.

That was you holding back? This is your more powerful form? I don’t know what’s more insulting. The fact you are a chicken, or that you were holding back against me.”

Lightning began to spark and crackle around his body as he started walking to the side, already looking for a more advantageous position to strike from. Bi De copied him. He had some aches and pains still from the battle so far, while Sheng was near fresh; Bi De had landed no telling blows in his human form.

“It was quite difficult,” Bi De replied. “You are a powerful foe, and it was only my familiarity with your arts that prevented my defeat.”

Sheng scowled even harder before he took in a breath, his eyes becoming sharp and dangerous.

To Bi De’s surprise, Sheng did not fly into a rage—instead, his intent focused. It seemed that out of all his opponents, Sheng would be the first to not underestimate Bi De in this true form. “Very well then,” the Young Master said evenly. “I suppose I was holding back slightly as well. It matters not the form you take. I shall crush you and have you serve me. Strength Above All.”

WIth those words said, no more needed to be spoken.

Bi De’s spurs ignited with holy lunar wrath. Sheng’s lightning Qi spiked. Bi De’s talons dug into the stone as he launched himself forwards.

[Thunderous Steps]

And then they were upon each other once more.

A fist wreathed in lightning met a silver blade.

A massive shockwave slammed into the barrier formation around the arena, making it flare.

Silver met gold, and both stopped dead.

Before, every other time when Sheng had struck, Bi De had given ground. He had retreated, utterly overpowered. Each moment was spent simply staying alive, attempting to minimise the damage taken.

Bi De stared into Sheng’s sparking blue eyes. Both of them flexed, throwing themselves backwards. Sheng raised his hand and Bi De narrowed his eyes, light gathering around them both.

[Fulmination Arts: Gold Wire]

[Light of the Full Moon]

Lightning smashed into a beam of cleansing sliver light. Each struggled against the other, until these too canceled each other out in a massive explosion that had the barriers flare up again.

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Fat Han felt rather numb.

His good friend, who had helped him out so much, was a Spirit Beast. And not just any Spirit Beast, but a chicken.

A chicken who was now fighting… no, now matching Zang Sheng.

Biren had obviously known. Known enough to make jokes about it even. And while Han did want answers… for now, all he could do was stare at what was going on below him.

It should have been comical. A chicken battling Zang Sheng. It sounded like a bad joke. It should have been over in an instant.

And yet the battle raged on.

Sparks and explosions of Qi lit up the growing dust cloud where they dueled as Zang Sheng clashed again and again with the proud cock who had challenged him. Rolling thunder heralded Shang’s blows, while Bi De’s power rang like a pure chime, beautiful and celestial.

There was enough power being thrown around that Han would have died in an instant had he been in the middle of it all. And they were clearly not slowing down. In fact, they seemed to be speeding up.

Sheng burst from the smoke, chased by Bi De.

Han could barely comprehend what happened next as both man and the rooster's limbs blurred. It looked more to him like one of Biren’s “slideshows” set in fast forward—he could only glimpse the clashes and brief pauses as the combatants struck a hundred, then a thousand times, as they both fell back down to earth.

Blood sprayed out from a cut on Sheng’s arm. Bi De grunted as electricity sparked along his body.

[Descending Lunar Fangs]

Bi De flipped, his spurs transitioning into savage sickles as they drove down towards Sheng. The man lifted his arm, accepting the blow and grunting as they bit down into his flesh—but he simply brought his other arm back in return.

[Heaven-Sundering Horn]

Sheng’s arm decompiled into lightning, turning into a blazing lance of coruscating energy, and in the space between heartbeats, Sheng drove it into the rooster’s chest.

The silver armor on Bi De’s chest blazed with light—but the attack overwhelmed it. The lightning lance penetrated, disintegrating the entirety of Bi De’s chest.

Han’s jaw dropped, stunned that Bi De had died so suddenly, only for Bi De’s body to become completely silver before fading like the mist at dawn—and for a completely black rooster to leap up from the shadows, his blazing silver spurs at the ready.

[Split faces of the Half Moon]

Sheng managed to pull his arm out of the silver doppelganger and ripped it down to meet the light with a roar.

Silver met gold, and the arena erupted again with Qi.

Han could only stare, his mouth dry, at just how far the gap was. He barely felt Yushang shaking him and screaming, or Shao Heng’s own wide-eyed awe.

And then, Han felt his resolve firm. He did not despair. Instead… he could only wonder when he would be able to stand there like them.

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Once more the world had narrowed completely to nothing but the fight for Bi De.

If he spared any thought to the world outside he would instantly lose this battle. Even speaking and banter was put aside, for Zang Sheng was not saying anything and Bi De knew that no words he spoke would have any effect.

Zang Sheng was as utterly focused as he.

Bi De twisted through an attack combination that would have dismantled a human, closing in on his adversary. Sheng was clearly inexperienced at fighting something as small as Bi De. The movements were off, but Sheng was adapting already as Bi De had to abort his own attack. He used his wings to throw himself backwards, lest he be pulverized by lightning. Sheng capitalized on the sudden shift in position and erupted forwards, his entire body shimmering with light.

Sheng had originally fought… safely, was the best way Bi De could describe. There were no openings. Every movement was perfect in order to bring Bi De to defeat without allowing even an inch of retaliation. It had showcased the power difference between them, yet Sheng had taken him seriously the entire time.

Now, Sheng’s attacks were bigger. The Young Master was leaving himself open to retaliation in a way he had not done before, but the sheer power he was unleashing made it hard to capitalize on any of those opportunities.

Whereas before it was only a matter of time until Bi De was defeated by him, now everything was on a knife’s edge.

They traded blows, like an ocean that ebbed and flowed in cycle. Bi De was bleeding; his feathers were scorched as another devastating blow clipped him. Sheng himself was littered with cuts, but the purifying moonlight did absolutely nothing more to him as it had done with Zang Li.

Zang Sheng… He was a monstrous man. He was strong. Ridiculously strong. Even Zang Li at his full power would have been utterly crushed before the torrent of lightning and the skills he displayed.

But as the fight went on, something did start to change. As they traded blows and pushed themselves to the limit… Sheng’s output started to fall slightly. His Qi started to diminish.

Sheng was starting to tire.

While Bi De himself needed to simply breathe in, the air of the province provided him with all he needed. He would still eventually exhaust himself… but it would be a long time yet.

The land gave freely to those who would give to it.

Sheng noticed this. It was impossible not to. His face twisted—and then, his eyes narrowed.

“So it's like this, then,” he stated simply.

[Forbidden Arts:—]

Bi De’s eyes widened as Sheng’s Qi suddenly spiked—the other man burning years off his very life, rather than be defeated.

The man completely decompiled into lightning, his eyes and body burning blue. He raised his hands and the world screamed.

[Ephemeral, Eternal Moment]

Light poured forth from him. It consumed the entire arena. It consumed the sky. It was an overwhelming attack. Bi De felt his feathers stand on end. The Aegis of the Full Moon would not be enough for this.

The world slowed down as the attack raced for Bi De, an attack that would be able to knock the top off a mountain.

It was a lethal blow, one Bi De could not block or dodge.

He closed his eyes as he summoned [The Split Faces of the Half Moon] to his side.

Bi De loved the moon. He loved its sublime beauty; the way it kept him company in those early days, his only companion in the night.

It was his sword and his shield… and it had never failed or disappointed him.

He once more placed his trust in that silver light.

Bi De opened his eyes. The lightning was nearly upon himself and his clone.

Bi De stepped forwards to meet it.

His feathers turned black and silver, the colours of his beloved moon. Beside him his other half did the same, cladding themselves in holy moonlight. A crescent burned on his brow.

Both of his halfs moved into the start of a flip. The start of his first move, the [Rising of the Crescent Moon]. His old, faithful friend.

And yet, even as he began the move, there was something fundamentally different about it.

Bi De was a creature of Yang, a bloodline tied to the call of the Sun, as a virile defender; yet he cultivated the Moon. The cold light and darkness.

But it was only one part of the whole. It was only one part of the cycle… just like himself.

The Moon and the Sun. Yin and Yang.

Yet… they were one in truth. One part of a never-ending dance.

He had never had the strength to do this before. But right now… Right now, he wished for victory. For Yushang… and for himself.

Something ignited. His shadowy clone merged into his body…and for a brief instant, Bi De burned gold.

The moon rose. Then the sun. Then the moon again, spiraling in their perfect harmony for all eternity.

Yin and Yang, darkness and light, a duet of one spun inexorably forwards towards the mass of lightning that was coming for him.

It had no name. Not yet. It was still incomplete.

The Lightning of Heaven met the Wheel of Eternity. A moment captured in the lightning’s glow ran into the march unending.

But it was enough.

The world disappeared into light. Bi De felt his feathers burn. He felt his body scream in protest. It felt like he was trying to resist the change of seasons, or turn the days back.

The gold fire faded, until all that was left was silver.

But he trusted in himself. He believed. The Moon always rose again.

And the lightning started to fade as the Taijitu burst through the back of the technique, blazing with silver.

Zang Sheng did not beg. He did not turn his back or try to flee.

He raised his arms in one last defiant block, holding no hatred in his eyes; all that remained in them was simple, begrudging respect.

Bi De’s leg slammed home into his chest.

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Bi De starts his path on the march of cycles.

Sheng gets clapped.

Edited by: Brandon “Philosophysics” Zhang-Leong, Massgamer, Aaron “Pastafarian” Sofaer, Ayje

Comments

I do not believe so, this is the result of him and Yin discussing their respective focus. The sun and the moon, with only one the cycle is incomplete. Together they are far more powerful, and connected.

Duncan Morin

Very late comment, but I strongly suspect that was Bi De taking his first proper step on the path of the Phoenix.

Spencer Miller

Remember the sun/moon Taijitu that appeared when Bi De had his level checked at the beginning of the tournament? Foreshadowing.

Randall Brynsvold

Previous descriptions of Bi De's [The Rising of the Crescent Moon] technique mention "rising" (a flip, jump, or leap) with a rising moon manifestation and then a kick. This time Bi De added a spinning sun/moon alternation culminating in a wheel or taijitu (yin/yang circle) that seemed to be a kinetic improvement over his Aegis of the Full Moon shield. Sheng turned into lightning and sent a continuous stream of it toward Bi De powered by his life force which was blocked by the new spinning sun/moon taijitu until the lightning died out (the attack and the manifestation around Sheng's body) and then Bi De completed the technique with the kick.

Randall Brynsvold

he joked about his brother being a monkey in the last chapter

דניאל זילברשטיין

The aegis of the full moon came from fighting the wolf I thought.

Rick Partridge

I don't think so. It's always stated that bi de is weaker in his human form, and he is due a new technique as the last time he made one was against sun ken. The way he made the new technique is also not bullshit as its derive from his concept of yin and yang not just simply friendship power. A well written ending imo

Azri

I'm confused by the end. So Sheng turned into lightning and struck down from above? And Bi De used a Sun/Moon taijitu that was actually a kick that then hit through Sheng's blocking arms? I would've been cool with a mutual knock out or even loss for Bi De as he doesn't know his current power, but this is fine, too.

MatrixM

Somewhat dissapointed. The setup where the protagonist is near a loss in a fight against a more powerful foe, then via some new insight etc gets a power boost and reverses the situation is blatantly (moronic) shounen battle-manga style. Of course, this may be intended to be a parody, but even so, the only thing that saves this thing (intended parody or not) is that the hero here reverts to being a chicken in the process - thereby creating loads of comedy reactions.

LBNoSc

All the normal stuff can be standard art and animation but all the wuxia stuff can be done jojo style

H

What an epic battle. There’s nothing else to say.

D J Meigs

'Instead… he could only wonder when he would be able to stand there like them.' This is a great example of why enemies are often left alive in the (straight version) of these kind of stories to hopefully change their ways so the art is increased. Fantastic fight. Bi De steps one closer to enlightment, and he told them *all*, Big D, he really did.

Randall Norman Pick

I'm sure he has over 500.

Old Dog

samesies!

N0ct3m

I honestly want to see Beware of Chicken become an anime at this point. But it would have to be done right and give the series justice. @Casualfarmer, if you ever turn this into a manga or anime you have a reader/watcher here lol.

Josh

I thought at first this chapter would be just one big wheel of time reference at first

fatbo

I mean, let's be a little honest here. Zang Sheng didn't fail to "a chicken." He failed to a cultivator who rose mid-battle to his own second level of the Spiritual Realm who was also a Spirit Beast, who happened to be a chicken.

John D Jones

Nothing we saw "onscreen" but we can assume there were plenty of "cock" jokes like we've been making here in the comments.

John D Jones

On a side note, can someone remind me what (in)Jokes ‘Biren’ made about Bi Di’s True Form?

V01D

Or it has something to do with how dark is simply the absence of light, that the sun doesn’t JUST emit (gravitational attraction), or the inverse/remains of a Nova - Black Holes.

V01D

I mean it'd be the kinda thing you'd notice with mountaintops appearing after after their slopes and such. Unless it's a curved infinite plain, in which case it must loop in on itself and that leads into all kinds of 4D bullshittery.

Red Viking

The golden glow I think had more to do with the inclusion of the sun with his normal moon techniques.

Skelethin

I wonder what Xianxia land would say to a flat land rotating on three elephants, that ride a gigant turtle...

Marcin

I think Tianlan or her Oneesama helped... there was a golden glow :D

Marcin

It's extra fun to realize that despite burning literally years of his life for that strike, he still failed to a chicken.

Skelethin

Thanks 👍

Mikkel Raffnsøe Koefoed

What a stupid comment - that made me laugh out loud. Have a heart.

Andrew Denton

It's even interesting that this fight could be argued to support BOTH of their positions: "Strength above all is not enough! You must have heart!" "No, you beat me by being stronger than me, proving MY point."

Andrew Denton

The Wheel Unending = Orbits go Brrr

Mikkel Raffnsøe Koefoed

Thank you for the great birthday present you gave us.

Old Dog

The moon could be a literal giant paper lantern lit by an inner light ... with bunnies on it. Who knows in Xianxia land?

Truedragon5374

This is awesome. Great fight, Zang was surprisingly mature, the fight ending in a conflicting philosophies, Awesome. But you know it seems to me that Bi De has been ignoring some of the facets of the moon. He has several techniques named after the phases of the moon, but he has never mentions the New Moon or a Waxing Moon. Not sure what kind of offense or defense could be drawn from a Waxing (aka 3/4) Moon, maybe some thing other than a fighting technique, like something for rapid self healing, like Healing Argent of The Waxing Moon. As for the New Moon ... you know alot of cultivators eventually learn some kind of movement technique, like dancing on wind or riding a flying sword. Maybe something like Hidden Depths of The New Moon would turn him into a shadow that could race across the ground. BTW i do hereby release any ownership of these ideas for free use by any party.

Truedragon5374

I hope Bi De has already formulated a way to not insult the young master by rejecting his service after his defeat. Like, "you'll work for me... independently, and I'll expect reports".

Randall Brynsvold

Remember the discussion Wa Shi had with Lu Ri about the "true" representation of the number one? Spirit Beasts especially seem to come to consciousness with a starter pack of language and cultural assumptions pre-imprinted, but they're not hard-wired in. They can be overcome and new habits can be formed with understanding and practice.

Randall Brynsvold

What a great way to end the fight. Absolutely wonderful! Can't wait for the best part now - the resolution, especially with Shen Yu and 'Biren'. Thank you once again for the chapter CF!

Kasinki

In this world, there are rabbits living on the moon. So it is likely that the magic moon in Xianxia works differently.

CrazyExplorer

Yeah talking about physics in xianxia is quite pointless venture

Szymon Szczełkun

I'can't wait for their past to be revaled but i just hope that yun ren won't miss his chance since that demon ancestor is about to take action .

Szymon Szczełkun

Aha! Finally getting to the good stuff where the greatest foes are actually enlightened as well, in their own way. I've always loved the way that the great epics are always about two foes fighting more with a philosophy than any particular martial art and letting the truths revealed act as whether they were right or wrong, victorious or defeated.

Runcible Technician

Ri Zu has already demonstrated that she will be jealous, so I do not think she will easily accept Bi De having a harem. And Bi De has responded to that, passing up opportunities

Nicholas Grey

Thank you for the Chapter.

Demian Buckle

@Namorat I dunno, I think the yearning was more the emotional aspect that he couldn’t have with the unintelligent animals rather than the monogamous aspect, but maybe, we’ll see.

CringeWorthyStudios

“Raised by a hidden master together with a beautiful childhood sweetheart. So yeah of course he will have a harem like a proper xianxia protagonist.” I want to disagree with that phrasing but yeah, yeah that checks out.

CringeWorthyStudios

Awesome 👌

Scottyboy22

At the start, when he was still sleeping with the chicks for offspring, he yearned to have what Jin and Meimei had with Ri Zu. Then he stopped with the chicks. I believe theirs will be a monogamous relationship, but with the teasing they saw with their masters.

Namorat

Vixens aren't monogamous. It's common for female foxes to have different fathers for their kits from the same litter. They just raise the kits in pairs.

swishmcfish

It might work differently for Xianxia Metaphysics.

swishmcfish

That's true on Earth, but is it true in Xianada? The planet is HUGE, if it even is a planet at all and not an endless plane.

KDBA

I wonder if Jin will ever tell him the moon is just reflecting the sunlight…

Fervent Fiend

I mean if you think about it Bi De is as much of a Xanxia Protagonist as they come, he comes from a poor up bring with an inhuman physic (mighty cock physic), raise by a hidden master together with a beautiful childhoods sweetheart. So yeah of course he will have a harem like a proper xanxian protag

Bob

"As God is my witness, I thought turkeys could fly!"

Randall Brynsvold

Tftc

Nick

Kudos on the shitty young master for living up to his creed - he does respect strength in the end, not merely parroting the words.

Sebastian Rubin

I think it's less about instinct - nature - and more about personality and upbringing - nurture. They will probably try to emulate Jin and Mei, or Peppa and Chun Ke, but I don't see anybody but they themselves objecting if they feel like expanding from a duet into a trio or quartet.

Sebastian Rubin

Jokes aside, do we have any info on how much personality and instincts spirit beasts in human form (and their descendants) inherit from their animal base? Foxes, for instance, are normally are monogamous whereas, importantly, chickens are rats *aren’t,* in fact rather the opposite. All that to say that, at least based on their animal origin, the jokes about Bi De forming a harem (and Ri Zu being okay with it) aren’t that unlikely if they inherit their instincts from their animal forms. (It’d also be pretty funny for Fengfeng to actually join Bi De’s harem so I kinda just want to see that.)

CringeWorthyStudios

Aye, his ideology is brutal, but it isn't malicious. And in a way he is truly fair, applying his standards to everyone, including himself.

Cindermoth

Ah! The classic xianxia mid-fight breakthrough! Bi De is truly a Harem MC! Also, am I the only one who wants to see Fengfeng react to the fight? She’s gonna be *so* thirsty from watching the young master battle with that magnificent cock.

CringeWorthyStudios

The fight is over but I’m looking forward to what comes next even more

H

One "issue" with Wuxia novels is that you always have to make the protagonists current power level seem overwhelming and awesome... Only for them to advance to the next level and now their old power and old moves are weak. My favorite part of any Nigel like that is the beginning where everyone is still low level and struggling to advance. So, the Azure Hills basically.

Paul S.

From what i remember Yin rejects the moon so while its possible she could learn this it will take some character development before she accepts it.

Ryan Naquin

LETS FUCKING GOOOOO

James Faulkner

Another great chapter. I like Zang Sheng's conviction in the face of coming defeat

Marta Barańska

Such beauty, such skill... such a magnificent cock.

Oni

Thanks for the chapter, it is awesome.

Will Iam

Oh man, please give us the Patriarch's pov after this. Obe of their best got destroyed by a chicken, their dirty past is about to be revealed, and he can't do shit because a myth is on his throne whose presence alone is overwhelming him.

Giovanni Paches

Soon he will believe that a chicken can fly.

Z H

I don't think it was ever spelled out explicitly in the story but maybe. I'm still waiting for Bide to come up with an Eclipse based move myself. Maybe a tag team technique between him and Yin.

Z H

Thanks a bunch! ʕ•ᴥ•ʔゞ゛

Sezra_

“The Wheel of Eternity” is an awesomely *Xianxia* technique name

Nicholas Grey

I like the crowd stand in shock and awe at the beauty and skill

Stan Cornett

"Bi De views his human form as a disguise. " One might even say... He wears a disguise to look like human guys. But he's not a man; he's a chicken.

Andrew Denton

WoG is that Tianlan "tilled under" her bloodline to keep her from literally exploding. She probably could do this kind of thing eventually, but I think it would be about more than accepting her past. Bi De admires the moon and wishes to learn from it, Yin doesn't so much admire the sun as embody it. I feel like she would have to change what her cultivation was about in a fairly profound way to do this. Though I imagine Bi De could perform a more complete version of the technique with her help.

John Pratt

Magnificent. How much a better adversary Sheng is comoared to the original. The cycle of creatiom and destruction. Nice

Victor Segura

I have a mental image of Howling Fang-Chan watching this fight from her mountaintop, making notes to tell Tianlan once they reconnect.

BargleNawdleZouss

It’s perfect!! I need more!!! I’m going to work on time travel to fast forward to the next chapter! In the meantime I’ll just sleep!

Cam

Zang Sheng becomes Bi De’s new best friend/rival?

Teh One & TrueTabi

He can imitate a human, but he isn't one. Not only does it make it harder to use techniques designed for his true form, that kind of deception isn't compatible with his cultivation/dao. As he said, "The Heavens do not hide".

Empty Shelf

accepting oneself is necessary in the path of ascension

Baines

Excellent!

Mike lee

Damn that was amazing. Casual, did you plan the wheel technique from the beginning?

BelligerentGnu

Bi De once again show some development to his cultivation mid fight and shows why's he's such a good character. The Young amateur Zang Shen on the otherhand shows that he someone worthy of respect.

GameJunkie999

Yep. He's respectful and gives face to those that earn it.

GameJunkie999

Yesss please

Briar

See I think she left that behind when she "reforged" herself

BigBro Bluesman

Ok ok ok...calm down..wow that.was.AWESOME!!!!! HOLY HELL THAT RIGHT THERE WAS AN ANIME FIGHT!

BigBro Bluesman

Bi de is a creature of the sun but cultivates the moon, Yin is a creature of the moon but cultivates the sun, so she should be able to do something similar to Bi de here if she can get over her dislike of the moon and accept that part of herself

AG

You tell 'em, Big D!

Just A Dude

He's beginning to believe

Samuel Wang

So fricking good. Did Jin ever explain to Big D that the moon's light and shadow are caused by the sun and the earth?

Red Viking

This is really well done and goes back to one of the earlier thoughts of Bi Di. His thoughts on the cycles of the land. Cycles are something he has long thought on and it's appropriate he thinks on the cycle of the sun and moon as well.

Tzeneth

Great Chapter I’m glad I stayed up waiting for it!!

Dj Schmitt

Tigu wanted to be human, Bi De doesn't. His Chicken form will always be his real self.

Sunny

Well that was a thing that happened and even a nice surprise the t young master is showing respect to an equal

brandon sharky

You know, I might actually like this young master.

Forrestt

Beautiful. And like a true harem mc bi de gets a power up in thr middle of combat. Chefs kiss

Thomas Underwood

Nice great chapter any update on book4 😅

jordan silvester

Bi De doesn't prefer his human form over his chicken form. Tigu does, she views her cat form as less 'her'. Bi De views his human form as a disguise.

swishmcfish

Tftc. So much fun!

Bender

That chapter flew by way too fast! Come on!

Npad11111

Excellent tourney arc! Way to not get bogged down!

Christopher Allen

Well that was just cool as hell!

I wonder if Yin is going to get taught by this, given how she uses the Sun, and like the below comment points out, mirrors him in other ways.

V01D

"Bi De was a creature of Yang, a bloodline tied to the call of the Sun, as a virile defender; yet he cultivated the Moon. The cold light and darkness." I really like this, because it (probably intentionally) mirrors Yin being a creature of the moon who cultivates the sun.

Andrew Denton

\(^-^)/

Story Time Compass

Sheng just got cock-clapped 😊

Palmer Evans

Haha yessss! Go Big D!

ChanceOfFoxin

Damn that was awesome and, dare I say it, worth the wait.

John D Jones

Really liking how this jackass young master is so close to the stereotype but still reasonably written

LenoraeKB

🐓

Allie

Damn I was sorta hoping that Bi De would get something unique to the new moon but a new understanding of the split faces and the moon and sun’s relationship is really awesome

ARSLOTHES

Happy Birthday! And thanks for the fantastic chapter

lockx

Ok, that was awesome

Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland


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